Reviews For Alfred
Title: Chapter 17 Obsession

Anne needs to be put away for a long time.  I can't even begin to organize a plot to make her suffer after she gets caught because I have so many ideas.

How you gone want a baby by men that don't want you and plus it's not 100% that the pregnancy will happen or if she does that she will be able to keep it after she is caught.

One sick twisted bitch for sure.

Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 06:12 am

Title: Chapter 17 Obsession

damn and damn!!!!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 04:25 am

Title: Chapter 17 Obsession

Like next chapter soon?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 01:52 am

Title: Chapter 17 Obsession

Anne's nuttier than Planter's party mix! I hope they finally shut her down for good. Please let my sweet baboo, Alfred be okay.

Reviewer: peachmartini Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 01:20 am

Title: Chapter 17 Obsession

Mrs. Brenda...please kill this bitch. She is working my EVERLASTING NERVE!!! And when you do it, make it good, gory and as painful as possible. 

Reviewer: DaSoulVicious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 01:10 am

Title: Chapter 17 Obsession

WHAT in the HELL is wrong with Anne?? I knew the bitch was crazy,.but DAMN THIS JUST TOOK THE CAKE!!!!!!! I'M soooooooooooooooo over Anne I can't even think straight. Her crazy ass gives me headaches!!  Lol 

Awesome update!!  

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 12:47 am

Title: Chapter 17 Obsession

Anne is insane in the membrane!  That is why Thomas should have turned over that tape to the police that  ho belongs in the hoosegau! Where was Chuck going and how soon will he be back?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 12:16 am

Title: Chapter 17 Obsession

Ok, Brenda, you've taken Cra-Cra to a hole new level!!

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2013 11:30 pm

Title: Chapter 17 Obsession

Anne has gone to far. That crazy bitch needs to be taken down.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2013 11:17 pm

Title: Chapter 17 Obsession

I want Selena to beat the crazy out of Anne. To rape anybody is sick much less if they are unconcious is even worse. She really disgusts me and cant wait until karma hits her.

Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 22 2013 09:12 pm

Title: Chapter 17 Obsession

She is thenonevwho flew over the cuckoos nest.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2013 08:16 pm

Title: Chapter 17 Obsession

She is thenonevwho flew over the cuckoos nest.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2013 08:16 pm

Title: Chapter 15 Trouble

That Anne woman's elevator don't go all the way up to the top floor.  She is nutter then a fruit cake.

First she drugs and rapes Thomas now in a way she is about to rape Alfred.  I hope that he wakes up before the allotted time she thinks she has.

Damn what a shame someone please put that crazy woman out of her misery.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2013 04:53 am

Title: Chapter 16 The Chase

Girllll this story has me one way. I belong studying for my midterm, but instead insisted on reading this all the way through. It is a fabulous story great idea. I love it!. Can't wait to see where you take. 

I would have ravaged poor Alfred the first time, I wasn't waiting ain't nobody got time to wait :)

Alfred wants to watch them join them. lol the poor robot don't understand. no boo they want couplate by themselves. 

Excited for next update

Reviewer: readlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2013 06:00 am

Title: Chapter 16 The Chase

please please please let anne get whats coming to her this time!!!!!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2013 02:52 pm

Title: Chapter 16 The Chase

AHHHHHHH!  OMG, that was not enough.  I was like, "Oh, not another chapter 'til next week.  No big deal.  I can hang that long."  And then...BAM!  SUSPENSE!  THRILLS.  I'm dying.  Is Anne going to use her knowledge of Thomas' secrets against him when she gets caught?  If she gets caught!  Bah!

Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19 2013 05:06 am

Title: Chapter 16 The Chase

Oh wow, that bitch is crazy!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 19 2013 03:37 am

Title: Chapter 16 The Chase

this has gone too far LAWD. I need Thomas to report this mitch and I need Selena to drop kich Anne's ass pronto.. everyone is getting blows in my book. Anne is just goingto have to go into a coma because I'm coming for her... she is too cracy for my being LOL

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19 2013 01:02 am

Title: Chapter 16 The Chase

Right when it was getting to the good part you ended the chapter.   Why?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 10:53 pm

Title: Chapter 16 The Chase

So Thomas disn't report Anne because he didn't want to deal with it and now she's running around hurting the people he cares about 

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 10:13 pm

Title: Chapter 16 The Chase

Brenda...

You really must do something about Anne. It's time she got a good ole fashion beat down.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 10:12 pm

Title: Chapter 15 Trouble

Why when everyone is suspicious of this nasty byatch... why do they just walk with her like it's nothing? Keep all eyes on her wth... stop trying to be civil with her OMG. If I see anyone of them turn their backs on this lady and leave themselves defenseless one more time OHHH... she's getting away with too much and nothing is happening back to her. UGH Kick her ass to the curb watch her get in that damn car and drive off and stand there for another good 30 to make sure she doesn't come back like people let's be on her ass to make sure she's not shotting people with tranqs and powered defibrillators.... I just want her demolished 

ok done with my rant.

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2013 01:58 pm

Title: Chapter 11 The Proposition

Ok, you lost me, when I thought you were going in the direction of rejecting Thomas. But I couldn't stay away for long! This story is amazing. The twists and turns.The little details (pork gravy! *smirk*), the drama! That Anne Fleming. Whackadoo. I'm amazed that she's never had to do a psych evaluation...



Author's Response:

*snicker*  She wasn't  crazy when she first came to Antex.  It was only after she became obsessed with a married man that she went over the deep end.  Yes, I'm trying to keep you all on your toes.  I must confess that I loved Writinglass' story so much that she left a deep effect on me.

More is coming....

Reviewer: Bokbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 17 2013 09:35 am

Title: Chapter 15 Trouble

Whhhuuuttttt nooowwwww??? This bitch is reeeaaaaaalllllllllllllyyyyyyy crazy!

Reviewer: TooMuchEnnui Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2013 07:06 am

Title: Chapter 15 Trouble

Whhhuuuttttt nooowwwww??? This bitch is reeeaaaaaalllllllllllllyyyyyyy crazy!



Author's Response:

Yep.  She's a nutjob that's for sure!  More is coming!

Reviewer: TooMuchEnnui Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2013 07:06 am



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