Title: And Everything Went Dark....

Omigawd! You're killin me! if she suffered another miscarriage.... I'm probably going to throw my computer across the office... 

Reviewer: DecemberUnrest Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2014 12:48 am

Title: And Everything Went Dark....

Please don't let her die. I really want her and jay to work out their issues, I still think they have a chance

Reviewer: Keys72095 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 09 2014 12:30 am

Title: And Everything Went Dark....

I give up. I don't like this. 



Author's Response:

No...don't give up!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2014 12:00 am

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

DAMN. I was so ticked at what those two did in previous chapter that I thought I'd marinate before commenting and this shite happens.

I'm not mad at Jay, I do think he's one dumb f*ck. I really don't think that they were ready for marriage. Couples counseling won't help since they're not really a "couple". They both act as if they're on their own. Tess miscarries and fails to mention it to Jay. He needed to be able to mourn the lost of the babies along with Tess. She took that away from him. And then his simple ass goes and pulls this stunt with Toni. Nope, not a couple.

They are way too immature to be in a marriage. Don't have an f'in clue what a real marriage should be. So, they need to spend some time apart (maybe YEARS), grow up, and MAYBE then they can see if they have anything left. I can't see Tess forgiving this. Jay let someone handle Tess' johnson. Da hell. I would cut it off if I was her, since he can't seem to get control of "little" Jay.

And do you really think that trick will be "no strings attached". That git is on meds! It just takes her going off them for a minute and the next thing you know, Tess will be unknowingly boiling a bunny rabbit.

I'm shaking my head at both Jay AND Tess.

My dear, you really know how to bring the D-R-A-M-A. Well done. You had me cussing like a sailor. Please update soon. I'm losing my frickin' mind with these two.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 05:03 am

Title: Brown Eyes of Green...

You know your story is good when you have us all in here writing emotional reviews. 

Did Eric set Jay up with Toni, because she did say she had a hotel room already that was out of the way, but then Jay just happen to run into Eric and Malik? 

Eric and Toni are just alike, remember the pic he took of them in the elevator?  Why was he there anyway? 

Eric just seems like, if I can't have my 'pet Tess', then no one can and he sure don't give a damn about her happiness.  Right now Trouble Tess and Jumpy Jay are playing into the Evil Eric and Trifling Toni's hands.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 04:51 am

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

Sorry, Jay doesn't get a pass because Tess kept secrets. He too made vows and he broke them. He didn't just kind of cheat. He flat out cheated. If you let a ho put your dick in her mouth you're a cheater. And actually what he did with Tess was way worse than what she did to him and here's why, when Tess cheated a) technically they weren't really sure what they were, they were seeing each other but Tess was still unsure about making a full committment b) Tess has history with Eric and clearly has emotional issues when it comes to him c) Tess didn't sleep with Eric out of spite. Jay went out with Toni to spite Tess no matter what lame excuse he came up with to satisfy himself. He did it deliberately and set out to cheat. He knew what would happen if he went out with that trick. And for that reason, I'm team Tess.

 

I'm all about her giving his sorry ass walking papers. I hope she gets the help she needs and realize that not all men are super douches like Eric and Jay. Jay is a colossal piece of shit. Die Jay. Die. I hope Tess gets better and I hope she finds the love she deserves. Even if she gets back with Jay, I hope he does a lot of groveling because he's lower than R. Kelly in my opinion. 

 

That all being said, the fact that you've got me cussing in this review should tell you how talented you are to stir up these emotions in me. Looking forward to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 04:41 am

Title: Brown Eyes of Green...

I really don't see any future for Jay and Tess together. Couple counseling is not going to help. To much is going on between those too. The best thing for them is to go their separate ways. Tess is a very selfish woman who treats Jay like he is an employee instead of her husband. Its obvious that she did not learn from her mistakes because she still keeps secrets from him. 

