Super cute; I think it's perfect just the way it is.
Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2013 11:16 pm
Can post picture of meagan good as Paris and randy orton as billy they seemingly popped in mind as I read the story. I hope you continue great start.
Author's Response:
You'd have to find a young picture of Orton since Billy is 16 going on 17. Most of Orton's pix look much older than that. LOL
Reviewer: Deadicypink Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 17 2013 11:14 pm
I want more, i want more, I want more lol......loooooooove it
Date: July 17 2013 10:12 pm
Interesting
Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2013 09:45 pm
Omg, Brenda. That was cute! I defintely don't mind you went pass 500 words.
Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2013 08:38 pm
I do not mind you being long winded. LOL
Author's Response:
Thanks! I had to go over it at least 10 times trying to bring it backto 500 words. I failed. LOL
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2013 07:26 pm
Sweet!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2013 07:25 pm
what is this tease you just gave us. Its like the start of a nice love story
Author's Response:
LOL See Jacci's rules on the home page. I guess it was just supposed to be a challenge.
Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2013 06:54 pm
That's it?? Awww come on you can't do this to me. I love your stories. We need more.
Author's Response:
Just following orders here. I just wanted to try my hand at writing something short because I tend to be long winded.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2013 06:33 pm