Title: Chapter 11

I love this story, can't believe I almost passed it up. I hope this story gets finished. I would bust up if Eva was pregnant!

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2016 03:00 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Lol, the banter between father and son was freaken hilarious. Doesn't seem like Ji Soon's father is the bad guy he was hype up to be....looks to be someone or group ofpeople are the hindrance in this story.What's going in on??? Is Eva in danger?? I'm hoping for a update soon...please! Can't wait to read more!!

 

Reviewer: leogal Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2014 11:49 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Lol/ loved that chapter.  excellent,  the father is actually cute.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2014 10:37 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Thanks for the reply and explanation. Now I am really intrigued. Great intro of Jung Sr. Keep it up. Happy writing!

Reviewer: dydrmr Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2014 06:11 am

Title: Chapter 11

Ji Soon is not helping himself by continuing to hide things.

Eva need to stop running everytime something goes wrong between them. Ji Soon isn't excused for forgetting their date.

These two need to work on communication.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2014 12:25 am

Title: Chapter 11

Ji Soon 's father was competely hilarious! I think he was just trying to protect Eva in his own awkward way! Loved his appearance!

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2014 01:34 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Who is Min Sik? You the mistake of using that name instead of his father's name.



Author's Response:

Yes, I did. The actor that I used as Ji Soon's father is Min Sik but the character's name is Choi Wun.  I'm sorry about the confusion.  Thank you for bringing that to my attention. :))

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2014 01:29 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Ji Soon Eva is very serious about your relationship being over and with her safety being an issue you should let her go!  What is up with his parents relationship?   Ji Soon how could forget about Eva when you claim to love her so much? Eva is pissed at you and your father showing up threatening her added gas to the fire. You are in trouble!!! Thank you for this update beastlover 18!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2014 01:18 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Is there a chapter missing?



Author's Response:

No, there is no missing chapter but what happened in that week is important and will be explained later on in the story. :))

Reviewer: dydrmr Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2014 12:53 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Lovely.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 21 2014 07:48 am

Title: Chapter 10

Aww i love the black/asian love you got going here.  I can't wait for the gangs to make an appearance and more sexy times between the two, hopefully with a little more privacy



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :) 

Yes, the gangs will be making an appearance expecially since Ji Soon's father found out about their relationship. 

Reviewer: Siren of the Darknessflame Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 11:20 am

Title: Chapter 10

Love this story. I like both of their personalities especially how they are honest with each other how they feel.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2014 05:30 am

Title: Chapter 10

OOoh trouble is on its way!!! Glad things are all cleared up in terms of Eva and Ji Soon misunderstanding. I foresee Ji Soon father being tons of trouble Eva doesn't even know what is coming. Very nice update wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Yes, Ji Soon's father does seem to be up to something and knows about Eva. I wonder how Ji Soon will react to the news. 

 

Reviewer: leogal Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2014 06:55 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Wonderful update



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed. XD 

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2014 06:12 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Ji Soon's father is going to try to pull him back into the life and he will Eva to do it.  Ji Soon is the man is a force of nature.   Bryan being gay never crossed my mind just him dating Will didn't either. Wow!!!  Jim' life is about to be over as he he is messing with Eva and Ji Soon loves him some Eva!  I vote for death of the new character Jim!! More please! 



Author's Response:

Yes, Ji Soon does love him some Eva and I have a feeling that things will become quite interesting since he knows that his father is keeping tabs on him. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2014 02:11 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I wonder what Ji Soon is into?!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2014 08:34 am

Title: The Cast

Love this story so far. Also using Kim Woo Bin as your muse, I just absolutely love him especially after watching The Heirs



Author's Response:

I actually didn't like him when at first when he introduced in Heirs. I thought he was evil rencarnated  but after he started softening up I began to like him so much so that I watched all of his dramas. =p

Reviewer: Talisha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 11 2014 08:26 am

Title: Chapter 9

Awww I like Ji Soon, he is really trying here with Eva but I guess his feels more for her than she for him.... don't get me wrong I can tell she is so into Ji Soon but she is fighting it and brushing it aside as meaning nothing. There is totally more to her than meets the eye. First I kind of thought Ji Soon was too rough but now I can see he his truly a gentlemen... a little full of himself but still respectful and gentlemanly.

 

I can't wait to read more!!! 

 

 

 

Reviewer: leogal Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 08:03 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter, I like him. 

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2014 03:44 pm

Title: Chapter 7

I like him,  love when she changed what he said to she needs to lose weight. Classic woman thoughts

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2014 03:16 pm

Title: Chapter 3

She was rude but confused how he got to his statement.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2014 02:40 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Eve Frustrates Ji Soon because her feelings are not where his are.   Eva has feelings for Ji Soin but dhe is fighting them tooth and nail.   This battlie of wills will be entertaining. More please!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2013 05:59 am

Title: Chapter 9

Eve Frustrates Ji Soon because her feelings are not where his are.   Eva has feelings for Ji Soin but dhe is fighting them tooth and nail.   This battlie of wills will be entertaining. More please!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2013 05:59 am

Title: Chapter 9

Eve Frustrates Ji Soon because her feelings are not where his are.   Eva has feelings for Ji Soin but dhe is fighting them tooth and nail.   This battlie of wills will be entertaining. More please!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2013 05:45 am

Title: Chapter 9

Wonderful update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2013 09:13 pm



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