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Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Thank you Ms. B! I'm already hooked just from your first chapter.  Can't wait to read more.

 

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 07:42 am
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Alfred grinned at her. “I also chose the name Alfred because of Alfred Pennyworth from the Batman movies. It is my desire to service you.”


Holy sh*t. Ovaries have officially exploded. Well, done. Continue please :-)

 Reviewer: writinglass Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 06:38 am
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Love it already please update soon

 Reviewer: jcjoie Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 05:45 am
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Well damn Alfred!  I like that you had Alfred already awake in the box. And that he had picked his own name. But Alfred? Alfred is not sexy and all oc tbose Alfred's that he mentioned were not sexy. This Alfred is sexy!!  Selena won't know what hit her.  Brenda you always hit an homerun!

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Date: September 11 2013 05:02 am
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Loveit.

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Date: September 11 2013 05:02 am
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

This is very cute!!!! I like it. Very humorous. 

 Reviewer: LolaWrites Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 04:21 am
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

I liked the history of the name Alfred. Selena may not be able to handle her new man, LOL. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 04:17 am
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

I really enjoyed this first chapter. Well written and I love Alfred already, I can't wait for more. It was really great. :) I really do look forward for an update.

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Date: September 11 2013 04:10 am
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Love, Love the beginning of this story.  You are so clever and an amazing writer!  Totally digging Alfred's cheek!! LOL

More soon please!!

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Date: September 11 2013 04:05 am
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

I love the way your mind works! I hope this isnt all!?

 Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 03:32 am
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

LMAO!!!! LOOOOOVE IT!

 Reviewer: Cora Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 03:30 am
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Great start. This actually reminds me of a live action japanese show. I forgot the name of it though.... Please continue!

 Reviewer: LuKohana Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 03:22 am
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Damn good start ! Outstanding and very creative story idea. Dang I really need to make me an Alfred in real life. Loving this story already ! More more more PLEASE ! :)

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 03:15 am
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

I like this. Alfred. is to cute. He a lil freaky. Lol 

 Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 03:00 am
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

I enjoy how your mind works. Can't wait for the update!

 Reviewer: Fantasque Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 02:57 am
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Alfred grinned at her. “I also chose the name Alfred because of Alfred Pennyworth from the Batman movies. It is my desire to service you.”

YES MS. BRENDA!!! 

I love it. I'm loving it!

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 02:54 am
Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

lol.  the banter between to character is breath taking and logical

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 02:44 am


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