Where in the Heck, can I order one of those? I like the way Alfred thinks! Brenda, I can see this is going to be a VERY ENJOYABLE RIDE, let me buckle my seat belt!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed
[Report This]Date: October 09 2013 02:16 pm
The answer is no because 2 alphas just don't mix, however threesomes do happen for a time and then the jealousy kicks in but in this case it will kick in worse.
Kim
Author's Response:
Well Thomas is no Alpha. He's a Beta which is why he's so laid back. Things will get clearer as we move along.
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: October 03 2013 04:29 am
As usual great job and completely unexpected. Loving it.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: October 03 2013 02:20 am
I'm sorry, but am I the only one who just wants Thomas gone!? Hurting poor Alfies feelings like that..
Reviewer: TooMuchEnnui Signed [Report This]Date: October 03 2013 02:13 am
I don't like Selena at all. I feel so bad for Alfred sometimes I wonder why she created him in the first place if she knew she would want a "real" man in the end. I could be viewing this all wrong probably because I really like Alfred, and hate that he is being used. I wish he could make a choice and date other women, then Selena would know how it feels. Why save him if she wants to be with Thomas? I do not like Thomas and he came across really smug when talking to Alfred. It seems as if he said that Alfred could never really be Selena's number one because Alfred can not give her everything that she needs as a human.
I'm still reading because I find this story interesting and different. I normally am fine with a threesome story but not for this story, all I like right now is Alfred and if Alfred is truly an alpha that could not work long term. I feel like a plane crash is about to happen and I can't stop watching lol
If you decide that Thomas and Selena should have sex, can you put a warning up so that I can skip it. I hope that doesn't happen though but with Selena's character I could see it happening. She could always adapt a child, not all human men can give you a child.
I just love Alfred, I feel so bad for him :(
Update Soon!!
Author's Response:
OK, I can see that the readers feel that Alfred is getting a raw deal, but that's not the case. Thomas does NOT want to take Alfred from Selena. Selena is NOT planning to cheat on Alfred with Thomas. There's something else going on and I don't want to give it away. Thomas is attracted to Selena but he's holding back out of respect for Alfred. Selena does think Thomas is cute, but she's committed to Alfred. Women look but that doesn't mean that they cross the line. A woman can admire a man and be attracted tohim but she doesn't have to act on it.
I will give a few clues because it's going to take several chapters for you to understand what's going on. Thomas is driven to this because of his life with his father and Charles. The loss of his father was traumatic for him. His father was a brilliant man who created androids to help people. Thomas wants to follow in his father's footsteps and he wants to help the androids achieve their hearts greatest desire. (Hint hint) and he thinks he's found a way to do it.
Thats all for now. Stay with me and stay turned.
Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed [Report This]Date: October 02 2013 09:19 pm
Very interesting where this is going. I have to admit I am on the Team Alfred side :-) I just want to see him come out on top. I am rooting for his HEA with Selena. I'd love it if they could crack this thing and they could end up together. Though I know he isn't human and that makes for some hard times ahead! Great story!
Author's Response:
Stay tuned. There is a method to Thoms madness. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: GeorgiaP Signed [Report This]Date: October 02 2013 07:36 pm
Okay I'm a little confused here. So basicly what Thomas is suggesting is for them to have like a trio relationship? So Selena will have two man then? I know that Alfred is not human but I still think its not fair to him. And the more I look at it if this the way things are going to be. Then there really is no point in then doing all of this to keep Alfred alive. Three is a crowed. And this can be a problem. And why would a young man like Thomas waste his time with a woman who already chose a robot over him. And where he may never be number one. But then again i still think that Selena doesn't really seem to care about Alfred feelings. But mayb its just me. Thia whole situacion between those three is kind of confusing. But more so for Alfred because it seems as if he still don't understand or know what to think about them or what Thomas intentions are concerning Selena.
Author's Response:
Now I know it may seem confusing, but Thomas has a plan. He's not looking to replace Alfred. Three may be a crowd in some situations, but I will say that Thomas is thinking about the future. (I don't want to let the cat out of the bag just yet). Hang in there, it's all going to come out eventually.
Reviewer: ssandra Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 02 2013 07:34 pm
Amazing update. So much tension between Alfred and Thomas. Can't wait to see the outcome.
Reviewer: gentlehaikus Signed [Report This]Date: October 02 2013 07:08 pm
and the plot thickens!!! i have no idea whats going to happen next and i LOVE it!!!!! more please!!!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 02 2013 06:52 pm
Gosh, this situation is getting very complicated! On the one hand I'm rooting for Alfred, but he is not human, and if Selena ever hopes to have a family of her own, i.e. kids, she is going to need a real man...I'm so torn...lol.
Loved the update!
Author's Response:
There is a method to Thomas madness. Continue to root for Alfred. Thomas does NOT want to take her from Alfred which a lot of people think is happening. Don't be torn. Lest I reveal too much, I will stop here. I will say Thomas was greatly influenced by the time he had with his father and the time he had with Charles and this is the driving force behind his new inventention at Antex. More is coming!
Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed [Report This]Date: October 02 2013 06:42 pm
I'm still not liking Selena. She is not being honest with Alfred and she is eye fucking Thomas in front of him. While a lot of things that Thomas said is true. I do think he is being a little too cocky. He made it sound as if Alfred will only be the back up for if he screw things up with Selena. And if this is the way they are going to be then there is no point in helping Alfred. And maybe I'm being annoying and dramatic, but the age difference between Thomas and Selena bothers me.
