Reviews For North By South
Title: Chapter 1

Aw, this was sweet.  She thought he'd left her at he altar...what are the odds that both cars break down in the middle of nowhere only to connect the two of them together? I love the way you wrote this; quite different but pleasant to read.



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Thanks Natori!

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2013 07:49 pm

Title: Chapter 1

The cross roads, is what this makes me think of. Layla though a life she so badly wanted wasn't going to happen so she took the road less traveled and walk right back into her loves arms. Sometimes the path not taken is the one that will lead you too the most important journey of your life.



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I wholehearted agree,  Thanks Jovan!

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 08:43 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Aww, so the moral of this story is don't look back...keep going forward. What you 're looking for is up ahead.



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That, and you can't beat God's timing and true love's pull.  Thanks VeMo!

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 02:13 am

Title: Chapter 1

wow...beautiful.



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Thanks Elizablu!

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Date: July 18 2013 09:31 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Awwwwww



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Thanks RedMoon!

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Date: July 18 2013 07:49 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Awwww..



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Thanks Chocolate Girl!

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 07:44 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Awww! I'm glad they found their way to each other.



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Thanks Kitten!

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Date: July 18 2013 07:10 pm

Title: Chapter 1

oooooh.... 



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Thanks Lola!

Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 06:13 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I loved it Joelle Jax! Troy found his lady love and proposed again. How did he find her? Awesome!



Author's Response:

Thanks Pam!  Both Layla and Troy had car trouble and were going for help.  She was trying run from embarrassment, and he was just trying to get to her.  They just happened to meet up along the way.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 02:50 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Oh, man, that was the best one yet!  Keep 'em comin'!



Author's Response:

Thanks Tens!  Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: tens Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 11:26 am

Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful short story..I wish there was more



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I'm considering doing a longer short chronicling the day's events leading up to this moment.  Thanks Bredaway!

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 09:19 am

Title: Chapter 1

Lovely. Succinct. A 500 word gem. 



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Thanks Londongirl!

Reviewer: londongirl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 09:07 am

Title: Chapter 1

she thought he had left her, but he came back for her. Beautiful.



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Thanks Bayoumomma!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 07:39 am

Title: Chapter 1

This is a sweet story. The bride thinks she was jilted at the altar but in reality she wasn't. Loved it, thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thanks Annie!  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: AnnieNathanson Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 06:26 am



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