 

Jay has every right to be angry with her for not telling him about losing their babies. But to seek attention and nearly sleeping with Toni is not the answer. Although I do understand why he went that far. No I don't agree with it. But if your not getting any attention at home, you will seek for it somewhere else. And lets be honest, Tess is not the easiest to deal with. I honestly can't stand her. I know that she went trough a lot of things, but you can't continue to use that as an excuse all the time. She is hot today and cold tomorrow. She is very insecure, never wants to talk, won't let anyone in and she always angry. Most of the times its her way or the highway. 

 

And Jay, even though I kind of understands why he did what he did, it still very wrong and very stupid. To be honest I find Jay to be a very weak man. When things gets difficult he goes and seeks attention somewhere else. He knew how much drama the whole Toni situation had caused and yet he still got in contact with her? He shouldn't have taken that business card period. If he needed someone to talk to he could have gone to his brother or a friend. But yet he decided to go with Toni? 

 

Plus I wanted to point out that Jay is NOT worst than Eric. Yes Jay kind of cheated on Tess, but Eric had cheated on Tess multiple times and even made her get an abortion. So him saying that at least when he cheated on Tess he wasn't married to her is a complete bullshit to me. Cheating is cheating, whether you are only in a relationship or married doesn't make it any less worst. 


Reviewer: MsStars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 03:54 am

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

Soooooo....

They just need to divorce.  Like right now.  Both of them are blatantly immature, childish and not at all ready to be married, hell let alone adults.  They both make stupid choices while all in their feelings while forgetting that they have a partner whose feelings are supposed to matter just as much as their own!

Tess was SOOOO very wrong for keeping her miscarriages from Jay.  Point blank period!  He is her husband.  The would be father to those babies, and she says nothing?  Multiple times?  Hell naw.  Jay was justified to being pissed to the highest levels of pissivity!  That makes it a trust issue and we all know how a relationship goes south like the Titanic when trust is broken.  Tess basically lied by ommission.

However, that does NOT make it ok for Jay to date and go to a hotel room with a hoe who he KNOWS ain't worth anything.  HE KNOWS.  Two wrongs don't make a right.  I don't understand how people still don't get this!  Just because Tess did something to break the trust (again) does not mean its ok for Jay to do some dirt too.  Tess not being open and honest with her husband caused one problem, but this Toni issue just ADDED to the problem and made a bad situation worse.

Again I say they need to divorce and be done with each other and relationships until they both grow the hell up!

Reviewer: babygirl2cute4u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 03:45 am

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

You are making it had for me to be on Team Jay, but I do see why he was so hard on Tess when she cheated with Eric, but I bet he never told his dad that he saw him cheating on his mother, it seems that Jay and Tess both have TRUST issues.. but meeting Toni was SO WRONG, and to let it go as far as it did was MUCH WORSE...

And I know that Toni knew who Jay was talking to and she chose that moment to give him his jacket, that TRICK isn't fooling me, she was hoping that one would tell Tess and that she could have Jay for herself, she is as TRANSPARENT as GLASS.

I do hope Jay tells her, and that they comtinue therapy together... I don't want them to end.

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 03:38 am

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

That was a good chapter & all the people to catch him it was Eric !! I don't know how this gonna work out but Tess is going to knock Jay out with a nice right hook!! I want her to beat Toni ass one more time, out of principal !! 

Reviewer: MONTEY7877 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 02:02 am

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

Im done with Jay and Tess ...till your next update. How old are they again, both extremely insecure childish people. Theydeserve each other

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 01:36 am

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

WOW. Jay is just as insecure as Tess. They both have issues and they need help. Tess will not open up to Jay to save her life and when Tess shuts down and treats him like a third wheel, he licks his wounds and seeks out attention he knows he shouldn't. When things get tough, Tess shuts down and Jay wonders. He has not broken the vows, but he is really close to doing so; honestly Jay needs to grow up. I'm not saying it is easy to come up against steel, Tess, when she gets into her fits, but he needs to get through her thick skull that if she cannot be open with him, her husband, what is he there for. Because frankly neither one of them are happy. Tess treats Jay like an employee. She has been through a lot, but her issues are causing a rift in there marriage. It seems she is always upset and avoiding. What is Jay supposed to do, clearly not meet up with another woman and contemplate cheating, but people who keep you on the outside can be really hard to live with and Tess is not making this easy; then she lost two of his babies and did not tell him? It's like Tess is not even acknowledging she is married. Oh, she got herself pregnant? I can see not telling family members, friends, or a husband or partner that was no good, but Jay is not that bad.  She's on my nerves as bad as Jay is.

