I hope you come back soon to this storu, I enjoy it and I hope to see cast pics, I know it[s tough to do :)Reviewer: missj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 03:10 am
Please finish😞Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 25 2015 06:39 pm
please please please pretty please continue, the story has just begun and i cant stop reading. like really. its great.
id love to see goza show a vulnerable side. he seems to need emoladla more than she him. maybe she will be sucessful in her attempts of running away and we will see this side.
the sexual domination between them is hot as hell but what about the fam she left? why was she sacrificed? seems like a great warrior, would she not be an asset? or is this a trait of all her people?
also the wolf (who is she/him?, some sort of spirit guardian?) im unfamiliar with the story/tolkien you are referring to so its all brand new to me.
this is all so interesting and good, thank you for sharing it with us!
good luck on your exams! come back to us when you pass lolReviewer: business Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2014 06:41 am
This is so good. I wish I could help in making the banner, but i'm no good either. LOL. Who do you have in mind for your characters? And please update soon, your story is good, I can't wait to see their conversations and how they grow in development. PLEASE UPDATE!!!Reviewer: miss j Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 27 2014 03:32 pm
I'm really enjoying this. A relationship of trust needs to build in order for love to flourish. Build that and everything else will fall into place. Also I would love for her to be pregnant.Reviewer: p Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 24 2014 11:44 pm
please tell me that they will talk soon... like a full on conversation. i would be reacting the same way. I think she is 100% right with how she keeps trying to escape. BUT you can see how the two are really good for each other. I reallyyyyy want them to fall deep for each other pleaseeeeee!! I want to see him all caring and protective of her!! i can fully see them arguing hahaha maybe if someone else dares to hit her or something? i dunno im just wanting the two of them to talk and then do the naughty naughty hahahah loved itReviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2014 05:10 pm
My only wish is that you give us further insight into the characters>
How did she become the prize?
Why is Goza so calculated?
What is the point of their union?
The story is strong and intrigues me to no end. Thank you for posting!
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Date: September 24 2014 02:54 pm
Sexy!!! I love how dominating he isReviewer: Futz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 24 2014 04:56 am
I love her defiant nature. It is hard to find a good story like this. Especially with a black woman. As for suggestions, I think that E should keep plotting her escape while maybe falling in love at the same time??? Maybe a bit too cliche.... That's why you are the author and I am notReviewer: J Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 24 2014 04:54 am
more pleaseReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 24 2014 09:20 am
I just finished all 6 chapters and I'm loving it! I can't wait to read more!
What problems were you having with posting pics? Is it just not uploading at all?
They'll upload but they don't show in the preview or when I actually post. I followed the sizing guidelines and I have the photos I want to use for the banner and my two main characters so far.Reviewer: kitten84 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2013 02:51 am
Love this story and even more LOVE THE ALPHA MALE!Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 05 2013 12:56 am
If you tweak the spacing a bit, it'll look longer.
apart from that, very intense...Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 04 2013 12:05 pm