YES!!! This is classic Brenda1257! I nearly died laughing when the lady called out to Alfred and Selena in the mall parking lot. I don't know why but this seems like a return to form to me. I'm enjoying this story so much. Thanks for sharing your awesome imagination with us, Brenda!
Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 08:30 am
This is freaking hilarious! You have me rolling. Great character development.
Reviewer: A_Muse_In_Grrl Signed [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 04:12 am
Love, love, love the update!
Reviewer: Night57byrd Anonymous
[Report This]Date: September 20 2013 03:59 am
^_^ LOVE IT! AND GLAD, YOU ARE BACK!
Reviewer: Cora Jay Signed [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 03:49 am
Lol, Alfred is amusing!
Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 03:46 am
Like a breath of fresh air. Thank you.
Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 03:02 am
THis story is cute!
Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed
[Report This]Date: September 20 2013 02:27 am
Ugh, I couldn't even read the chapter. The dialogue needs to be spaced out better.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 02:07 am
alfred is too cute; i almost forget he's a robot every time i read a new chapter! :)
Author's Response:
He is something, isn't he?
Reviewer: LiLi Signed [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 01:23 am
Hehehe, ohhhh this Alfie! He's too much, I love this story, update soon.
Reviewer: TooMuchEnnui Signed [Report This]Date: September 19 2013 11:57 pm
What will he do next?! Have I mentioned how fun this story is?
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it. I needed to write something light and funny right now.
Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]Date: September 19 2013 11:48 pm
I love Alfred, he is waht Selena needs becasue she is always hating on herself. I would love find walk in and find Alfred spread eagles on my bed. I think of many things to do with Alfred. Selena is tripping and needs to chillax!!! Glad that you're back Brenda, how are doing?
Author's Response:
Thanks PM. I am good. I need to write something light and funny right now. I don't feel like writing anything too serious. Alfred is a mess though. More is coming!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 19 2013 11:45 pm
Oh, I know what you could have him do next... LOL!
Great chapter! I will offer my advice on the shopping trip though. I consider Lane Bryant more of a late thiries - 40s store. Stores like DEB and Torrid would be for the teens, 20s, and early 30s range. Torrid has around the same prices as Lane and DEB is pretty cheap.
Glad to see your chapter! Can't wait for the next :)
Author's Response:
LOL Thanks! I think Selena would faint in Deb. LOL Alfred just want to get her out of the old ladies department and Lane B is a step up. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: writinglass Signed [Report This]Date: September 19 2013 11:03 pm
Great update. I just LOVE Alfred ! More please. :)
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 19 2013 10:00 pm
LMAO!!! Alfred is something else! I guess their dinning in then? Or HE's dinning in?
Author's Response:
Alfred seems to have a one track mind. Maybe dine in first and then dine out. LOL
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 19 2013 09:19 pm
Really different! I like it.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: September 19 2013 03:22 am
Yes! I already know I'm going to love this. It reminds me of Aboslute Boyfriend. This is going to be fun.
Reviewer: KissNTell Signed
[Report This]Date: September 15 2013 10:27 am
Poor Selena...she's in for some trouble with Alfred lol
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: September 15 2013 09:19 am
Interesting start. It would be an interesting plot point I think if when Alfred finds her a suitabe male he becomes jealous and goes through the 'i am a robot i cannot compute human emotions' phase. anyway like the fic so far please update
Reviewer: Siren of the Darknessflame Signed [Report This]Date: September 14 2013 09:02 am
LOL this will be very intresting!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: September 14 2013 06:38 am
OMG Alfred talking about giving Selena an orgasm had me rolling, too funny! "I am ready to service your sexual needs." <-DYING! Alfred freaky as hell, too bad this couldn't be reality...I'd love to order my perfect companion and have him at the ready at all times ;')
Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]Date: September 14 2013 03:18 am
This is just too unique for words, I'm speechless and LFAO...I love it already!
Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]Date: September 14 2013 03:04 am
Fantastic story so far!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 12 2013 08:45 pm
Intriguing! Interested in where this is going.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2013 07:58 pm
I am hooked! Can't wait to see what kind of adventures await Alfred and Selena :)
Reviewer: jojo83 Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2013 05:53 pm