I thought this would be a typical forgiving the bully, but i really like how u handled how Mayte got to exact her revenge, I was a bullied kid and i wished i could have had sweet revenge on the bullies, but this is real life and it didn't happened, so i live vicariously thru Mayte, thankyou.
Thank you honey for all the love. But I know exactly how you feel,I was bullied as well, it sucks and kids can be mean as hell sometimes, so I had to share Mayte's story, which may or may not been based off of an experience I had with a high school bully myself. Hehe. But again thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it.Reviewer: dounome Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 11:03 pm
I love this story!! But HOLD UP!!!!! Ain't Jason ass getting married????? Hmmmmmm!!
Oh no, Jason is single. The night he got the dance at the bar, it was his birthday. I am planning on getting more in depth with Jason and Montana in another story so keep an eye out, and thank you for reading.Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 05:36 pm
Now its official they are a couple and not just for sexing Jason and Montana huh? Good stuff. Waiting patiently for the epilogue.
Thank you dear. Yes they've finally gotten over themselves and decided to date. Hope to have that epilogue part up tonight if time permits.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 03:04 pm
I love this story, so sad to see it end. This will forever be one of my favorites.
Aww. That actually makes me feel good, thank you so much and I appreciate all the love. Don't fret, you gotta read the epilogue, I got one more trick up my sleeve with these two.Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 01:47 pm
So the girl was regular half-Mexican and half Black girl that was made feel ugly before and then bleached her hair blonde and now is hot? How...empowering for WOC...Just change to look like the s-called typical white skinny girl and then you will be loved.
When I was talking about her feeling sexy, I was refering to her body, not her hair. The hair was something that she did to make her style a little funky. As a woman of color sometimes our curves aren't appreciated like that. Why wouldn't be able wear our hair however we choose and be empowered. Embrace your ethnicity regardless of how we wear our hair. But not to meantion, Derek never teased her about her being of color. He teased her because she looked boyish with her hand-me-downs. Hell he's not white either. But thanks for reading.Reviewer: Hmmm Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 02:28 pm
One more chapter left?!?! Well damn, you just gonna cut the story short why don't cha just when it was getting gOod! ( playfully growling lol.) Well I have to say honey I really like this chapter specially the paintball gun in the football stadium at their old high school. (Nice touch must say :)) I'm just happy she let bygones be bygones and let shit go. Because she finally see/got Derek for that dream guy she always wanted. When this story ends hope to see more of your stories. So update sweetheart I aint geting any younger lol j/k...But seriously UPDATE!Reviewer: Moonlight Desires Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2013 10:39 pm
Hotness! I'm loving this story. I'm glad they buried the hatchet. And Derek actually let her shoot him??! Lol At least she got all that out of her. I can't wait to read the update on how their relationship progresses. Oh and your Spanish is really good! Awesome job, :)Reviewer: partial2passion Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 29 2013 10:12 pm
Derek didn't suffer enough before she broke him off a piece. I have to say that I am disappointed in Mayte as Derek hadn't quite earned her good loving. Derek's sperm donor was waste but he has done well for himself. Mayte had love but she chooses not to live up to full potential, really a stripper! Good stuff!
Hey you gotta keep in mind, she had the hots for him back then. Even through the bullcrap she still had a soft spot for him. It took a lot for her not to sleep with him the night of the beating lol. But they've still got somethings to work out. Thank you for reading :)Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2013 04:44 pm