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Title: Diva

I have no idea how I overlooked this story, but now I absolutely love it.  Definitely looking forward to more.   

Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2017 11:44 pm

Title: Diva

I know im too laye but i really wish there was a next chapter

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2017 08:25 am

Title: Diva

Serves Ethan right. Keep bringing the updates, can't wait for him tomsquirm some more 

Reviewer: bookwriter86 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 28 2016 03:33 am

Title: Diva

Every time I read the last part, I get madder at Ethan.  Girl, move on...he has.  The man lets his mom help destroy his marriage and then takes us with the woman she approves of.  The woman basically just said she tolerates your child and you don't blink an eye? 

I hope you put Ethan through some serious hoops in trying to win her back and I hope Aurora (since she is so beautiful and all) opens up and satrts dating.  Let Ethan jog by and see a sports car in the driveway one morning--even if the guy slept on the sofa.



Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2016 02:36 am

Title: Diva

Absolutely loved it.  She slayed as soon as she stepped thru the door.  Loved the way she was throwing them digs at Ethan and at this point with Ethan heaping praise and affection on Katherine in her face when he considers her career a joke, as nothing serious while his career-driven girlfriend is wearing her clothes to make her look good, Puhleese Ethan.  Ethan need some help and honestly I don't want Aurora pining over him at all. I hope Alma let it slip that she stayed over and he sexed her up so that will give Aurora the unfortunately heartbreak needed to move on.  Once he knows she is REALLY moving on from him, he going to have a coming to Jesus moment.  But I hope he suffers a little more.  Maybe that's the sadistic devil on my shoulder.  He see's her out and smiling and being affectionate with someone other than him.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2016 10:12 pm

Title: Diva

Right now all I'm thinking is - fuckkkkkk youuuuu Ethan 😫😫 

aurora would feel so cut watching their interactions and listening to him praise Katherine when he belittled her at one point. That last part... Man she got him good. I love her sooooooo much. She made a name for herself! Fuck everyone else who didn't think big of her dreams. I love her love her. 

Plesse don't leave me hanging... I love this xx 

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 03:41 pm

Title: Diva

I can't stand Katherine.  Get rid of her Ethan.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 12:25 am

Title: Characters

It's about time you updated! Can't wait to you get to the present. Now that's going to be drama.

The other reviewer is right. Take a moment to read before you post and edit as needed.

Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2016 01:27 am

Title: Diva

Needpic of bad ass Alma.

I know Aurora is hurting to see him grab Katherine hand and heap praise upon her.  Way pass time for Aurora to make hersef available to date

 I would poiitely wish ethan the best and tell him it is time for me to let go of the past and move on, too.  No man wants to know their child will have another male figure in their life.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2016 03:44 pm

Title: Characters

I think Caroline isn't as clever as she thinks. Does she assume that Katherine will quit her job, stay home and pop out the grandbabies? I need to have a ringside seat when Caroline learns she's been betting on the wrong horse! Bwahahaha!

but more importantly, what did Aurora DO to him, that has mother and son so up in arms? Was she unfaithful? Or did she just leave? 

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2016 07:48 am

Title: Diva

The will/well can be annoying but i hope there is another update sooner than later

Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2016 03:07 am

Title: Diva

Ethan grow a brain and a pair.

Katherine go back to Caroline bragging on Aurora and watch how fast that dragon turns on you.

Alma needs to let it slip that Katherine spent the night and did the dirty with Percy in house.

Aurora go get yourself a man and some...

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2016 02:40 am

Title: Diva

Aurora is the BOSS. This gave me LIFE. So Ethan, you're going to hook up with a chick who can't be bothered with your child when you have your child over, especially if you marry this chick. Smart, Bro, real Smart.

This was worth the wait, Chica.

Author's Response:

Yes, Aurora is the Boss. She had to be shady boots towards Ethan. 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2016 12:15 am

Title: Diva

I'm so happy you're back updating. I'm so happy that aurora is putting Ethan in his place.

Reviewer: tiffany37 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2016 11:18 pm

Title: Diva

Yes aurora get him! She that chick that be causin all this conversation, cause she abot slay the other chick and he is being eliminated! Yasss! You not putting your money where yo mouth is Ethan! And mama e needs to sit down, she biased as a skillet trying to lose aint gonna loose no weight. His mama chose the wrong woman, cause she a fan, she selfish, and she got a busy job that for one Ethan didnt give Aurora a chance to live her dreams but...(Sips tea and smacks lips) i thot you eidnt want a woman who was a career strived woman? #yoassshouldvestayedeithauroranowshegotyoumessedthefuqup! 

