Reviews For Tess and Jay
Title: No More Mr. Nice Jay….

to get him back, Tess is going to have to overlook the women Jay starts to date while trying to forget about her hurting him---then she will truly know what he went through.

I wish Eric would show up naked to just test Tess, but she would probably fail.  Jay should stay away bc she is still weak. 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2013 09:27 pm

Title: No More Mr. Nice Jay….

I agree and feel sorry for Jay there is nothing worse than a cheater that makes excuses. admit you messed up and take responsibility for it. put on your big girl panties.  I wanted to cry when he started crying.  Long term he will probably forgive her we all do, I just know experience wise that not always does the cheater stay away from the person if they have history and emotional baggage very hard. Jay is in a hard spot. I still don't feel sorry for her. glad you wrote it from his point of view. excellent job.  Thanks

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2013 09:02 pm

Title: No More Mr. Nice Jay….

Tess should lay off trying to get Jay to forgive her. Really? Does she know what she did? Give the man some space, goodness! She needs to move on and get herself together without Jay, because honestly he is not listening and I cannot blame him. Tess did this to herself what did she expect. She may never get Jay back, but she sure as hell won't get him back being a bug master. She needs to lay low and keep it strcitly professional. Of course she will have to interact with Jay, but she does not have to do any personal talk or anything like that. She has already apologized and I believe she is sorry, but there is nothing left for her to do and she should not try to do anything else. She should just let it go and if Jay never forgives her she needs to accept it and move on and not make a mistake like this ever again. Love it!!!

Reviewer: oHH Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2013 06:22 pm

Title: No More Mr. Nice Jay….

Like watching a car crash in slow motion you could see that no good could come from Tess sleeping with Eric. Jay's crushed and Tess seems to just be thinking about how she feels not how her actions would hurt Jay and their relationship if he found out from someone other than her. 

For such a smart girl, she sure does act stupid! 

 

 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2013 02:44 pm

Title: No More Mr. Nice Jay….

Tess is not doing the appropriate groveling and she has the nerve not to see the similarities between her and Eric. Really you cheated got caught and expect Jay to believe that you love him? You were suppose to give Jay some space but her dumb ass is selfish, it's not about you boo! The woman is making my teeth itch!  Tess annoys me so and I really don't want Jay to forgive her easy however I don't think we will have that problem. Tess opens her mouth and instantly pisses Jay offf because she only sees her pain. Finally Tess woke up to Eric's duplicitous nature too bad it was too late. Goodluck with midterms!



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Thank you!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2013 02:34 pm

Title: No More Mr. Nice Jay….

I am really enjoying the story. I thought Jay was going to give in and call her but he is going to prolong this anger. Hopefully by next chapter he gets back to being his sweet self.

Reviewer: Apple Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2013 01:02 pm

Title: Comes to the light…Comes to the light…Everything...

What is sad to me is she had sex again with Jay without telling him. I think when he starts thinking about everything that is going to piss him off more.  Sorry I don't feel sorry for her she treated him just like she was treated by Eric.  Her friend was right it was nasty and wrong.  What shows me she doesn't understand what she did is she thought what Eric said was wrong but he was right. Jay shouldn't forgive her anytime soon if at all. How can he trust that she will not do it EVERY time Eric comes near her.

 

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2013 11:01 pm

Title: Comes to the light…Comes to the light…Everything...

I still feel bad for her. I hope that it works out for them.

Reviewer: Apple Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2013 12:37 am

Title: Comes to the light…Comes to the light…Everything...

Thanks for the new chapter!I don't think any sympathy for Tess: she ripped what she sowed! She was being a selfidh coward. Jay is totally right to freeze her out.

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2013 06:07 pm

Title: Comes to the light…Comes to the light…Everything...

fuck :/

Reviewer: emynence Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2013 07:36 am

Title: Comes to the light…Comes to the light…Everything...

Well it was about damn time I would have preferred it coming out of Tess's mouth herself but she dug this hole she should have told her man what was up and they could have worked it out lawd got me worked up...

Thank you so much for the update I love this story already and I feel it has only just begun for these two :)

Reviewer: underrestrains Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2013 06:47 am

Title: Comes to the light…Comes to the light…Everything...

That's right Jay tell her to keep her legs closed to lying snakes. She needs to grovel some more if you ask me. 

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2013 06:37 am

Title: Comes to the light…Comes to the light…Everything...

I knew that the asshole Eric was going to spill the beans and Tess' dumb ass should have know it too.  I can't work up an ouce of sympathy for the woman because she put herself in that trick bag.  Team Jay all the way baby!!  I want Eric to paid back for all of the pain that Tess allowed him to cause her.  She's stupid but he deserves to suffer a loss. Don't like Tess at all, she needs to handle her business to get back on my good side.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2013 06:33 am

Title: Comes to the light…Comes to the light…Everything...

go jay! go jay!  Lord knows it's about time he learned the truth bc she sure wasn't going to tell him. 

