Treale, this chapter was good. Addison really laid it on Landon and rightfully so! I like how he called him out on his BS. Those crocodile tears didn't phase him at all! Addison is a good brother and he knows that he is his brother's keeper. Loved it.
Keep up the good work and keep that writing spark alive. YOU GO GIRL!
THANK you so much LadySade. Your kind words really means a lot to me. I didn't know where I was going with this chapter, so I just let my muse lead the way. I guess she didn't steer me wrong. Thank you so much again!!Reviewer: LadySade Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2014 02:52 am
Lan is a dumbass. I always have wondered how a person could just let themself be controlled by a substance such as acholol and drugs hell even another person, but I suppose we all have our vices and our way of copeing.
Apparently Eli is not a friend but just his supplier and the only way that I feel Lan is going to really want to get help is when he totally hits rock bottom so to speak all the way down when he has slost everything and I do mean everything.
Thank you for an interesting story. I at first did not want to read it because it did involve drug use but after reading the first chapter I was hooked it is different then I thought it would be.
You are so welcome amd Thank you for giving my story at shot. I know a story about drug abuse is something some people don't like reading about, and I didn't want my story to be like a typical drug abuse story. I wanted it to be real as it's gets.
Landon is going down path of no return. He's in it deep, I hope he can come out of it, and as for Eli he is really about to show his true colors.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2013 06:59 pm
love is story up date soon 5*****Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 29 2013 05:41 pm
Landon just found out that Ryan his wife thinks that she failed him as wife and his response is call his dealer for a fix? Call me cruel because I don't sympathize with addicts as addictions begin through a choice to use in the first place. Ryan stay away until he chooses to get himself right as of right now he doesn't deserve you and your daughter in his life. This story tears at my heart!
Pmgayles, you are not cruel at all, and let's hope Ryan can, but remeber she loves her husband. ;)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2013 02:15 pm
If his mother's death affects him like this, then I would be leery of counting on him to have my back when another crisis arises. Hell, life is tough and if he can't get straight for his kid, well I think it's time for him to see them preparing to move on. It has been months since this man has seen his family, by choice--I hope the kid don't even remember him.Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2013 07:47 am
If you are not going to change it, then it is what it is: Ryan should present him with a burial plan and policy, along with separation papers and say she is moving on bc their baby needs a real daddy. If that doesn't make him go for help, well, like Addy said 'F it' and life for others go on.
Thank you so much for reading, and reviewing!! We shall see what Ryan choice will be,Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2013 07:42 am
Loved this chapter! I like how Addison gives it to Ryan like it is and is really there for her as a brother. He is a great guy, must be hard for him to not be able to get through to his brother and see how all this is affecting Ryan and their daughter. Great writing!Reviewer: rra8831 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 07:22 pm
Landon has the nerve enough to have an attitude when he's the cause not being together. Landon needs to go into rehab and with a quickness!! I think that Addison should kick Landon's ass and while he's kicking said ass he should tell him how Ryan is feeling. Tell him what she said about not being a good enough wife. Those outfits are cute!!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 03:12 am
That baby is adorable!!! Are you trying to make sister cry again. Loving Landon is robbing her of faith don't give up Ryan when it's darkest the lord works the hardest all he asks s that we believe in him! I am so glad that James didn't marry that ho Marilyn she did all of that hating and scheming and didn't have James. That is what I call karma!! I can't to read about the confrontation between Addison and his baby brother Landon. I love this story!!
Thank you! I'm happy you are loving my story.
And yes, Aiden is a cutie. And no, I'm not trying to make you cry that's the last thing I want. Lol
Karma is a bitch and thats what it did to Marilyn.
Now Ryan needs the strength she can get .
Let's just hope this vist goes well. 'Fingers Crossed'Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2013 03:33 pm
Love this!! A great read, I really feel for Ryan, one should never lose their faith. But she is going through very tough times, I hope Landon gets it together!!
Thank you so much for reading!!
And you are right, one should never lose their faith. Now as for Landon, all we can do is hope for the best.Reviewer: rra8831 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2013 03:00 pm
You truly have a gift with words. I could literally see everything that you had written. Your words are so precise and filled with just the right amount of emotion without exaggeration. Truly talented. I have been fortunate to not have to deal with this issue in my personal life but, I look forward to going on this ride with you, Ryan, and Landon.
Please continue and I look forward to reading more.
Thank you so much. You just don't know how much you review means to me. I really needed that boost of confidence. Readers like you are the reason why I still write. So thank you so much.
And YES I will be continuing with this story. I will be update as soon as I can. ツReviewer: Kaye2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2013 03:47 am
Ryan made the right decision for her daughter and herself and I'm proud of her for sticking to that. To me, it felt like Landon was saying a final goodbye and I kept hoping that she, or his brother, would come back in time to stop him. That's not the reality in most cases though. I like the realness of this story and I really hope you decide to continue.
Thank you!! I want this story to be real as possible. I have experience a loved one who dealt with drugs. So this story is based on true emotions.
Landon is at his breaking point and he lost it. I don't maybe Ryan or Addison might still come to save him in time..
Well see next chapter! ツReviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 16 2013 05:38 pm
Landon is stupid the pain will still be there when he sobers up, get help like his wife requested. This story is rough because I feel for Ryan but she choose her daughter so many woman don't do that. For instance my favorite sister-in-law never put her children first and now my nieces are screwed up. They each go from man to man and choose said men over their children. They have each been married twice it really makes me sad as my s-I-n doesn't recognize her part in how they turned out. She believes that a drug addict was a great father! This story strikes to close to home! My brother had so much potential but choose drugs and criminal mentality over a full ride to the University of Illinois. He got married at a young age and he and my s-I-n ruined my nieces. Yes, this story touches my heart. Good job Treale!
Thank you so much for your review. Your review touched my heart. I understand everything you been through. I had my experience with a loved one who done drugs. Some people still have a lot of growing up to do and some people are lost. Love is a very powerful thing. It can make people loose sight in what is right.
It's hard to understand why person would choose the decisions they do especially when it's the wrong one. It's hard.
Thank you again ツReviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2013 04:25 pm
This has really caught my attention. I can't wait to read more.
Thank you! ♥Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 11 2013 08:26 pm