Im sorry i went ghetto and im team Aurora. Shiiiid, she dont wont kids?! Thats strike 1 for me, she thought aurora is ugly? Strike 2, and homegirl dont like her Nd cooks auroras fav dinner? Strike three, oh miss persephone (i probably messed the whole name up) is gonna end up making ethan go back to Aurora cause he stay catching feeling for ha mama. 

Author's Response:

Yasssss!!! Aurora was throwing shade at Ethan in all the right directions. He forgot he was messing with a bad bitch and was a savage. His going to come to his senses real soon. 

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2016 10:17 pm

Title: Characters

I would have loved to have read this story, since TV/movies have failed me and will continue so, but I just can't because of the leading lady. Sorry. : (

Reviewer: Kimikae Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2016 09:19 pm

Title: Ring the Alarm

Love this ! 

Reviewer: Minabobina Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2016 10:54 am

Title: Ring the Alarm

I'm not feeling Ethan right now.  He is able to sex up another woman in his home with his daughter present but get mad over a mythical guy sexing up his ex-wife?  Uh no.  Then he can't stand up to his momma. I don't mind you love and care for your mother but her blatant disrespect to your spouse and sister-in-law, seriously.  I'm pissed at Ethan and Ian for making their significant others come to thus BS.  I'm sorry if I was Aurora I would find someone else successful who could lay the pipe.  I don't need an early grave dying of a stroke because of this stress, unnecessary stress mind you.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 14 2016 07:32 pm

Title: Ring the Alarm

Only thing I have an issue with in all this is how Ethan had his girlfriend around his daughter prior to discussing it with Aurora. That's blatantly disrespectful and an idiotic. Of course she would be pissed. To add insult to injury... he has sex with the woman while his daughter is visiting. The hell...? Like you couldn't keep it in your pants until your kid went back home? I dunno... I'm team Alma. She seems to be the person who has the most sense.

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2016 01:07 pm

Title: Ring the Alarm

So glad this has been updated, re-read the story again loads as I love this story. Can't wait to find out what happens. Best New Years gift.

Reviewer: spyan Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2016 06:15 am

Title: Ring the Alarm

I'm lost... This began with a perceived one-night stand. I've been waiting for it; however, its continued with the back story. You've mentioned the last chapter is coming, but when are things between them going to be resolved. It obviously wasn't before they slept together.

This story is good and has potential to be great, but you need an editor. At times, I had to reread or pause to capture your meaning or direction.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. In the last chapter I never mentioned it was I'm lost. These four chapters that's coming up is going to lead to the one night stand. However, I needed to build up to that as well established characters and why they've broken up, because it plays a major role in the coming chapters. Mostly none of their issues are going to be resolved before the one night stand. Ethan is going to learn how Aurora felt during their marriage with Katherine and Aurora is going to learn to not take on all the blame for the ending of their relationship. When I post the other chapters I hope it will clear up any confusion. 

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2016 12:50 am

Title: Ring the Alarm

Yes!!! I am so happy to see this story back on Valent. I can't wait to see more of your work. Please post more soon :)



Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2016 08:08 am

Title: Ring the Alarm

Thank you.  Time for Aurora to meet someone, too and then they could double date.  

So, I am thinking Aurora will meet Catherine (with a 'K') and realize Ethan has chosen his mom to date.  Thank goodness Ian recognizes what mommie dearest has been doing and chose his wife--now to knock some sense into Ethan.

If Ethan can have hot sex and be happy with Catherine with a K, why not ask her to marry him?  I know he and Aurora have been divorced for two yrs but he has no problem sticking it to someone else and that just feels like cheating to me.  I for one am glad Aurora is ready to move on, even though I don't believe it.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2016 04:44 am

Title: Characters

Please please please,update this story. I love this story and keep hoping you'll update it soon

Reviewer: spyan Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2015 11:22 pm

Title: Greenlight

Update please!!!!!  This is great!  I want to know how they ended up in bed together adn how the two boys are going to handle their meddling mother...pussies.

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2015 08:49 pm

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