Love this! I always want more when tge chapters end.
you'll get more :)Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 17 2013 03:25 pm
Loooooooooooooooooved this chapter! David is so fine lmfao! You are a fatastic writer i just reread your other story with him it was amazing! Excellent work!
awe thank you so much! Yes- Body Party I think is my favorite besides my royal series. :) I'm glad you enjoyReviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2013 02:59 am
Simon is gossip spreading sycophant who needs his tail beat!! David and Glory will never have peace, David fire Simon!! Why did Nathaniel have the audacity to speak to Glory? He deserves all of the unhappiness that Glory has observed him to be having. Her family is trip!!!
Haha oh Simon, don't think he will walk away so fast. Nathaniel has something up his sleeveReviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2013 12:58 am
I like it and look forward to seeing where this goes. I understand your muse is not there for you to update your other stories. I am patient and will wait. You are a great writer.
thank you for being patient with me <3Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2013 02:06 am
I really don't like her family, they are all self-absorbed. Her dad is only a father in the sense that he donated the sperm that created her. How does her dating a supermodel affect her brother's career as a doctor? Just stupid all around. I think that Glory needs to find a church that is less restrictive as she will never get to him to attend that church. I know that I would never, can't wear pants not even when it's cold. Damn her momma is crazy!!
Easy Easy :)Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2013 11:02 pm
Glory why are you angry? You don't know what that comment was referring to, David meant you found a fault with him I beleive.
Oh hush! hahaha not everyone can be as fabulous as youReviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2013 04:09 pm
Yay really enjoyed this ch. Instagramming a pic I don't no if that was wise or not but I think he has an idea of what he's doing I guess in a subtle way of takin their relationship to the next level & start being out 2gether as a couple.
He's a smart guy :)Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2013 04:06 pm
I totally get where she's coming from my background is similar penticostal nondenominational I never understood all the philosophies to baptize or not to I think really doesn't matter because b4 christ it was water but after his death & resurrection it was his spirit anywho it's a personal choice between U & god I think either is fine.
Ok bk to the story line being with some1 who is open to Christ & hasnt been introduced to him is better than some1 who just don't want to try. I love how he's the communicator & is getting her to talk & not hide from him even if it's to agree to disagree.what she heard hopefully she didn't take it the wrong way.
Can't wait 4 more
:) thank you for the wonderful review! this made me smile, you took your time to write this and include your own personal life. I am grateful for thatReviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2013 10:08 am
That is one thing I never fail to understand. Just because you attend church doesn't mean everyone else has to. Your beliefs are just that, your beliefs and I don't think she should have gotten so angry with him expressing himself especially if he WASN'T raised in the church. Did she think dating her would give him an epiphany in 2 nights. Then she didn't lay out a good argument for religion with all she told him. She is bascially revolting against some tenements of her church herself and was scolded for it, she is going to do the same thing and scold him. Not being very open minded. He may change his mind or he may not, if she wants to be with him, she will have to accept it. Will this weekend end well.
when you love someone it's selfless, so if she loves David I am sure she will be accepting of him..
if she loves him.Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2013 04:51 am
Ummm her father and brothers don't get a vote they haven't been there and had basically disowned her and her mom. So she needs to ignore them get packed and leave
damn but i mean thats your family!?Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2013 03:15 am
maaaaaaas por favor
you gonna get some tomorrow :)Reviewer: Daeza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 24 2013 05:46 pm
This story is all over the place. I haven't suspended my disbelief about Glory, because she is so inconsistent. If she is so concerned about appearances, then why is she having a breakdown in the middle of the restaurant in his arms? People don't take cellphones with them out to eat?
And why is everyone acting like she's been recruited to al-quaida or something? She got dressed up, went to a bar, had a drink and talked to a man. Why are they acting as if she was photographed grinding naked on Gandy, and fell instantly pregnant?
If her religious community is as bad as she makes it out to be, then wouldn't they either give her a hearing, or throw her out carte blanche?
You have a lot of powerful issues here, with the church, the abandoned mother, now the bully brothers have arrived. Hoo boy. I will let you get on with it. Tke your time to develop your characters, especially Glory (coz I was a church girl too!). I hope you don't think I'm always criticizing, so I will admit that I still can't stop reading your work. You have fun ideas that make me laugh. You have great potential.
I do not understand the point of the story is all over the place honestly... lol
The restaurant was rented out, I reread the chapter after your comment and I included that exclusively to show that they were alone.
In regards to why everyone is acting all crazy. I would be shocked if the praise and worship leader in my church was at a bar drinking and flirting it up with David Gandy? Lol.
I like hearing your input so please keep it coming :)
hope this didn't come off bitchy or somethingReviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 24 2013 11:20 am
Another amazing chapter! Loved it! I wonder where Dvid is going to take her! Ummm what is her family doing at her house uninvited.
lolol family visit ;)Reviewer: Heleana503 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 24 2013 07:51 am
Throwing two fingers up. "Duceces" "Holla, when I get back." Yall didnt want shit from me. But now Im bout to live my life yall wanna act you care. Trick please Ill send a postcard. Toodles.
"ill send postcards" I CANT! LOLReviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 24 2013 07:26 am
I've done some internet stalking on this guy since the first time I saw him as a writer's muse. I would love to be his friend, but that's it. He's a heartbreak waiting to happen. He has too much charisma. Women would knock you down like you're not even there to get to him, unless you were Beyounce or Kathy Perry. Good luck Glory.
lol well damnReviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 24 2013 02:51 am
guuurrrrl!! where did you find my old journal?! lol. seriously i love this story and how you are telling it! we are so quick to be "religious" but so slow to be christ-like!! now that is not code to bring on "missionary dating"! lol but just to see glory show her relationship with god and that includes showing her struggles, trials + tribulations.
i am enjoying this story your weaving! you are very talented and lord knows i can relate to ms glory...dont know nuthing bout mr gandy but ooow wee he fine! that is one fine example of god's craftsmanship!
God's craftman ship indeedddddReviewer: Aleta Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2013 02:11 am
I think that if she is a christian, we should see a little conflict between her spiritual and physical. I also think you should show her relationship with God exixtent or non existent. One thing i would ask is that you pls dont twist scripture. Thank you so much for sharing this story. you are a phenomenal writer. those above are just suggestions. awesome story
there will be and I will NOT twist scripture. as a christian myself i wouldn't dareReviewer: maria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 11:58 pm
It's seems funny to me how everyone wants to pop up in her life and tell her what to do when she is a grown woman. She is supporting herself and having fun. She hasn't had sex or does drugs. How is she suppose to meet Mr. Right if she doesn't date. Please if they are so big into The Lord and Scripture, doesn't it go something like he who has not sinned shall cast the first stone. Hello, her daddy and mommy have sinned many times over. Puhleese, they need to back off. Ain't know way, I'm backing off of David Gandy, fine specimen of a man, that he is. Please, want to read what poss hypocritical daddy has to say.
LOL review is on pointReviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 11:34 pm
I'm loving this story!!!
Looking forward to the next chapter.
thank you! :)Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 09:06 pm