True talent. They way you wrote this had emotions rushing through me. I can definitely relate. Like Nat, there are too many people to count that I wish where here with me. Beautiful.
Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2013 09:18 pm
This was so sad and sweet. Made me feel lonely for a while. Love how the transportation was nothing special but then the surprise was.
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2013 04:55 am
This was so sad and sweet. Made me feel lonely for a while. Love how the transportation was nothing special but then the surprise was.
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2013 04:55 am
I wish I could just hug and talk to my father one more time......
Reviewer: alex Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2013 03:24 am
You ladies are awesome! I wish I could see my baby sister, she was the last of eight kids and the first one to pass away. She was only 27. Tears in my eyes now.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 18 2013 07:42 pm
This one had me a lil misty eyed. Bravo!
I would love to see my favorite Aunt one last time. :-(
Reviewer: kitten84 Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2013 07:05 pm
...I'm crying. Some days if the house is quiet I can still hear my grandmother singing, she always did it when she was cooking. From time to time I can still smell my grandfather's old church colonge and Old Spice. lol. Lord knows if I had that little red box, I would be back to when they were living and when I was at my most happiest.
You got me good Ms. Brenda, you got me good. Thank you and I loved it,
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2013 07:00 pm
I wish I could see my father.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2013 05:04 pm
I wish I could just hug and talk to my father one more time......
Reviewer: alex Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2013 04:44 pm
This was really sweet. I get the feeling that if I read any more I would've teared up. But yeah I wish I could go back sometimes and spend sometime with my Grandmas Bertha and Bessie Mae. So I see where you were going with this. Great work.
Reviewer: TheDoll Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2013 04:08 pm
This is thought provoking.
Nice job.
Have a Blessed day.
Reviewer: Mocomath Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2013 02:34 pm
I wish I could see my father.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2013 02:26 pm
I liked it. Very moving.
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 18 2013 02:23 pm
I miss my Daddy, I would love to hear his laugh. I really miss his hugs as they were the best. I muss how he believed in me. I also would use the red box to see my Uncles Jeff and Harold again. I would try to save my uncle Jeff from being murdered. Thanks Brenda 1257 for making me cry this morning!
Author's Response:
You're welcome! All of us have someone we wish we could talk to one more time. Sorry about making you cry.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2013 02:22 pm
Really sweet story.I wish I could see my grandfather and my uncle.....I wish I could spend loads of time by talking with them:)
Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2013 02:20 pm