Reviews For Adonis
Title: Chapter 5

An update soon? Please?

Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 01:41 am

Title: Chapter 5

I like these cute little gifs at the end! Gives us a face to put with certain moments.

Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2013 06:50 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I really like this story! I just wish the chapters were longer

Reviewer: Hanna Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2013 06:06 pm

Title: The Cast

Awwww he is just to cute. :)

Reviewer: Ayoo_Joi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2013 04:36 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I like this tale of yours, I will be looking for more!

Reviewer: KnightPhall Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19 2013 07:42 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Cute, cute, cute! More please and soon :)

Reviewer: writinglass Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19 2013 11:08 am

Title: Chapter 5

So Adonis says that he can do anything that a human male can do, but can he impregnate Jayne?  If not then he is telling a falsehood.  Damn that man is fine, I want one of my very own!!  It's interesting that he said that he believes that it was programmed into him, for a android I find that very intriguing as it be automatic knowledge that he can access readily.  Fascinating?!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2013 07:29 am

Title: Chapter 4

Lol, guuurrrrl. You kill me with these gifs at the end. I guess coz they're unexpected, so I get a good lol out of them!  This is so cute! Go on! Write more! I want a full blown story outta this!! I'm excited!

Reviewer: TooMuchEnnui Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 04:52 am

Title: Chapter 4

Callie is working my last nerve but she does have a point. Adonis is not a man and I am worried about Jayne developing feelings for Adonis.  Why hasn't Jayne had a real relationship or maybe the question should be why is she afraid of real men? She is uncomfortable with Adonis looking at her body and with bothel kissing and touching. Jayne is mistaking Adonis is fine with tendencies to have cute behaviors. You have my morning! 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2013 02:01 pm

Title: Chapter 4

LOL! He is cute, I love him already. I can't wait for the next post, I hope there is more Adonis and Jayne and less of her bitchy, so-called friend Callie.

Great job, please post more soon :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2013 10:49 am

Title: Chapter 4

Awesome update!!  I don't like Callie I understand that she is just trying to look out for her, but she doesn't have to a asshole about it. but anyway Adonis is so damn cute!!

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2013 10:35 am

Title: Chapter 4

These gifs!!! You're killing me :D So good. I'm really looking forward to them getting out and seeing the world. His reactions to things are really cute!

Reviewer: writinglass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2013 09:08 am

Title: The Cast

As a fan of k- & j-dramas, I'm straight geeking out over this story ^_^. Miura Haruma meets Absolute Boyfriend, this is going to be fun. More please.

Author's Response:

Really?! 

I thought I was the only one! Acutally I just finished his latest drama Last Cinderella and that was my inspiration for this story. 

Reviewer: Cereal Lurker Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2013 07:49 am

Title: Chapter 2

Cute, different.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2013 02:29 am

Title: The Cast

So far so good. I can't wait to see what else Adonis wants to touch:)



Author's Response:

We shall see.....

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2013 07:37 pm

Title: The Cast

Adonis is a little cutie.



Author's Response:

I know! I don't know who could deny a such a cutie pie. 

Reviewer: Die A Mouse Death Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2013 06:21 pm

Title: Chapter 3

These gifs at the end are too much! He just keeps getting more adorable.



Author's Response:

The gifs do help. :D 

I love the adorable innocent Adonis. I want my own personal Adonis now! *_*

Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2013 02:29 am

Title: Chapter 3

Love it, I want more lol!! 

Reviewer: Ding ding Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2013 12:06 am

Title: Chapter 3

I like this :) keep updating

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 05:41 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Oh good lawd!!!! I can't... It's just to much. Aww!!! More updates like stat! :D 

P.S. - GIFs are very apprecited! Tehe.

Reviewer: writinglass Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 09:29 am

Title: Chapter 3

I wouldn't have screamed either but Jayne seems to be really repressed.  That man is hella fine!!!  He could touch me whereever he choose.  Why didn't Jayne read the instructions?  It seems as though that Adonis is attracted Jayne but he won't be getting any anytime soon.  Jayne is scared of real man and sex, my only hope that she grows in her womanhood from this experience and never forgets that Adonis is not a real man!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 07:59 am

Title: Chapter 3

He is to cute!!! Now I want one!! Loving this!!

Keep them coming!!  

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 07:37 am

Title: Chapter 2

Awwwwww, he's adorable!



Author's Response:

Ain't he precious??? I love Miura Haruma he's just so...gorgeous!

Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 06:01 am

Title: Chapter 2

oooooh he is adorbs! thanks for updating! yay!!

Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 02:29 am

Title: Chapter 2

Oh My God! He's adorable. And a blowjob? Really? Too funny. Continue on :)



Author's Response:

Yea...there is a backstory to that whole blow job thing. Lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

Reviewer: writinglass Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 12:43 am



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