Author's Response:
I can truly say that you have misinterpreted what I was trying to convey, so I'm sorry about that. Basically Thomas wasn't trying to be cocky. He wanted Alfred to undestand why he wasn't jealous of him and is willing to share Selena. He wasn't saying that Alfred was backup in case he screws up. Selena has already chosen Alfred over him. What he was saying was that he knows that he's not perfect and will screw up because he's human but that Selena needs human interaction.
I'm setting things up for future chapters so I won't go into this too deep, but there is a method to Thomas madness. He wants to be accepted by Alfred and for him to be comfortable with the three of them being together before he even pursues Selena. As long as Alfred is against it, he won't move forward.
As for the age difference, yes he is young at 22 and Selena being 31 may seem like a huge difference to some, but not to others. Both are still adults.
Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: me Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 02 2013 06:27 pm
Another fantastic update!!!
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: October 02 2013 04:21 pm
ooh yum!!! I really love this story. And would somebody soon, please put Anne Flemming into a headlock?
Reviewer: Night57byrd Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 02 2013 04:15 am
hmmmm what an interesting twist! hadnt thought about a menage relationship. cant wait to see what happens next! more please.............
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 02 2013 04:12 am
I don't think Alfred likes are is going to go for the sharing of Selena he is one Alpha like many more I have seen that do not like to share but he may just do what Selena wants to make her happy.
The verdict is still out.
Thank you
Author's Response:
LOL Alfred feels that it's just a curious phase this attraction Selena has for Thomas and in his mind it's like, "Oh, go and fuck him already and then come back to me. Get it out of your system!" LOL. Whether it'll happen or not remains to be seen and right now Thomas is distracted. He'll be more so once he finds out what Anne is up to. More is coming!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: October 02 2013 03:39 am
What the heck is going on? Annie girl needs to seriously be locked in a mental ward. Is she trying to go down the family line?
And Thomas needs to find his own women. Three is a crowd.
[Report This]Date: October 02 2013 01:25 am
Yikes! Anne is such a creep! The Breggins should consider a restraining order...
Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]Date: October 02 2013 12:10 am
soooo.... I dont think Selena doesnt care about Alfreds feelings I think she does,but is also enjoying the feeling of a man , one she didnt have to order, be really attracted to her. If she didnt care about Alfreds feeling she wouldnt have consulted him about the plan , she wouldnt have told Thomas that they should be friends and how she fells about Alfred. I think the threesome relationship could work IF Thomas can deal with ALfred being the primary lover , I dont think Alfred could or would allow Thomas to be number one. I dont think hes willing to share either he just doesnt want Selena to hurt.... I loved the chapter!
Author's Response:
Red Moon You're right on point. The thing is Alfred has to be number one because he's built that way. She wanted an emotional alpha and she got that. The second thing is that Thomas is NOT an alpha male. He doesn't have to be king he just wants to be part. He's willing to share with Alfred because he shared his family with Charles. He's used to being in a relationship (although a fatherly one) with a logical andriod so he's comfortable and familiar with that.
Selena is surprised and pleased that a man that she didn't have programmed just for her is attracted to her. It gives her confidence.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: RedMoon Signed
[Report This]Date: October 01 2013 08:54 pm
I feel bad for Alfred. Not liking Selena at all. If she wanted a cover then she should have picked someone that doesn't care about her, Thomas may cause problems. Selena's character to me is getting worse each chapter, not liking her at all but....
Update Soon!!!
Date: October 01 2013 08:39 pm
To be honest i don't feel that Selena cares about Alfred feelings at all. Othetwise she wouldn't have even concider Thomas proposition. Dating as a cover is one thing. But to actually accept him in their life and wanting Alfred to be okay with it is kind of heartless and selfish. I'm not feeling this arrangement at all. I know that they are doing this to help Alfred and the others. But there has to be some boundries. I don't think that Selena truelly realize how hard it may be for Alfred to see her with other men. He may only be a machine. But its still not fair to him. At the moment I really don't know what to think of Selena.
Reviewer: ann Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 07:51 pm
So this is a horse if a completely different color.
Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 05:49 pm
I feel so bad for Alred and Selena seems kind of unconcerned with Alfred's feelings. I am not feeling Sekena right now!
Author's Response:
Selena is very concerned about Alfred's feelings. She doesn't know if this is even going to work out. She's willing to put up the front to keep Alfred safe. She has feelings for him and not for Thomas so much even though she likes him. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 05:20 pm
Thomas needs to go away. *grunts* I like Alfred. Lol. Good update :)
Author's Response:
LOL Thomas ain't going nowhere. He'll gladly take Alfred's leftovers. Hee hee!
Reviewer: writinglass Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 05:20 pm
I think it can work. Thomas is already very accommodating.
Reviewer: LiLi Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 05:13 pm
This Alfred, Selena and Thomas triangle doesn't give me the warm and fuzzies. ANNE Fleming is crazy she needs to be institutionalized. I hope that Ben tells his mom and Charles what Anne attempted. I don't want Alfred to be hurt but he can't give Selena children. Where is the man that Alfred was created to resemble? So good Brenda!
Author's Response:
The man that Alfred was created to resemble was in Selena's dreams. He doesn't exist. No warm and fuzzies between the three of them because Alfred still is feeling some kind of way about ANY OTHER MAN seeing Selena. However, logically he accepts it because Thomas is making an effort to include him.
Alfred knows that he can't give her children, but Thomas has compassion for Alfred because of his life with Charles. He doesn't want to hurt him either.
Selena doesn't even want to think about a threesome. She just wants them to get along. She likes Thomas, but she has stronger feelings for Alfred.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 04:53 pm