I enjoyed this read because although it started out sad it ended with a very very happy ending
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: March 19 2017 11:57 am
That was so good! I love me a sexy Asian man!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 24 2014 03:58 pm
What a cute little story. Loved it! Hope to see these characters again.
Reviewer: adt2700 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2013 02:39 am
I liked this read and I hope you do bring these characters back. I really would like to know where this nite took Nicky & Richie.
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 12:58 am
ohhh loved it
Reviewer: Vonniiiboo Signed [Report This]Date: August 22 2013 07:02 pm
Im enjoying the story and looking forward to reading more of it.
Just one small detail I see that needs to be corrected, unless Lynn Yoshita is married to a Japanese man, her last name cant be Yoshita, its a Japanese name not Chinese. But this is the first chapter, I may be getting ahead of myself...
I shall read on!
Author's Response:
Lynn's father is Japanese-American. But thanks for reading.
Reviewer: amlaamar Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 24 2013 01:50 am
This was a very nice story! Ienjoyed it a lot.
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2013 12:09 am
Nice story.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2013 08:59 pm
I live this story, it would be nice to how Richie and Nicky handles their relationship. If they get married? Please write a follow up story?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2013 02:56 pm
Wonderful. I enjoyed it.
Have a great day
Reviewer: Mocomath Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2013 01:42 pm
Good story!
Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2013 12:41 pm
Perfect ending. I loved it . They are too cute.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2013 12:29 pm
I love it...Fantastic short story.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2013 09:04 am
Love this story. It was short, sweet and to the point. The chemistry between Rich and Nicky is awesome. 2 thumbs up!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. :)
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2013 08:30 am
Love It!!
Reviewer: keshah Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 23 2013 07:52 am
I wouldn't want to teenager again. I can relate to Nicky.
Great update.
Date: July 23 2013 12:40 am
Love your story, please update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you. I should have the epilogue up hopefully tonight.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 22 2013 08:03 pm
Lovely,
Well, it could be with her having their baby!
Reviewer: Mocomath Signed [Report This]Date: July 22 2013 07:00 pm
Good start. Just as a heads up, "oriental" is offensive. Just say Lynn is Asian. Oriental describes objects, and even that is antiquated.
Author's Response:
You know something. Writing this at like 4 am, I was thinking. That's gonna offend someone. My bad, I was half-awake, kind of "sleep writing". I'll go back and fix it.
Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 21 2013 10:18 pm
love this so far! Enjoying the story please update soon, interested to see what that conco will be like.
Reviewer: rra8831 Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2013 05:32 pm
I like it. The mishap at the prom and now they are seeing one another again. Unfinished business I would say.
thanks.
Reviewer: Mocomath Signed [Report This]Date: July 20 2013 03:29 pm
I think that I'm going to like this story, nice beginning and I definitely can't wait to read more
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: July 20 2013 12:48 pm
I like this so far. Please continue the story. I love Nicole and Rick already....
Reviewer: keshah Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 20 2013 11:06 am
Interesting story. Just a couple of minor comments- 1. if Misty's mother is North African, why would she gravitate to African-Americans in the school? The majority of North Africans read as white in American society are at the very least Arab, so that bit did not make sense to me. Also, if you're going to mention Armenian, why not mention the specific North African country of descent as well- seems incongruent. Also with a name like Rich Machima, wouldn't Rich be of Japanese not Chinese descent by virtue of his last name? Machima sounds more Japanese than Chinese. That's all- keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
I see where you're coming from. But to be technical, North African's are African whether they choose to accept that or not. In the US, they would be considered African-American if born in this country. We call them Arabs in the US when you come from countries like Algeria, Eygpt or Libya. But like I stated previously they're still African. (I mean Canadians are technically North American.) There is still Sudan and the Sudanese are very much considered Black African. I've only ever known a White African to be of caucasian decent like South Africans.
Also it comes from personal experience a lot of Egyptian-American children I've gone to school with or have become friends with typically stick with a black circle of friends.
Rich's last name is something made up. Therefor not necessarily regional. So it is what it is. But thank you for bringing that up.
Reviewer: Rey Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 20 2013 07:33 am