Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

I just can't with Jay anymore. I honestly think tess should divorce him she deserves so much better

Reviewer: andrea91 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 11:11 pm

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

Jay is a spiteful, malicious, immature, conniving little BITCH!!!!!!!!    What an ASSHOLE!!!!!!!

Reviewer: libby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 10:54 pm

Title: Brown Eyes of Green...

Jay is a spiteful, malicious, conniving little bitch 

Reviewer: libby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 10:51 pm

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

nope they won't they done and dusted they a miserable couple from the get go.

Reviewer: dounome Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 10:26 pm

Title: A Series of Bad Choices...

This chapter had my heart pounding and my hands shaking this is the first time this happened to me. This was a great chapter and I can't wait to read what will happen next. 

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Date: January 07 2014 10:18 pm

Title: Disastrous Therapy Sessions and Illicit Exchanges at Coffee Shops...

Wow, good chapter.  They have so many problems, but hopefully they will figure it all out.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 04:31 pm

Title: Disastrous Therapy Sessions and Illicit Exchanges at Coffee Shops...

WoW, this is getting good!! I don't think Jay is overreacting, he has every right to be upset. Keep the chapters coming!! 

Reviewer: MONTEY7877 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 12:17 am

Title: Disastrous Therapy Sessions and Illicit Exchanges at Coffee Shops...

Shit is getting real! And both of them are trippin...

Reviewer: DecemberUnrest Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2014 07:38 pm

Title: Brown Eyes of Green...

Wow really Tess she really does need therapy & they need couples therapy. I understand about her none emotional coping in a not so good way but to keep not one but two pregnancies a secret was just wrong but I think more important is Why after what Eric put her through didnt she tell her husband when she got pregnant then miscarried the first time so he could be there for her don't she know she could have died then the last one six months that she didnt say a word about. Jay has a right to be angry hurt & disappointed with her she has taken something from him he can't get bk the first time ok but the 2nd without a word he lost a child he wasn't even given a chance to know existed & that's wrong. Therapy & some soul searching 2 get to the bottom of some deep issues. Now Jay clearing his head & up pops the devil coincident or not. Then she offers him her card he shouldn't have even talked to her but to say hi bye nothing else to put the card in his pocket what for not good not good especially with their marriage in such a fragile state shouldn't even have his wife questioning anything she has enough on her plate. Wooooooohoooooo as you can tell I love these two character & this story update can't wait for more Bad move Jay

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 06 2014 07:22 pm

Title: Disastrous Therapy Sessions and Illicit Exchanges at Coffee Shops...

Wow is all I can say. Yea Tess was wrong for not telling him but jay shouldn't be trying to hurt even more than she already is. Maybe they just need to call it quits. He shouldn't of pursued her in the first place. He knew everything that was going on with her being engaged to Eric and being I love with him. It's not a surprise.  And still put himself in the equation. I don't feel sorry for jay honestly. Right now he's looking like another Eric to me.

Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2014 06:03 pm

Title: Disastrous Therapy Sessions and Illicit Exchanges at Coffee Shops...

Jay Jay Jay, don't even go down that road wtih Toni again, I know you are angry with Tess now, but don't make this situation any worse than it is.. Toni has not only told you she is bipolar, but still wants you, STAY AWAY.

As for Tess, IMHO she is still comparing Eric and Jay, she can't seem to see that Jay is NOTHING like Eric, her head tells her that Jay is a BETTER MAN but her HEART can't seem to let the past go, and until she does that, then her and Jay are going to be OVER.

As for Eric he is the SCUM of the EARTH... nothing but a SELFISH BASTARD.. he needs to just GO AWAY.

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2014 02:54 pm

Title: Disastrous Therapy Sessions and Illicit Exchanges at Coffee Shops...

I hate Eric so much now that I want struck by lightening twice whole holding a golf clib standing under a tree!!  Tess  is at fault for that because that should have the last wake up call for their relationship.  Jay shouldn't have taken that card Honi maybe he back on her meds but she can't be trusted.   Jay has pissed me off, you know that Tess doesn't like her more importantly you know that Honi wants you so why entertain that crazy ho? These two are making me crazy!! Their marriage won't make it as they are each to immature for that  big of a commitment.  Great chapter!! Tess continues to piss me off!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2014 02:39 pm

Title: Disastrous Therapy Sessions and Illicit Exchanges at Coffee Shops...

With each chapter I like Jay less and less. Seriously, at this point I'm not even rooting for them to be together and here's why, first I think most people have been stupid for love at one time and sometimes we do things that lead to lots of regret. An abortion isn't an easy thing and obviously it's been on Tess's heart for a long time. There are a lot of psychological ramifications involved in having an abortion. I can't say Tess is stupid or she's evil for what she did, perhaps in that time of her life she didn't feel she could handle a child without its father's support. Whatever her reason it happened. 