If I was her mom I wouldn't even say 'told you so', just give her the breakup gift pack: box of kleenx, visine to get the red out, advil for the headache, and a journal. 

If she is pregnant, she had better not tell him until she see who the baby looks like--Eric will disappear like the Flash then.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2013 05:59 am

Title: Stopped in His Tracks...

too good! 
please let Tess be the one to tell Jay.
And let Eric get what he deserves, which is NADA!

Reviewer: emynence Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2013 07:52 pm

Title: Stopped in His Tracks...

OMG!! Tess finally getting her backbone with Eric, hopefully he LISTENED and didn't just not hear her words.  Now she needs to prepare herself to accept whatever consequences come from telling Jay what went down. 

Eric showed he was prepared to tell Jay--like it was some kinda game.  Does he even know what he put her through with his cheating?  He did try to come off as a knight on holding her while she cried from his cheating--loser!

Well done!

 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2013 05:14 pm

Title: Stopped in His Tracks...

She's still blaming h'm for her being stupid . Her momma didn't tell nothing that she didn't already know.  Tess is working my last nerve! I am glad that she told asshole how his treatment of her affected her but she still blamed him for stupidity.  That just irks me!!  For that to think that she would actually marry after treating her with so much disrespect and her allowing it. RUN, Jay Run!!! Don't like Tess and the dislike is growing. Eric just make me choke him! Team Jay!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2013 02:47 pm

Title: Stopped in His Tracks...

 

wow a month has gone by and she STILL hasn't told him....she is just like Eric maybe she should stay with him. I actually agree with Eric he was 100% right about what he said to her.  How is she better or doing something different than what he did to her.

 

I don't

feel sorry for her during her yell at Eric. 

She should feel some of that outrage for what Jay is going to feel when he finds out.  I

  don't think she is really into Jay as much as he is into her, if she was she would tell him and be more hurt about what she is doing to him not what Eric is doing to her.    Jay does't deserve this....urghhhhhhh

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2013 01:58 pm

Title: Little Does He Know....

Poor sap. At least she had the decency not to sleep with him. That would've been just nasty. I hope Eric does tell him, 'cause she won't. I feel bad for him. He values trust and she's lying to him as long as she keeps what she's done from him. I'd really like to knock her on her ass right about now.

Good chapter. Homegirl is digging that hole deeper and deeper.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 29 2013 10:00 am

Title: Little Does He Know....

sorry Jay, but Eric already has touch her, again.  Tess is about to go through some stuff and well, she brought it on herself. 

Jay is going to be so hurt and I am glad he has some money and does seem to matter to Ms Tess.  When Eric finds out Jay is on the same financial footing as he is then he is going to hit back and tell how he did Tess and spent the night.     

I think Jay left college for a reason---a broken heart, perhaps? 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2013 10:31 pm

Title: Little Does He Know....

Ohh poor Jay. Tess should have come clean. It was still early in the relationship and they are not exclusive yet.  Though it was implied.  Eric is going to try to ruin her love life and her career.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 28 2013 03:36 pm

Title: Little Does He Know....

I tried to hold out....but DAMN IT Tess is foul. Eric didnt hurt her all that bad if she can turn around and act just like him. Mmph, she gets no love from me because although sleeping with Eric was wrong. She is straight grimey for not telling Jay the truth. Oh dont get me started on her slight comparison between Jay's and Eric's financials. Ole girl need to be slapped up side her head for real.

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2013 03:07 pm

Title: Little Does He Know....

oh man... I would feel sorry for her if she didn't make that dumb move.

I agree with another reviewer a good man will not accept her having sex with her ex. I'm a woman and I wouldn't.

I think she should have told him when she had a chance to..Eric WILL tell him, it's just a matter of time. Eric is aggressive and doesn't have much respect for Jay so he will love to point out what he thinks and that is he has more money and he just had sex with her. 

It is an accident waiting to happen, she needs to woman up and tell him. Hopefully with time he will forgive her. momma mia..

Great story. :)

 

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2013 03:05 pm

Title: Little Does He Know....

please does she deserves better?  I think that she had self respect issue and combine that with stupid and that is Tess in a nutshell. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2013 03:05 pm

Title: Little Does He Know....

Tess is making my teeth itch. All that bull sugady that Eric spouted was said to get you back that asshole does not care about you. If you give him the chance he will ruin what you are building with Jay. Tess is so stupid and just as untrustworthy as that jackass Eric. Jay is independently wealthy and so deserving of woman who can give him her whole heart and ih yeah be trustworthy.  Team Jay all the way! Tess you are making my eye twitch!  May be she should seek therapy for dishonorable behavior?  She needs find out she repeatedly falls for Eric's lies. The sapce that she requested maybe good but Jay doesn't know the truth behijd that request. Cc Eric the asshole will tell him and she would deserve it. Yep, not liking Tess right but I knew I had the feeling that she wasn't completely over Eric the asshole. Tess is on my list of characters to depise. Eric s on my list odlf characters to hate! While Jay is on the most loved list!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2013 02:13 pm



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