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Title: Chapter 8 The Charity Auction

This is deep. I can see Anne and Walter banning together to cause trouble.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2013 01:05 am
Title: Chapter 8 The Charity Auction

I love it!! This is such an intresting story! =]

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Date: September 26 2013 12:09 am
Title: Chapter 8 The Charity Auction

Great chapter I like that Alfred and Selena have another couple to help them out. Parnters in crime - per se. Can't wait to see Selena's date with creepy Walter. Can't wait to read more !!! :)

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Date: September 25 2013 11:49 pm
Title: Chapter 8 The Charity Auction

The humans and androids banned together! So glad Selena ended up with the old guy. Less threatening and denies the possibility of love. Good job!

 Reviewer: writinglass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2013 09:23 pm
Title: Chapter 8 The Charity Auction

Walter is an old pervert who needs pu t to pasture!  Alfred is fine  so nice to see a picture of Al.  I have a bad feeling about this date please don't allow that old man to sexually assault all.  I hope that she wears a wire to record what he says. That ole fart is too old fo r Selena!

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Date: September 25 2013 08:57 pm
Title: Chapter 8 The Charity Auction

Loving it!!

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Date: September 25 2013 08:52 pm
Title: Chapter 7 The Creators

UGH UGH UGH can we deactivate Anne dammit... oh right she's a human - well we can still "deactivate" her hehe *rubs palms together* eh in due time she's going to get what's coming to her.

I can't wait to see how they get rid of the prime directive... for some reason i just keep seeing iRobot flashing through my head 

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Date: September 25 2013 12:37 pm
Title: Chapter 7 The Creators

Wow, Anne is super creepy.  She's basically stalking Selena. For a government regulated agency, Antex sure doesn't care about people's right to privacy.  They're worse than the NSA.  Selena should get her senator to create some legislation protecting her rights; but then again, they might shut down Alfred as retaliation!  

I'd love to see someone who lost the android they loved to a shut down.  Or an android whose owner died; what happens to those models?  There are so many possibilities!  You've created an awesome sci-fi world here! 

 Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2013 07:57 am
Title: Chapter 7 The Creators

Yay! Antex checkup! Not that I'm too pleased with the doctors, but I am so happy that Alfred was able to communicate with Charles, and hopefully some more Androids soon! I hope Anne doesn't see anything too out of pocket at the charity event, ans Selena needs to be sure to have her game face on when there! We ain't got time for no slip ups now! I really enjoy the fleshing out of the story it adds a whole new dimension to it, and like I said before so much can be done in the Science fiction genre! I let out a mini shriek when I saw this story coz I KNEW the possibilities were endless, ENDLESS! Happy writing xx

 Reviewer: TooMuchEnnui Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2013 07:52 am
Title: Chapter 7 The Creators

Amazing story!!  Loving it!

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Date: September 25 2013 05:36 am
Title: Chapter 7 The Creators

Your story keeps getting better and better!

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Date: September 25 2013 03:37 am
Title: Chapter 7 The Creators

This chapter was so high on suspense and intense. I do hope that they can override Antex. Alfred is so lovable and I like Charles. Hopefully all of the A.I. beings will be able to live with their human mates. That Anne is a bitch, I hope that whatever you have planned for Antex that she takes the brunt of it. Thanks for another great chapter:)

 Reviewer: charly43 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2013 03:26 am
Title: Chapter 7 The Creators

Brenda, congrats on your anniversary and hope you have lots of fun while you are away!

School has been kicking my butt, so I haven't had time to read as I would like, but it's break-time so I am catching up! 

Loving this story, as I do everything you write; thanks for sharing your talent; you are an amazing writer!

Loving Alfred and Selena; hope they can find a way around this darned directive...lol...

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Date: September 24 2013 09:48 pm
Title: Chapter 7 The Creators

Selena and Alfred did very well while at the center but Selena did excellent b/c every time Dr. Preston called him by his model # I kept screaming "HIS NAME IS ALFRED," LOL! But Selena kept is cool and did not flinch a bit when he kept doing it.

Anne needs to be watched there is always one trying to throw salt in the kool-aid.

I am happy to see they have found a friend to over turn the take offline bit cause he is not going over the prime directive, really.

 

Great update! Happy Anniversary I hope you have a pleasant time and many more.

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Date: September 24 2013 09:12 pm
Title: Chapter 7 The Creators

Thanks for the update!!

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Date: September 24 2013 09:08 pm
Title: Chapter 7 The Creators

Anne is going to cause a lot of problems for Selena and Alfred.Glad that Alfred met Charles and found the little information about communicating mentally with each other.I hope Charles and Alfred come with a solid plan and trick Anne and the prime directive programme...Love this amazing story.The ideas you come up with are truly awesome.You are incredibly gifted Brenda.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 07:43 pm
Title: Chapter 7 The Creators

Anne a bitch.  The derective seems like a dangeroud lot. I think they use the androids to control the human population and gather intelligence. They appear to want to control the world through money and power.

I can't wait to see what Charles and Alfred cook up. This is getting really good.

 

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 07:01 pm
Title: Chapter 7 The Creators

Selena found out a lot of information and it helped them get past Dr. Preston but that Anna heiferis another story. I am glad that he made that connection with Charlie so that Selena doesn't mess up at the auction ir Alfred for that matter.  Thank you Brenda!!

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Date: September 24 2013 06:19 pm
Title: Chapter 7 The Creators

Ahhh! *Flails* I'm in awe of you. Just sayin. This is so good. You say mine was like a movie well here you go sister! So happy I tracked this one. It's quickly become one of my favorites :D

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Date: September 24 2013 05:55 pm
Title: Chapter 7 The Creators

Really love this! I look forward to more updates. Alfred is great!

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Date: September 24 2013 05:46 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Im loving Alfred and Selena. Im hoping Selena can find a way to trick that damn prime directive. Lol I was like run to the control room or something to Selena when they left her alone. Im hoping they wont change or readjust Charles' programming and he can warn Alfred. Have a very wonderful annivesary and keep up the grand work.

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Date: September 24 2013 05:09 pm
Title: Chapter 6 The Plan

That Micky Ficky prime directive! I KNEW it would become trouble for my new favorite android/human couple! It would be funny/cool if the robots had these support group type meetings with each other, where they discuss their humans and the prime directive and coping with being shut down eventually. It would be cool if it was l covert and secretive, where they find ways to override the system! Ohhhh, I've got some ideas for you girl! I love science fiction! So much can be done with it, anything can happen! I hope this is a very long story, you do such great writing! Looking forward to the next update! Peace xx



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This is a wonderful idea!  I love it!  Stay tuned!

 Reviewer: TooMuchEnnui Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 07:12 am
Title: Chapter 6 The Plan

Damn ! Selena and Alfred are so HOT together.

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Date: September 24 2013 05:21 am
Title: Chapter 5 Moving Forward

Selena, Alfred ain't real, he is human like but not human.  I find myself hoping that extreme emotion will make Alfred a real man like I mind blowing sex ending in an extreme orgasm.  Such a wonderful story Brenda!!1

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Date: September 24 2013 04:24 am
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Wow. This story is so original and awesome! The plot of this story can go anywhere. Thanks!

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Date: September 24 2013 04:20 am


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