As for her not telling Jay about the miscarraiges, should have told him but she probably wasn't far enough along in the first place. Perhaps she planned on telling him in a romantic or exciting way and then lost it. Maybe she didn't want him to be disappointed, maybe she was scared he'd think less of her. That's got to make her feel like she's being punished for aborting her first child. Jay was the one who pushed her to go back to counseling to iron out their issue and when she finally tells him what's been heavy on her heart, he blows up and storms out the room like prick. And apparently he's not over her being with Eric, when as she pointed out they were barely together. It's apparent he really hasn't forgiven her or else he would keep throwing it in her face and he has more than once.

 

AND to put the icing on the cake, he take Hoe-ni's card? Seriously? Thatw as the ultimate sign of disrespect and he did it purposely because his feelings are hurt. And when Tess finds that card, and I know she will, he'll blow it off like he did before. He still doesn't think it's a big deal how he led Hoe-ni on in the first place because he wanted his "ego stroked"

Screw Jay. I hope he gets hit by a bus.

Thank you for another entertainig update. 



Author's Response:

When I read "Screw Jay. I hope he gets hit by a bus." I died...lol...

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2014 01:59 pm

Title: Brown Eyes of Green...

This marriage is sinking fast.  Tess got her promotion and it turned out to be like a big ole hunk of cake that you realize you don't really want it. 

Well, she is drinking a lot and she's not dumb enough to be pregnant and drinking.  Whatever happen in the past must be bad  and Tess should muster up the courage and tell Jay that she had a baby, she worked the pole, she accidentally killed someone, etc, because it is eating her up inside. 

Eric has forgotten that beat down Jay gave him.  The only way to stop this clown is to make him look like a clown publicly.  He is just too spiteful to be a man.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2014 01:26 am

Title: Marriage, Alcohol and Other Things on the Rocks....

Tess is getting on my nerves, she needs to grow up.  If Jay wants a marraige and family he better get a work life balance .

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 11:25 pm

Title: Brown Eyes of Green...

What the heck is going on with Tess I wonder. Anywho update soon

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 07:19 pm

Title: Marriage, Alcohol and Other Things on the Rocks....

Oh Tess, haven't learned yet, girl? Although, this latest event is ALL on PrickEric. Her reaction to it is what she needs to address. Jay is so right, they need counseling and she needs to see her therapist. This is going to get messier before it gets better. I just don't understand Tess. Still holding part of herself from Jay, how is that marriage supposed to work when she does that? Jay has put her on notice. Hopefully, she'll act.

I have been trolling for an update for the longest and you did not disappoint.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 04:47 pm

Title: Marriage, Alcohol and Other Things on the Rocks....

Why do I think something in particular happened on this date in her past that she is letting eat away at her.  Like she had an abortion, adoption or something.  I don't think it has anything to do with Eric per se.  Why is he still trying to start some mess.  Just leave the girl alone.  ughh.  I am so happy Jay stated they needed counseling and I do believe both need to work on how to balance work with the marriage.  Neither one should be gone for long periods without seeing each other.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 02:20 pm

Title: Marriage, Alcohol and Other Things on the Rocks....

I forgot to ask about this secret that Tess has, hasn't she leaned anything? Truth always comes to light! Tess is working that last nerve!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 02:14 pm

Title: Marriage, Alcohol and Other Things on the Rocks....

One other thing, does Tess not have the internet on her phone so she could pull up fb that way? When Eric got on that elevator, I would have immediately pressed the button for the next floor. He's nothing but a snake in the grass.



Author's Response:

Tess does, but I did some research and Facebook is indeed illegal and censored except if you have connections or you can acces it through a proxy...And due to Tess' none tech (savviness?) She doesn't really know how to get through to Facebook until she is outside of China. If you remember Eric mentions his connection to the CPC (Communist Party of China) so like every snake in the grass he has a way around the rules...Just to clarify some of the details...

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 02:05 pm

Title: Marriage, Alcohol and Other Things on the Rocks....

Why isn't she seeing her therapist?  Why is Eric still still trying instigate drama in between Tess and Jay? Hold it Tss you had sex with fool while Jay just let that ho massage him and feel him up because was dumb and in shock. You both need to chill and he had every to ask questions! !  Eric isstill an asshole!  Tess' dumb ass should have listened to Jasmine!!  Tess is still making ky left eye twitch! ! Good stuff BClover!!  Happy New Year! ! More please! 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 02:04 pm

Title: Marriage, Alcohol and Other Things on the Rocks....

It's good to see an update for this. What happened to Tess' therapy sessions? She is still acting the same as she was before and I'm glad Jay finally suggested they both go. After what happened with Toni, I thought that was a given. 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 01:59 pm

Title: Brown Eyes of Green...

Loved the update but have to say I really don't like Tess' character. On the upside this is a testament to how well you write - I'm so invested in the characters. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: katie Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 01:42 pm

Title: For Jay's Design...

Awesome chspter and story so far!

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Date: December 10 2013 03:57 pm

Title: For Jay's Design...

Great update... I do hope that Tess and Jay do talk to a conserlor

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 08 2013 04:16 am



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