With that said, Jay has to man up and figure out a way to reach his wife because at the rate he is going, he will cheat and that will be the end. Who knows the end could be here already. Malik was right too many people are in Jay and Tess's marriage. When a couple allows other people to come into their marriage, it is doomed. Jay is being a coward. I know his feeling are hurt over Tess keeping her walls up, but he has to help her break those walls, if not they need to go their separate ways. But in this case, it seems that even if Jay was trying to be the model husband, Tess would still be avoiding. So at this point who knows. Tess has serious issues and so does Jay. They are both flawed and need to communicate with each other. Honestly this has been the problem all along moreso with Tess.

She's scorned from Eric and will not communicate with Jay on basic things and when Jay does want to talk she avoids or gets upset. When he tells her the truth she cannot handle it. It seems as if she was not ready for marriage. Communication is key in anything and Tess has made it seem as though she needs no one. She's being selfish. Does she want to be married or not? Jay is acting like the weakest link and making stupid choices and the most shocking thing is, he hasn't even slept with Toni. This is just a horrible situation. Honestly if I were a dude I could not imagine being married to Tess, she is hot and cold, insecure, never wants to talk, won't let anyone in, always angry. No, she should have stayed single. I could not see myself married to Jay either because when crap gets hard he starts to stray. Really? Instead of fighting tooth and nail he gives up. But honestly, fighting for someone as strong willed as Tess is a full time job and can be bleak especially when she is shutting you down on all sides. Cheating isn't the answer, but leaving may be. But that's where love comes in and if Jay and Tess really love each other they can get thriough this. Marriages have survived worse than this, but a lot have failed on less.

LOVE THIS STORY!!!!

Reviewer: oHH Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 01:36 am

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

Oh HELL NAH!!! It's is best that Tess and Jay just call is quits, cuz all the wrongs they make sho aint making their situation right. I mean, I'm all for therapy, working it out, and compromise.....but thier case. No can do. I am team Tess rooting for her to work on herself before trying work on anythign else. Strong stable mind can help her with all that she tackle. Eric might be an asshole but he was right when he said that what Jay is doing to his wife is waaaayyy much worse than what he did to her as a girlfriend. And can I please find me a Malik (lol). Great story!

Reviewer: AD Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 01:27 am

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

I am not feeling Jay right now, he is not thinking straight.  I am definitely not feeling Tess and I really hate Eric!!  I don't think that Tess and Jay should be marrieds, they don't have the necessary marturity.  Tess will tell Jay that she wants a divorce and I can't blame her.  Jay needs therapy, damn they aren't even talking to each other.  I am so salty right now!!  I am not longer on team Jay!!  I am hoping that starts acting like he has some sense so I can be team Jay once again.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 01:19 am

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

Oh Jay what a stupid thing to do even though he knows it's wrong keeping the card a month which I bet he & Tess still weren't communicating after therapy & him walking out. They really need to go bk to therapy have some really not so good issues with each other which is making them both miserable in different ways although they still love each other. Why did he go to that hotel with Tony instead of getting away from her after what she said to him. Now he''s let her touch him almost doing the one thing Tess is scared he'll do anyways b/c she doesn't feel worthy. She needs to continue her individual therapy plus they need couple counciling & to start back communicating & acknowledging each other. I hope he tells her know she is gonna be hurt but hopefully they can get bk on track after all this

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 01:15 am

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

Hmm...Jay is apparently still confused.  I remember from the beginning, when he said  he loved Tess and tried to get her to feel the same.  Now, I ask,...does he love Tess or not?  Does the fact that she kept the miscarriages from him mean he no longer cares for Tess?  IF he loves her, he could not meet up at a restaurant for a date, let alone go with her to a hotel room.  Actually, it looks like he wants his cake and to eat it too. 

