Reviews For What Meets the Eye
Title: Chapter 5

Still very much interested in the story. The other aspects of the main storyline provide a good foundation for these characters and highlights where they are in life but i must admit that i would love to see more Rodderick/Milo moments. For some reason, Rodderick seems to bring out the best in Milo, even though they've only had snippets of conversing.  Milo exudes confidence when in her company and much more masculine/mature than his twenty-two years; it's very sexy!

Forget Brian, he's her much needed past, her present - hopefully- will become a permanent part of her ever-growing future. Rodderick should've come clean with Lauren; she could've at least covered by saying, 'yeah, i saw him at the wedding but didn't know who he was', which would've been the truth without divulging more truths about their passionate encounter. Now I fear Lauren will accuse him of being 'a creep' and how will that affect Milo? However, as Milo once thought to himself and I tend to believe in his resolve: he's grown since those days of darkness. That is his past. Unbeknowst to him, he has a better future to look forward to.

Thanks for the substantial updates, this story is cooler than a fan! Great job!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 23 2013 01:07 am

Title: Chapter 5

Welcome back,  great update. Missed Milo in it though think I like him.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 05:15 pm



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