Don't let this story drop. It is amazing.Reviewer: Mimi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 03 2016 01:38 am
Luv this story, glad your back! I think it's good that he's paying more attention to her needs now. He's starting to see the real Glory. The last chapter seemed rushed. One minute she's holding out sex & then in the next minute sex scene. It was kinda rushed, no substance, almost like a filler chapter. I was expecting more intimacy because she was holding on to her morals. And the stylist being there was so awkward. It's just a bit unsettling that their 1st sex encounter would be a spur of the moment quickie.Reviewer: Avapriceless1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2014 04:38 pm
What's this ? Why is she in front of a board?Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 25 2014 03:20 pm
I like Dave and Glo and their story. But oddly enough I'm a little upset that she gave up the goodies. I think should have stuck to her convictions and waited. Enjoying the story but would have loved for Glory to have waited.Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2014 02:31 pm
Yay welcome back. So Glory is going to Law school after that hit song. Welcome I'm glad she ventured out to do that but now it's on to something she's more passionate about. Even though they are so different her being not about all the flash & fame & he is to me the mesh very well & kinda balances each other out because they both trust, respect,& support each otherReviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 25 2014 11:47 am
I'm so glad you didn't make so wait for that answer. To be honest I saw this story when you started I couldn't at first get into it. I liked the idea but just didn't feel the first few chapters I'm glad I gave it another shot. Great story, I personally like David and I think he's trying she should give him a chance also I hope he sees his brother for the jealous person he is.
Date: October 25 2014 04:54 am
Excuse me but my personal life is not up for discussion. I am an intelligent young woman that you are able to see from my LSAT scores. Can I comb thru your closet and find it squeaky clean. I think not you pompous ass. Good thing 5 out of the 7 didn't have sticks up their butts. You surprised me with this. Glad it is back. I think I will re-read it just to make sure I got the gist of everything. Doesn't hurt my David fantasy.
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Date: October 25 2014 04:05 am
Nice update! Well that was a surprise. I thought her dream was to be a singer or do something in fashion since you always mentioned her awesome sense of style. That's pretty interesting. She's talented but wants to pursue something else.
That contract they have to me is a bit off. I always wondered, why would a supermodel need something like that with a normal girl? Confidentialiaty clauses and privacy contracts yeah for sure, but making her stay with him for 5 years? I'm just a little confused as to why initially he would want that. I would've thought that supermodels wouldn't want to be tied down to just one person. Maybe I missed the reason.
Other than that little tid bit I really love the story. I can't to see when they finally get rid of that stupid contract and are together because they want to be together. Also to prove to her momma that they are going to stick together regardless of her opinion. They are too cute together! Awesome job.
Hey! i'm glad you asked about the 5 year question within his contract. David is seen as a playboy and someone who can't stay committed. So essentially he will seem committed, in the public eye, with her for 5 years.Reviewer: partial2passion Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2014 11:37 pm
I love that David is so supportive of Glory and I am glad that Glory recognizes what makes her happy. Glory is young and David is truly her first love. The feelings that she had for the other boy pale in comparison, but time will tell. I want a HEA, just putting it out there.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2014 01:05 pm
I'm happy that Gandy has marriage on his mind but it seems like they've spent more time apart than together. I love them but I hope they don't rush into things. And, I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop with her mom and what she told the reporters, if anything.Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 01:56 pm
I think was completely on board with reading this story until this chapter. I think literally making her Byonce is a little too much. It detracts from the originality of the story. Your writing also seems less clear and I'm not sure if its because of the new direction of the story? Sorry I'm not trying to be mean I'm just giving feedback I would want for my own story.
I am thankful for your review but hopefully my response will clarify some things. I am not literally making her Beyonce. I want you to think about how popular and vocally talented Beyonce is, and envision Glory in that way. Also, Beyonce in a sense went through the same thign Glory is going through. Being able to be herself fully, hence why I used her album for Glory.
I think it is still original since it has happened in someone's life before. Namely, Beyonce's.
Not being mean, but i think you misinterpreted my direction.Reviewer: bry1124 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 01:22 pm
Love it that was just short & sweet but so beautiful then for him to ask her to marry him like that out of the blue with the sun rising blew me away love it. & beonce's Song saw the music video love love & to incorporate it into this story pure genius love it. Update hope she says yes
maybe :)Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 10:13 am
I don't hate that fine man I just hate that his decision to go along with Simon has hurt Glory. I would have problems believing that he loved with contact in existence. She's young, inexperienced and has been sheltered all her life David could really hurt her. I love me some David Gandy!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2013 02:16 pm