I think he needs to tell Tess.  And since he cannot seem to make up his mind about he really wants, Tess should make up his mind for him...walk away.  There is nothing to fight for.  He has already broken his vows.  I don't know what he could say, at this point, to merit Tess giving him another chance.  What is left to say...

Nyeesha 

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 12:57 am

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

Wow. Life dealt her an unfair hand. I think they are going to get divorced. First time Jay claimed it made him feel good getting that attention, now he purposefully went looking for it. He stoped talking to his girlfriend for almost a year for her unfaithfulness.  Tess should adopt and divorce him.  I don't know how I would get past the fact that my husband went after someone who wants to ruin my marriage and could have cost me my career from a physical altercation. 

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 12:40 am

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

Toni wants Jay for the sex and to get back at Tess for that beat down.  Jay said his connection to Tess is waning, so maybe the couple should go their separate ways.  I think they can workit out if he confesses and tell all of what happen bc if Toni/Eric/Jas/Maliki get a chance they sure will. 

Jay should come right out and ask Tess if she wants a divorce and if she says I don't know or no, he needs to start back to couple's therapy with her.  They both need to sincerely apologize to one another. 

f they go their separate ways, they should not get back together bc they will still have the same unresolved problems: poor communication and SECRETS.  Fingers crossed that you will help them work it out :-).

 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 12:32 am

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

my, my, my, well, Jay could take a page from Tess's book and keep quiet, but he will come clean and let the chips fall... Tess was keeping a lot of important info from her husband.  She is feeling unworthy and that is why she is avoiding him. 

I can really understand Jay actions with skank Toni, but too bad he didn't slam Eric with the abortion update that possibly left Tess infertile.  She needs to go to a fertility doc and see what's up--she was wrong not to tell Jay, but I bet she thought he would leave her. 

What I don't understand is that Eric had her abort the baby, but she still ran back to him.  Hell, maybe Tess should be with Eric, but if she can't give him a Jr. down the road...

I am still on the couple's team, but I am leaning toward legal separation with divorce around the corner if Jay don't come clean with a quickness.  Tess needs to take Jay actions as a wake up call to get her sh*t together.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 12:15 am

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

Jay got me sitting here at work with my blood pressure rising.  What the fuck did he expect was going to happen and now he isn't any better than Eric.  He went with the intent to cheat because he couldn't call his brother, friends or anyone to TALK about all the shit going on with them.  He went for a biased opinion to make him feel better.  He didn't think she wasn't responding to his ass because he stopped going to therapy and she feels like he doesn't want her anymore.  He just brought all of her fears to reality.   Now that he is surely caught by Eric and Malik, he has no choice but to say something. Tess does have issues, but no one deserves disrespect upon disrespect.  If you want to separate or divorce then do so, don't sit up here and cheat.  This was a whole month later.  Sounds too calculating from Jay.  He had time to think and plan and lie to his wife.  If she never trusts him again, it would be no one choice but himself.    She thought she had a good guy.  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 12:05 am

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

Both tess and jay have a lot of problems and don't know how to communicate them to each other. I think if tess finds out it will really break her this time. I don't know what to expect now

Reviewer: Keys72095 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 12:04 am

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

Starting to think jay needs therapy more than Tess. He's a douchebag and a wuss

Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 11:56 pm

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

Somebody is in trouble.  So good, I live the drama.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 11:42 pm

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

damn...

Reviewer: DecemberUnrest Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 11:29 pm

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

I am hurt beyond belief. I love jay but this is some bullshit! I will hold in and see where thus gies. Tess has some issues too.

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 11:16 pm



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