Reviews For What Meets the Eye
Title: Chapter 1

I absolutely love Milo.  He is just too adorable when it comes to Roddick.  He is immature and from reading the story, the only relationship he has had was very toxic.  Hope they can become friends and share before going further.  Can't wait until they both realize they are living in the same building.  Ooohhh maybe they will be next door neighbors.   That would be nice.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2013 01:45 am

Title: Chapter 1

Awww Milo, you den messed up now.  You dealing with a woman you don't want who has jacked up your chances with a woman you do want.  How are you going to convince her you were serious.  Might as well move on buddy because she is not going to give you the time of day.   Look how much work you had to put in for her to show up at the bar.  Boy that deserves the mama hit upside the head move right there.  I mean bringing it back from around the world and SMACK right in the back of the head.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2013 07:45 am

Title: Chapter 1

There's Milo baby.  Whew loved it.  Awe he was serenading her.  But okay she hasn't figured out yet after 3 mos why she is having cravings or getting bigger etc.  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 26 2013 07:32 am

Title: Chapter 1

Please I want more! Good story so far 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 05:54 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Yay, you are back with this story.  I really want to see how Milo is going to break thru that wall Roddrick has about men because of her father and Brian.  Plus, doesn't his family realize the smothering only makes him want to escape more and is Lauren really comparing Roddrick to that skank that sunk Milo so low?  C'mon now.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 04:19 am

Title: Chapter 1

Please continue, I think things are about to heat up, can't wait to see how this dinner goes.  Ooohhhhh so looking forward to the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2013 06:09 pm

Title: Chapter 1

now that we know their backgrounds and they are both survivors, we will understand why these two will be wary when meeting again.  Hopefully the worst is behind them and they can learn from the negative people that were in their lives...sike!! lol   I'm ready for Jade and even Rodd. crazy daddy to come back into the picture. 



Author's Response:

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Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 09:10 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Rodderick broke Milo off a piece and now she maybe pregnant.  This story has begun with bang!!



Author's Response:

Wham Bam Thank you Ma'am =)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 04:06 am

Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Loved it! But her name is so masculine it's throwing me off. I keep waiting for the part where it says she had a sex change . 



Author's Response:

I don't think I should have laughed as hard as I did at your comment. Don't start giving me ideas =)

But yes, I'm a huge lover of masculine names for women so you may find more as time goes on and if I write more 

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 01:30 am

Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic start! Can't wait to see what will happen next! When are they going to see each other again?



Author's Response:

Thank you! We will be seeing how this thing called fate works out for them ;) There's quite a bit in store for them....

Reviewer: AnnieNathanson Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2013 07:22 pm



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