OMG!! This chick is crazy!!! I hope someone saves Alfred before Anne finds out about the box!!
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed
[Report This]Date: October 17 2013 05:20 am
No, not my boy Alfred! Hopefully, he wakes up and takes them all out ;) Good update!
Reviewer: GeorgiaP Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 05:02 am
Great update.
Loved the Selena/Alfred interaction, I have missed it. Anne.... there are no words, I am curious about what she will do next though at the very least, Anne is very entertaining lol.
Best.
Author's Response:
Yes I love playing with Anne. I'm trying to think of more outrageous stunts for her to pull. LOL
More is coming...
Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy08 Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 03:26 am
Brenda, I apologize if you felt slighted by my previous post about Thomas taking over Alfred. In no way, did I mean to insult your writing choices because I would/ will read everything you post or publish. I get how badly Alfred wants to be more human, more security with his life and Thomas has the best plan to change this. However Thomas is good people, he just hasn't grown on me yet. You always get me there. I'm just impatient and, Alfred has such an interesting personality and love for Selena that I love the pairing. I guess I am afraid ofwhat the mashup up of the Thomas/Alfred will give us. Well, atleast he will be hott and honest. That about as good as it gets in a man. Lol.
Oh my goodness, they stole Alfred! I'm gonna have to cut Anne's hands off.
Author's Response:
NO offense taken. I love the passion shown in the reviews. Hee hee! Yes, Anne is the bad person here. She's crazy as a loon all because she didn't get to seduce the original Charles Breggins. More is coming....
Reviewer: peachmartini Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 01:44 am
Anne is evil and should die a horrible death by android. Have four of the Androids each pull a hody part off, no one would miss her. Please don't let her hurt Alfred. Why is it that no one at Antex notices how obsessed Anne is? Thank you Brenda!!
Author's Response:
Hee hee. You want her drawn and quartered, huh? Well we'll see. As for her obsession, she's been careful but she's beginning to unravel....
More is coming!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 01:39 am
this bitch is cray cray!!! more please!!
Author's Response:
Yep! And more craziness is coming!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 01:17 am
Anne has lost her freakin mind. The Breggins' men can hardly tolerate her. Furthermore she disobey a supervisor directive by kidnapping Alfred. I hope her little scheme blows up in her face. Anne's action smells a desperate woman. I can not wait for Selena to whip that ass.
Author's Response:
Anne is a nut case for sure. She's not done yet. More is coming!
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 11:29 pm
Damn this woman. While I admire her ambition and all, I want Anne to give it a rest already. She will not have any Breggins men. She need a serious reality check and ass kicking. I hope she gets what coming to her.
Author's Response:
Does she really think that she's going to get ALL the Breggins men? Uh, I think Janet will shoot her first. More is coming!
Reviewer: CestianiDauphin1 Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 10:59 pm
Oh no. Save Alfred!! Hurry with the next update, I can't wait to read it.
Update Soon!!!
[Report This]Date: October 16 2013 09:47 pm
Brenda.....Brenda......Brenda......Smh. Lol. This chapter right here was awesome!!
I can't deal with Anne Finney!! Her ass need to be lock in a mental institution were she can commit suicide and DIE! Ugh she makes my stomach hurt. I can't.
Can't wait for the next update!!
Author's Response:
Anne is truly a vile nutcase! Yeah, more is coming!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 08:55 pm
That woman is crazy and deranged. Time for her to go.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 08:45 pm
NASTY, DESPERATE, TRIFFLING, RAPIST BITCH! Never turn your back on a person like that, they will stick a knife in it every time! Whoever you were thinking of when you developed the character of Anne Finney, had to be something else...please don't say you know a person like that in real life?
Great update by the way!
Oh yeah.......Pork chop gravy? Okay? I guess!
Author's Response:
I didn't have any particular person in mind when I wrote this. LOL at the pork chop gravy. Selena loves pork chops. *snicker*
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 04:34 pm
Wow, that is something else. I am reading like this in philosophy class. Wow, how crazy is that!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 03:43 pm
This girl is cray...
Reviewer: linalin Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 02:43 pm
whoa!!! the plot thickens!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 01:18 pm
This chapter was very enlightening, but I may be a little confused. With Thomas plan, will his brain merge with Alfred's software? If so, I still don't like this idea. I like our friend neighborhood android just the way he is. Thomas can create another android to continue hs life after death.
Author's Response:
Sorry you don't like the idea, but the android's deepest desire is to be human. Thomas isn't concentrating on that anyway at the moment. He's concentrating on keeping them online which is his top priority. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: peachmartini Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 01:44 am
Oh wow! That's quite elaborate that plan, but at least I have something to definitely root for... I hope it works... fingers crossed
Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]Date: October 15 2013 01:06 pm
And chillax, Chandlerane
Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]Date: October 15 2013 09:12 am
Wow, that was so great! The awkwardness of that love scene could not have been any more real. Here I was, expecting some steamy threesome. Instead, I got hit with a nice dose of reality. Alfred reacted the way an android would to that kind of situation. He's not a real boy yet and this chapter awesomely demonstrated that. Tell me again, Brenda, why aren't I paying for your stories?
Author's Response:
thanks Tens. You are so on point. Alfred is still trying to figure things out. As for paying for my stories, LOL I'll have a book out soon, but in the meantime I'll still be writing here for free because I love you guys!
Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]Date: October 15 2013 09:10 am
I WILL TOTALLY READ IT 'CAUSE I AM ALL FOR THOMAS, ALFRED, AND SELENA GETTING TOGETHER!
Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]Date: October 15 2013 08:50 am
So Thomas has years left, I wish he had months left, I'm ready for him to die.
Author's Response:
If he dies, then so does the androids including Alfred. Antex will have their way and take them offline once their usefulness has passed.
Reviewer: chandlercane Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 15 2013 03:03 am
I understand her completely, and I'm so happy you wrote that scene. If your in a committed relationship(albeit Alfies a robot, lol) you don't just have sex with someone else just because your attracted to them. You don't wanna have sex with everyone your attracted to. I feel like Selena doesn't just wanna have sex with Thomas because she's attracted to him, a whole lot more feelings would need to be involved. I know she likes him, but she's clearly hopelessly in love with Alfred. Her frustration with Alfred for basically offering her up to Thomas so that they can continue with Thomas' plan is soooooo understood!!! You just don't do that, I feel her, lol. I hope they get their act together! I'm in it for Selena and Alfie for the LONG haul, hahaha. Oh goodness, I also hope Charles gets to stay with his human family :(
Author's Response:
Alfred is still trying to figure out human behavior and this friendship. Selena is attracted to Thomas, but she is committed to Alfred. More on Alfred and Selena in the next installment.
Reviewer: TooMuchEnnui Signed [Report This]Date: October 15 2013 01:01 am
Brenda I love how your mind works! Thomas as the really right to sulk give the man a break, he found out that he was dying and then that crazy ass bitch Anne drugged and raped him. He is allowed to have a pity party. I am so glad that he found what needed in his safe deposit box. There is way for him to live on as well as Alfred. I love this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks PM. As always, I love your reviews!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 15 2013 12:56 am
This is so depressing. I don't want to even imagine any part of Thomas dying.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2013 11:25 pm
All I have to say is this!! Anything and anywhere you take this story I would love it!! I'm Team everybody EXPECT for Annie she can choke on a stick and die for all I care!! Lol.
Can't wait for the next update!! ♥
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for that comment and for your support. I'm letting my muse run wild. I know I'm not going to please everyone because of the reviews I received, but I got to do what the muse says. As for Annie, more of her devilment is coming up. LOL
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2013 11:15 pm