question? Will you be updating this story soon?
I'm currently working on the second story about Bailey now. I'm going to try and have it post by the end of the month. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. ♥Reviewer: safetygirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 13 2013 08:07 pm
i love this story!!!!!!! please updateReviewer: safetygirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 11 2013 10:32 pm
I would really like to see a continuation of this story. David and Veronica can't just get away with doing this to Bailey. Bailey needs to find a man that can truly love her. Remember the best revenge is success. I would love to see david and veronica wake up to the fact that relationships based on cheating are never solid.
Im working on Bailey now. Hopefully the new story will be post by the of month. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. ♥Reviewer: ayiti2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2013 05:25 am
I do not know what to say about this. I am just heartbroken, but I understood where Bailey came from because a guy used me just so he THINKS he can get with my sister...but unlike Veronica, my sister was not interested in him and she had a boyfriend at the time that it happened and still is with her boyfriend (now fiancee) till this day. Yes, I did kicked that jerk to the curb because he got caught.
I just feel so bad for Bailey and I never thought that she was a fool because to me, she was a good woman to David. It's David's lost; not Bailey's. However, I would to see these three characters again. This cannot be a one shot. Update soon when you get the chance!Reviewer: luvrayne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 04 2013 06:02 am
Hell yes I want to see these characters again!!!! Veronica and David need a mudhole stomped into them!!! I'm not very violent but cheating just gets to me. My girl Bailey need to get her act together, move on, and be happy as revenge. Nothing worse than being happy when they're miserable and boy do I want them to be miserable.
LOL!! I'm loving your review! And I couldn't agree with you more.
Yes! You will be seeing them again. ;)Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2013 05:44 am
HEll yes I want you to continue! I wanna see what happens!
LOL!! I will continue with this story. My laptop crashed so it will be awhile before I can update this story. But I will try to update as soon as possible. Thank you so much for reading!Reviewer: Redmoon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 02:41 pm
this made me so sad. i'd like to read more and see where this goes...
I'm sorry I made you sad. And Thank You for reading. I will be continuing with this story. So you will see them again. ツReviewer: LiLi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2013 07:58 am
I like the story. I would like to see the characters again.
Thank you so much!! You will be seeing them again!!Reviewer: blucat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 11:50 pm
LOOOOOOOVE THIS! I REALLY REALLY REALLY WANT MORE! ^_^
I oddly like David, and his I really don't give a crap tone of self.
OMG!! Thank you so much!!! and Really? Some people are drawn to his ways. You will be seeing them again! :)Reviewer: Cora Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 10:37 pm
This story hurts for those who have experienced it and still don't know where they went wrong (me). It's like you saw this happen to me and wrote it. It's good update but I can not read it. It's too close to home
Thank you so much for reading. I understand if can't read it. But remember it will get better. Can't let one heart break stop you from moving forward with life. I'm still taking mines one day at a time. It will get better. :)Reviewer: Jacey Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 09:14 pm
Girl, I'm sitting here bawling like a baby. This hit home, way too close & personal (I want my best friend-thankful because I would be wearing prison orange right now)! Dang if you didn't bring back memories if the last 6 months.
I'm sorry! and Lol at orange jumpsuit. Thank you so much for reading!!!Reviewer: Bella Rosa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 09:13 pm
Now that my blood pressure has returned from stroke level, yeah, I want to see more of Bailey. The dude and the trick, I could care less about how happy or sad they are. I'd like to see if Bailry is able to learn from this costly mistake. How or if she's able to rebuild her life, connect with her family, her "true" friends and maybe at some point meet someone that she can trust (and especially see that person with her eyes WIDE OPEN).
LOL! Thank you so much for reading. and You will be seeing her again!Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 09:09 pm
I enjoyed this story, it hit home for me as well. I would love to see these characters again. I would love to see Bailry move on successfully and see what has happened to David and Veronica.
Thank you so much!! My main thing I want to do be as a writer is to have my character's connnect with my readers. And you will be seeing them again!!Reviewer: karmal Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 08:31 pm
David is one cold human being. He and Veronica have no remorse at all. I would love to see Bailey get her life together and leave these two assholes in the dust. No good comes from mistreating people. Just like he cheated on Bailey he'll cheat on Veronica. She was never her friend.
It will be hard for Bailey to trust anyone again after this. I hope that she gets her career together and something happens to cause both of those jerks to need HER and not the other way around.
Maybe you could pick up like two years later or something after she gets it together. Good stuff.
Thank you so much!! Veronica and David just don't know what they are in for. Karma is about to have some fun with them. ;)
Bailey has a long road of head her but something tells me that she will be okay at the end.
I was thinking about fast fowarding the next chapter. Thank you for your advice.Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 07:53 pm
I want to see these characters again but move time forward like 2-5 yrs and have Bailey become a strong, compassionate, caring woman that David and Veronica can't touch. Let her meet a man that is so much more than David even though she will have difficulty with opening her heart to trust again after this dumbass duo. If you knew he wasn't happy you should have spoken to your friend like the woman you are and how dumb are you that you let is man screw you and your friend for 3 years. The only reason he moving her out is because he either got caught or you just started making demands. Ugh, damn if you have long term friends like this, who the hell needs an enemy. I would go Madea on that ass and then leave with my head held high. Please bring these characters back. Would love to see more.
OMG!!! I LOVE your review lol. And I will be bringing them back. You will see the again real soon! Thank you so much for reading!Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 07:52 pm
Keep going I need a resolution for Bailey...I need some type of extensive background on all the characters because the phrase "I havent been happy in four years isn't working for me"
Thank you for reading!! They are coming back!! :)Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 07:49 pm
I want to see Bailey mive in snd be strong. I want her to try and eebuild a relatiinship with Mom and sevelope real frienships. I really want Veronica and David to suffer. Karma neess to visit thise two. Baikey ignired the signs but David still did Bailey wrong. She wasted 7 years of her life in him snd Veeonica never truly caeed abiut Bailey as a friend. Give Bailey a chance to grow, to love and to be loved.
Thank you for reading!! I have finally decieded to contuine with this story and you will be seeing them again soon. Bailey would have her time to shine and become the woman she know she can be!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 07:44 pm