Reviews For Other Half
Title: Chapter 6

I love this story. I recently just found this site after reading all your other stories on literotica and I must say that this is a great story. I definitely cant wait to read more of this story and the others you have on here.

Author's Response:

Welcome to the chamber! I post here more often than the other site bc I'm more comfortable here plus CAST PICS! Enjoy the great authors on here

Reviewer: wow Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2014 01:20 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I really like this story, but the length of time between updates and the length of the update distressed me. Time between updates is too long, the length of the update is short. Please give us readers more story, and less time between updates!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 08 2013 10:13 am

Title: Chapter 6

This was really WAY too short

Reviewer: teamTakila Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2013 05:01 am

Title: Chapter 6

Wow, Jae is facing quite the conundrum,  should he allowed her to fixed without telling her hat he learned from Lenard or leave her as is? Or maybe tell her and allow her to make the decision?  "This is good!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2013 05:05 am

Title: Chapter 6

No don't change her Jae! I love this. More frequent updates please :D

Reviewer: writinglass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2013 03:53 am

Title: Chapter 6

Oh interesting twist on how they came up with the robots. But I hope Jae keeps her as she is.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2013 03:37 am

Title: Chapter 5

That's crazy.....oh well, Has doesn't mind!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 26 2013 04:21 am

Title: Chapter 5

I really like this story so far

Reviewer: teamTakila Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2013 09:14 am

Title: Chapter 5

Ah! This is so good! More please and quick :-)

Reviewer: writinglass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2013 10:25 am

Title: Chapter 5

Jocelyn is just fine! Protect her Jae.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2013 06:25 am

Title: Chapter 4

Love Jae!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2013 03:41 am

Title: Chapter 4

This is so awesome. I know you're in school but please update when you can. Stellar job :-)

Reviewer: writinglass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2013 03:38 am

Title: Chapter 3

No, and Yes? 

No bcuz she needs a chance to learn. Yes bcuz we readers just want to know what happens next.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 02:44 pm

Title: Chapter 2

They are too cute buying her clothes and underwear. I wonder how he will explain sex to her.  He might want to buy a few books and movies.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 02:37 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Was that guy a Johovah Witness or a mormon?  Jae was jealous remember fine one that Jocelyn is robot or android and she can't love you back or reproduce.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 12:58 am

Title: Chapter 3

Aww... Poor Jocelyn. I hope Jae isn't too angry with her. She was the victim. It's so adorable how much Jae cares about her already!!! :D Where the hell is Lenard... *growls* He was supposed to protect her. More please!

Reviewer: writinglass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 12:49 am

Title: Chapter 3

I want to know what happens next!! I really like this story. Jocelyn sounds adorable. :D

Reviewer: Adi Milano Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 12:45 am

Title: Chapter 3

I want to know what happens next!! I really like this story. Jocelyn sounds adorable. :D

Reviewer: Adi Milano Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 12:45 am

Title: Chapter 3

I want to know what happens next!! I really like this story. Jocelyn sounds adorable. :D

Reviewer: Adi Milano Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 12:45 am

Title: Chapter 2

This is adorable!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2013 04:56 pm

Title: Chapter 2

This is adorable!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2013 04:56 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Really enjoying it so far. It's not the speed that you put the chapters out but the length - longer chapters pls!

Reviewer: londongirl Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2013 10:26 am

Title: Chapter 2

I like it so far

Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2013 02:31 am

Title: Chapter 2

 I like it. Android love.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 15 2013 11:56 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Jae is going to have a hard remembering that Joss isn't human and I want his fine self to find real love. Perhaps meet the real Jocelyn? Keep it coming Briella!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2013 05:16 pm



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