Reviews For Alfred
Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

Love Alfred.He's really straight forward.I think Selena needs Alfred's straight to the point nature...Absolutely love this story.It would be really interesting to see in future if she falls for Alfred or if she'll find a human mate...And even though she does finds her mate,would she be able to let Alfred go.

Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 09:21 am

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

I love that primedirective. Alfred has me ROFLMAO with his statistics and foreplay. Love. Keep it coming. 


Won't he be a bit of a cock-block for other guys who may meet her?


 



Author's Response:

Alfred's "prime directive"  will keep him from cock blocking, but it won't stop him from keeping anyone away who he feels isn't right for her.  LOL

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 08:58 am

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

Lol, I like Alfred! He's straight to the point!

Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 06:32 am

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

Alfred is ready to get down and shake the sheets.  So he is there to find her a mate not be her mate.  I am liking the direction thus far. Please continue.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 04:46 am

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

This is gonna be your best one yet! Comedy speaking you are sitting on a jackpot I just cannot wait to see what you do with it? Does she have any friends that knows she bought a life sized ken doll?

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 04:12 am

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

I am fiening for this story already and we're just two chapters in. Like everyone else I want and Alfred! A robot tailored to your needs it doesn't get any better than that, though I will say I was a little disheartened that he will shut down the second he helps find Selena a mate, and that it's his secondary purpose. Yet I understand. He's a robot and Selena very well, from a practical standpoint can't plan a life with a robot that can't procreate. But I do think its wonderful that he wants to help her with her self-esteem. This story idea is just so fresh and exiting I can't wait for the next update. Love it!

Reviewer: Lapis Love Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 04:12 am

Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Good start...I really enjoy Selena's character. 

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 04:10 am

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

Another winner!  Can I order an Alfred? Hell, I'm married and i still want an Alfred!!! This story just makes me laugh.  It also reminds me of the adage, be careful what you wish for!

I'm sorry to read of your father's illness. My prayers are with you!

Reviewer: Night57byrd Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 03:53 am

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

I love the Alfred he is straight and to the point.  He is what Selena needs.  I am hoping that either Alfred become human or the real person somehow meets Selena.  Love this story!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 02:58 am

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

Well you can't say that he isn't ready to test his sexual pros that's sure.  He only stopped the 1st time because he wanted to do some exploring to get to know his Mistress, but at the end there he was ready to get started with his service of servering her and himself too.

Thanks for the update I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 02:19 am

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

This is so creative and interesting. You always keep me wanting another chapter of your work, I already sense this time won't be any different.

Reviewer: peachmartini Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 01:53 am

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

Me likey. I wonder if she will fall for Alfred. I am happy he wants to help her find love.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 01:34 am

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

Selena doesn't know what to do with herself - I mean with hmi jumping on her like that hahaha she's not prepared man

Also ok so let me get this straight Ms. B. So Alfred is going to help her find a mate while at the same time sexually pleasing her (and other things ofc)  -well at least that's the plan - so this is assuming that she does not get too attached to Alfred that therefore, is not attracted to anyone but him. hmmmmmmm interesting!

Thanks for the update! 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 12:01 am

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

Interesting start! More please!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 11:43 pm

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

Alfred is just too cute! I hope that Selena can teach him too that he is also special. I love this story already and can't wait to read more. Will there be pics of Selena too? Thanks for the enjoyable read.

Reviewer: charly43 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 11:32 pm

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

Alfred is a very bad boy. He sure isn't acting like a machine.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 11:30 pm

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

Ms.Brenda - you have hit this story out of the park!!! I need an Alfred for myself. I'm already stalking and thinking about this story non stop . Can't wait to read more !!!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  My muse won't let me concentrate on my old stories.  I've been thinking about my Dad and I need something funny and lighthearted.  I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 09:24 pm

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

*shock* 

O>O

Reviewer: Cora Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 09:03 pm

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

  "What had she gotten herself into?"

 

My thoughts exactly, seems our heroine didn't read the fine print. Loving this! 

Reviewer: Fantasque Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 08:47 pm

Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

Oh, dear, lol! Too funny. Great chapter :)

Reviewer: writinglass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 08:35 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Oh Brenda, you are so bad. Starting another story when you still have some not completed. I forgive you because all your stories are awesome.

Author's Response:

I know.  Please forgive me. I need something funny to take my mind off things.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 07:16 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Oh my! 

Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 11:23 am

Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Oh my, this is really good and intriguing. I like Alfred already and Selena has my empathy already with her devotion and kindness she has for her parents. I can't wait to read more. Thanks.

Reviewer: charly43 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 10:50 am

Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Nicely done, Miss B!

A most interesting premise. :D

Reviewer: londongirl Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 10:26 am

Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

OH HEY NOW Brenda... Now wait a minute! I like this. He's very intelligent and sharp. Wow. This right here is going to be another fine story. I've gotta get myself mentally prepared. Just give me a few...

Right now my girl Selena has definitely bitten off a whole chunk...in fact she's sputtering (I'm sputtering haha) He just pounced on her and just started hitting her with all these answers and then dived in oh lawd! I can't wait to see where you're going to take this story - work your magic on me ma'am for I am ready!

 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 09:08 am



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