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Title: Chapter 1

So disappointing. Why is everyone nowadays trying to normalize extra-marital affairs? He cheated on her dumdass for FIVE YEARS she still gave him a second chance. Seriously? Why are the standards so low for marriage? He could've gotten the mistress pregnant or get a disease for all we know. For FIVE YEARS, he felt no remorse, no guilt until the moron decided to briefly leave him. Yeah! He was sooooo sorry. I'm sure he regretted boning the young thing and spend his hard-earned money on her too. Not.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 22 2017 02:34 am

Title: Chapter 1

Nicley done!

Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 02:20 am

Title: Chapter 1

That great story....this happens so much but little of the reconcillation

 

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2013 08:57 pm

Title: Chapter 1

While I recognize this story is supposed to be about forgiveness and renewal, I have a hard time with her waiting 5 YEARS to confront him about his cheating.

If he has always come back home smelling like the other woman so that she's known from the beginning he was cheating, what made this time different? Her taking him back after such a long relationship is a little hard to swallow. 5 years is not a fling or a 'mistake'. It's a deliberate choice.

And really, is having a long time mistress really part of being a 'good father'--especially of boys.  Because to me that just teaches them by your example that it is okay to devalue, disrespect your wife; that it's okay to lie/cheat in your relationships as long as your partner doesn't confront you about it. That it's alright to potentially endanger your spouse ('cause was he even using protection while he was with this woman, or when he was 'doing his duty' by his wife?).

I could understand her forgiving him and allowing him a place in her life in so far as it pertained to co-parenting, but it's difficult to imagine having enough emotional trust in him to make the marriage work; especially since there is absolutely no explanation offered for his infidelity other than "I was blinded by selfishness...".  What is there to prevent him from falling into another pit of selfishness?



Author's Response:

The Relationship between Charles and his son is seperate from his relationship with his mistress the only one that knew of his infidelity was Liz. They live a very public life so Charles was careful but what wife isn't atunned to her husband? She knew she tried to endure and then she decided she had enough with being ill treated. However she chose not to allow anoother woman take what she built. This is a one shot meant to evoke thought so i appreciate your review.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 23 2013 03:25 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Now usually, I'm more of the "Leave him in the dust, take him for his money, you can do better, WOMAN!" type of person, but I like this. I really did.

Reviewer: TooMuchEnnui Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2013 06:57 am

Title: Chapter 1

She handled that waaayyy better than I would have. Much respect for even imagining a woman that put together. Bravo!

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2013 03:54 am

Title: Chapter 1

It was not the first time he came home smelling of another woman, especially after five years with the same woman. I just can't see why she broke or took him back, again five years is a long time.
A cheater is someone who wants the partner dead. If disease doesn't get the person being cheated on, the person could end up the victim of a fatal attraction.
Sorry, but no vagina or penis is worth a life.
Great story though, gives food for thought.

Reviewer: Drbw Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 08:12 am

Title: Chapter 1

Good story.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 04:30 am

Title: Chapter 1

I love tis story. Am glad the way it turned out. It reminds us that sometimes you can work your way back to each other after an infidelity, it takes time but it is possible. Am glad she took the time to live on her own and be independent for a while to show him that she can survive on her own while eh had to come groveling back. Sometimes I think men do these things because women allow them to get away with it lol.

Reviewer: klarybelle Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 02:42 am

Title: Chapter 1

Seriously? for 5 years? and he leaves the mistress after all he did for her? this story wants to make me cry, the wife being weak. don't like women being so dumb in love, he's a serial cheater and will only find another. No amount of love in the beginning can handle that type of betrayal, no in reality i have seen dumb love like that.It's not me btw lol.

Reviewer: dounome Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 08:42 pm

Title: Chapter 1

That was so cute! I swear i got teary eyed. The emotion was well written.

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 05:57 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I am trying to understand why she waited five years to confront the asshole? A man who cheats is neither a good husband or a good father! Just like a wife who cheats isn't a good wife or mother! Such goodness!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 03:06 pm

Title: Chapter 1

What an asshole!! You cheat she leacws abd you want her to have sex wirh you. Charlie you should feel blessed that she took your cheating ass back. That ho had the nerve enough to show ip at her home where there were children present and she cried. Bitch please!  Thus was good!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 02:39 pm

Title: Chapter 1

This was an excellent story. 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 12:33 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Wow, intense and sensual. I love the simplicity and yet wanted it to last longer. LOL! Great job, very good writing. Please post more work soon :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 11:33 am

Title: Chapter 1

I can't believe that trick came to see the wife. I tell you what, that red hair would be no more.

Not only did he cheat but he could've easily brought home a disease to Liz. I'm Liz became her own woman again. Hopefully, he's learned his lesson. His hard to trust someone who has betrayed you.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 10:00 am

Title: Chapter 1

She can't get a divorce because they are too public/rich, then she wants out. She has known about his affair since it began and continued on with her sham of a marriage, but his coming home late after blowing her off (which by her own admission is the norm) is the last straw. She had to stay married for the kids, then she didn't.  

Holy contradictions, Batman! Her actions really undermined the setup for me. They would maybe make more sense if they didn't happen so suddenly given she had no real motivation for change. 

Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 06:46 am

Title: Chapter 1

It's refreshing that the white guy isn't the perfect knight in shining armour, saving her from evil black guy..... That we see too much of. Although I feel it was rushed, I wish I experienced their pain and awkwardness more so I could connect emotionally. 

Reviewer: Sleek Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 06:42 am

Title: Chapter 1

Pretty good story. I'm glad she forgave him, thanks for telling a story abut a couple who struggled but came out together in the end.

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 05:27 am

Title: Chapter 1

SO GOOD! I love how you set up the story. 

Reviewer: Daddyprincess Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 05:20 am

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Sweet story!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 05:16 am

Title: Chapter 1

That was short and sweet.

Had a lot of life lessons in this story.

Reviewer: Mocomath Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 04:57 am

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I very much liked the story, and would have absolutely loved it had she made an effort to move on with somene new before letting him back into her life.

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 04:48 am



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