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Title: Chapter 3

I like this story

 Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2015 11:06 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Awwww how romantic

 Reviewer: simplydijah Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2014 07:59 am
Title: Chapter 3

Lindy I love this story. Ari is smart and fiesty. I like that she can think for herself and her a straight shooter in her own right.

Alex needs a bit of work. He seems torn with his situation in a way.

Nice!!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2013 11:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Great read. I can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

Thank you...

 Reviewer: Karmal Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2013 09:29 am
Title: Chapter 1

Wow, the editing here has made this fun story one hundred times better!  I liked that you left out the chat with Nora.  I felt like it gave Alex and Ari a little time to settle which is what a real couple would do after experiencing an exceptional or traumatic event together. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it, Thank you.

 Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2013 03:43 am
Title: Chapter 3

I love it!!!

 Reviewer: JB_Shawty143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2013 02:27 am
Title: Chapter 3

Awww... A beautiful moment. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for updating :D



Author's Response:

hank you for reading!!!

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 02:48 am
Title: Chapter 3

Love the update! Sweet!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you did, thank you.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 02:12 am
Title: Chapter 3

Nice chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you...

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 01:51 am
Title: Chapter 2

So both mates have stalkers and I guess that's where the story will pickup. 



Author's Response:

Scratch the stalkers, they won't even matter in the next few chapters. so stick with me and I'll try to make this an interesting tale. Thanks for reading.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 01:28 am
Title: Chapter 3

Okay, I have to say that Alex has completely won me over with his love and need for Ari.  Get to stepping Nora and I can't wait to read their chat!!  Fabulous!!



Author's Response:

I totally agree Nora has to go and there's hope for Alex. Thank you...

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 12:34 am
Title: Chapter 2

Love the cast.  Alex is getting on my good side now.  I am a Jordin Sparks fan ever since the move "Sparkle"!!  Good stuff!1

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 12:11 am
Title: Chapter 1

NOt liking Alex much right now.   That Nora ho needs to be bitch slapped back to her momma's womb!! 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2013 11:51 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Yes! Keep it up!!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 09:06 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter once again... Can't wait for the next one!!!

 Reviewer: IndianChocolate Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2013 03:55 am
Title: Chapter 2

Loved the update.

 Reviewer: Aiwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2013 02:11 am
Title: Chapter 2

I think this story is really interesting and exiciting.  I'm a sucker for alpha males, especially when it comes to accidental matings.  You wrote some great love scenes!

That said, this story would benefit from editing.  It would me much easier to read.  There was dialogue that wasn't very easy to discern because of ill-placed puntuation and missing words. 

 Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2013 01:22 am
Title: Chapter 2

The story is not bad, but it's hard to get into it due to the spelling mistakes, word omissions, and mixed tenses.

Author's Response:

Beverley, I believe you are correct. I was rewriting certain things I wasn't happy with by the time I had to edit i was tired. I apologize for that, I needed to get it out there, time is something I don't have much of. I will redo/edit the chapter in a few days then upload again. Thank for your comment, at least now I'm aware of what i need to fix.

 Reviewer: Beverley Anonymous starstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2013 12:35 am
Title: Chapter 1

I'm curious as to why they both agreed to the marriage in name only.

Who are these people.



Author's Response:

Nadali, their reasons will be revealed more clearly in chapter 3, unless the muse sends me in another direction but that's the plan so far. I will slowly be reveealing them to you with each chapter, starting with chapter 2, the design is to keep you interested enough to piece together something but not annoy you with lack of info. My point is stick with me and I'll try to make this fun for both of us. thank you for reading & rating.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 01:51 am
Title: Chapter 1

It was short but it was good start!  I'd like to read more.  



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and rating, i will give you more. My time however is dictated by the powers that be, so my updates might temper with your enthusiasm chapter 2 will be up in a few days.

 Reviewer: tens Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 15 2013 03:12 am
Title: Chapter 1

Good start can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi Cdy, thanks for the support, next chapter will be up by 27/07. Yep...I'm commiting moi to that date, I hope lightning doesn't strike for lying. That's the plan though...

 Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 14 2013 04:02 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I love it! It's different start to wolf-shifter stories I've read in the past.  I can't wait to see where you take us.

Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and rating, I love shifter stories too but sometimes you can see certain things coming and I'm trying not to go there, better said than done. I will try to make it as interesting as possible for sanity and your enjoyment.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2013 02:41 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start! More please.

Author's Response:

Baha_malo, thanks for reading, rating, support, next chapter will be up in a few days. I hope to keep you interested,haha...

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2013 01:38 am
Title: Chapter 1

I can't wait for more. Needs some editing but its a great start... I'll be looking daily for this one.



Author's Response:

Indian Chocolate, Yummy? I love all kinds of chocolates. You are so right, it needs a lot of work. I try to get as much errors as I can but editing your own work is tricky like that.I'm glad my issues don't temper with your enoyment though. So a very gigantic thank you for reading and enjoying the story despite all it's  flaws.

 Reviewer: IndianChocolate Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2013 01:06 am
Title: Chapter 1

Great start, nice setup, looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Bookbutterfly, I'll be posting the next chapter in a few days 27/7. Thank you for reading and review, its encouraging.Thanks again.

 Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 13 2013 07:39 am


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