I'm late... but this was an amazing story.
Eshan's character and devotion was refreshing and the real ness of Joss and Eshan's love was sweet. Thanks for this beautiful story!
Reviewer: HeyDre Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2020 08:05 pm
No Joss !! Don't say goodbye
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2020 02:41 pm
Sahirah is so stupid
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2020 12:45 pm
She should press charges against Chris
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2020 12:40 pm
You should not trust her
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2020 12:28 pm
Such a beautifully written tale of romantic love...I love that the story was about the love between Eshan and Joss...we often get so caught up in the physical that we forget what is really important...for me, love makes the world go round...thanks for the joy you provide in writing about real love...be blessed...
Author's Response:
Thanks jahchannah!!! Eshan and Joss are my babies. I so enjoyed telling their story and hope to go back and spend some time revising and possibly expanding their story.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: March 26 2016 01:13 am
Love this story. This is my second time reading it and I am enjoying as much as the first.
Author's Response:
Thanks avidreadernotwriter! Joss and Eshan are near and dear to my heart, and it does said heart good to know you've enjoyed their story : )
Reviewer: Avidreadernotwriter Signed [Report This]Date: February 02 2016 04:37 am
I loved this!! It was amazing read it all in one sitting haha. Well written wasn't rushed at all. I'm so glad everything worked out in the end. X😊
Author's Response:
Thanks Loop! So happy to know you enjoyed Joss and Eshan's story.
Reviewer: Loop Signed
[Report This]Date: January 03 2016 01:34 pm
Very sweet story!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 05 2015 02:35 pm
Joelle Jax, you are a WONDER! Beautiful story!
Author's Response:
Thanks Jaye Sims!
Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2015 03:34 pm
This was beautiful. I felt eveey emotion they felt. Wonderful job!!!
Reviewer: MissTruth Signed [Report This]Date: September 29 2014 10:42 pm
Lovely end to a great story - thank you!
Author's Response:
Thanks Ammalicious. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: ammalicious Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2014 10:51 am
Loved the bit with spider entrails - too funny!i
Reviewer: ammalicious Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2014 06:14 am
What a beautiful story! I was moved to tears by Joss and Eshan's love. I loved Mrs. Pearl. Perfect balance of drama and humor.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I cried!
Reviewer: I cried.... Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 01 2014 08:39 am
Bravo!!!! This was a amazing story. It kept my interest through the entire story. You are a excellent writer and I can see this story being published if you so chose for it to be.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Tea!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: tea Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 20 2014 03:03 pm
Okay I know it's a trip to Spain a place I want to go but lady, you know how to end a story. This brought joy to me and for that I'm happy. Thank you so much. I really enjoyed reading. I love what you did with Joss' character and that you took her on a journey around the world. That is so wonderful. I'm happy you didn't have her sit at home roaming around the house like the living dead. You gave Joss a realy life and made her a strong person who didn't compromise her integrity. Eshan, certianlly knows how to ask a woman to marry him. He's such a sweetheart. As for Hirah, yes, she deserves what she got. Have I said IDIOT yet about her? *SMH*. Wonderful Joelle, I really enjoyed this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the lovely review, and for reading, Caribbean Fire! As always, I enjoyed your insight. And I'm so happy you enjoyed my little tale.
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: January 27 2014 05:51 am
Joss, that was the best thing you've ever done for the both of them. Hirah is such a tramp and I still don't feel sorry for her. She did everything she could to be with this idiot and now is when she's realizing that he really doesn't want anything to do with her? Brain dead. And now she feels bad that she did what she did to Eshan, that may have caused him Joss? She is such a....if I was Eshan, I would disown her. Should be very easy. Joss, keep on moving. She was never your friend.
Author's Response:
Sahirah is painfully clueless and selfish. And you're right, she was never a friend to Joss. Chris was too much of a priority for that. Eshan doesn't have to worry about punishing her with disownment. Fate will take care of the punitives. Thanks Caribbean Fire!
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: January 27 2014 05:15 am
I stopped breathing for a moment there. She didn't? She really, really didn't. Hirah is such a slut...a wench. I have nothing to say. She's the type of friend that you forgive from a far and never look back to again. Joss and Eshan will find a way. Wonderful emotional chapter.
Author's Response:
Join the Sahirah lynch mob. The members are many. Poor Joss and Eshan.
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: January 27 2014 05:12 am
Have I said yet that I love Pearl? Well I do. That's a mother who loves her child if I ever did see one. I'm so happy that she is willing to allow Joss to explore the feelings she is having for Eshan and that Eshan, what a man, what a man, what a man? I do believe that's a Salt 'N Peppa song...back in my heathen days...LMAO. Well he is a MAN. Wow! To go to her mother and tell her how he feels about her daughter and for him to break his rules and follow the respectful ways of Joss' culture and take her out on a date after asking permission...tingling. I love it. I really, really do. This was so good. Very, very good. Wow!
Author's Response:
Between you and SWV Reunited, I'm having to dust off my greatest of the 90's collection. :D Eshan definitely earned a serenade of What A Man. I just love him. Thanks Caribbean Fire!
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: January 27 2014 05:10 am
I agree with Chris, that IDIOT is stupid enough to tell on her cousin and she really thinks that he loves him. I don't know what words can be said about that level of stupidity. I am proud of Joss that she ripped her properly. While I like that Joss and Eshan's relationship is growing, I wish they were able to have their relationship without IDIOT around...she's like the Black Hole when it come to being stupid. Funny how they are planning on sending her to school so they can still be around each other...nice planning.
Author's Response:
Sahirah is a double edged sword. She is the bane of their romantic existence on one hand and the unwitting facilitator on the other. What to do with a problem like Sahirah? You'll soon see. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Caribbean Fire!
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2014 08:15 am
Hot! Hot! Hot! Eshan...Hot! I have nothing to say about IDIOT! and Joss it took ya long enough to rip her. Did I mention HOT? Well done!
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks!!!
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2014 07:55 am
That is so true Eshan, you no longer have an excuse. Hirah, okay, officially an IDIOT! That girl is not a friend. She is simple minded and such an idiot...she's the type of person who would catch a disease from Chris and say its other women, not him for sleeping around unprotected. IDIOT! Joss, you're the best for doing what you did. I applaud you for sticking with you man and defending him for coming to your defense.
Author's Response:
I cosign everything you said. Thanks Caribbean Fire!!!
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2014 03:16 am
Testing if you get this review.
Author's Response:
Got it!
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous
[Report This]Date: January 04 2014 09:06 pm