Reviews For Consequence
Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

Hi Joelle! 

I remember reading this story for the first time a few years ago and being completely taken with Anthony and Natalia's story. I come back and reread so often, still in awe of these characters and your writing. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us. I'm wondering if you have any plans on reuploading this story? I've been dying for a another reread!

 

Thank you.

Reviewer: Boiwithapple Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2022 10:57 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

Hello Joelle Jax,

Is this lovely story going to be published soon? Will you be taking down your remaining stories.

Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

Hi Bain!

I don't have any immediate plans to take down any additional stories, or to publish Consequence. If that changes, I'll be sure to post an update on my profile and/or the story itself. 

Thanks so much for your continued interest and support!

 

Reviewer: blueangel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2022 07:26 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

Just reading this novel again......and again. I love these characters so much. I do not know if you're going to removed this story, so taking advance of reading this novel again. Such a lovely story and its writer is divine.  Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you, Bain!!! I don't have any immediate plans of removing it. If I do, it'll be for publishing, and I'll have a comp copy just for you.

Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2021 09:16 am

Title: Chapter 3 - Sexual Healing

OMG damn. What a savage. I love it.

Reviewer: TheDaezy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2020 03:55 pm

Title: Epilogue

My lord, this is the best story i have been graced to read in my 27 years on this earth. You have such a way with words. You were able to make every character so REAL and relatable in your descriptions and storytelling. Everything about this story and how you executed it were perfect! Thank you for sharing this story with us. You have true talent. 


Reviewer: kellibear91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2019 06:29 am

Title: Epilogue

I like Rich, great story. Thank you

Author's Response:

YW.  Thank you, Lilsunseeker!

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 04:25 am

Title: Epilogue

Hello Joelle Jax,

I'm finally able to write a review for your story. Your story has touch me so deeply that I could not sleep at night. The relationship between Anthony and Natalia was breath taking and I felt like a peeping tom, while I read the ups and downs of this couple. It have been over two months since I had read this story and I'm ashamed because I did not leave a review for every chapter. You are amazing writer,their are few authors that are able to write such outstanding literature. Your writing is a thing of beauty. Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for this AMAZING review, Bain!  Your kind words mean the world to me, especially at this complicated time in my writing life.  And please don't feel bad about not reviewing every chapter.  I truly appreciate you taking the time to share this one.  Again, thank you, and be blessed.

Joelle  

Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2015 01:15 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

I loved this story and the realistic imperfect characters. Your writing is just wonderful. 

Some of my fave sections are with Rich and I absolutely cannot wait for his story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the wonderful reivew, Cocoverdad!  So glad to hear you enjoyed the story. 

Rich is one of those characters I never expected to love.  I called myself taking a break from agnst before writing his story (which will be full of it), but with LGN I've come to realize I'm irrefutably drawn to the stuff.  So I'll be headed back Rich's way soon.  Thanks again!  

Reviewer: cocoverdad Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 03:17 am

Title: Epilogue

your storytelling makes me want to live in the space in your stories. What a great ending.



Author's Response:

What a fantastic compliment.  Thanks jlly16!!!  : D

Reviewer: jlly16 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2015 03:04 pm

Title: Epilogue

my tears went down hard had to read it about 3 times....its over?

:(



Author's Response:

I'm afraid it is.  But you'll get more of the whole crew in Rich's story.  Thanks Keyajackson!

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2015 10:05 pm

Title: Chapter 28 - Four's a Tough Crowd

I adore Rich for so many reasons and on so many levels.  Oh, in my head CT Tamburello is Rich, there is no bigger lovable douchebag alive. 



Author's Response:

Lol.  CT's a good choice.  I always encourage readers to see the character as whomever they choose.  In my head, Rich looks like Taylor "Too Delicious for Words" Kinney. 

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 04:37 am

Title: Chapter 5 - Rotten Trees, What Fruit They Bear

Oh Anthony.  You are sublime.



Author's Response:

I have to agree.  Thanks GreenRoots!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2015 04:04 pm

Title: Chapter 3 - Sexual Healing

Natalia is fucking gangster



Author's Response:

She's definitely something.  Thanks GreenRoots!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2015 03:40 pm

Title: Epilogue

GREAT



Author's Response:

Thanks minxie!

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2015 10:53 am

Title: Epilogue

I'm ugly sobbing just want you to know. Bravo!! This was an emotional, superbly spun story that made me laugh, want to hurt someone (namely Barbara, Mercede, and Richard), and anticipate each new chapter unsure of how things would be resolved, but it was a wonderful journey. Ant and Natalia are proud parents, Rich Jr is on the road to getting his life back together and doting on his niece and nephew, and all toxic individuals have been flung out of their lives. The reunion with Ant and his uncle and eventually his father was simply beautiful. And that vicious, lying Mercede going so far as to forge a death certificate to keep a man away from his child, how cold-blooded and selifsh can you be? Ugh, but enough ranting, thank you SO much for sharing this story with us. Looking forward to what you have cooking in that magnificent brain of yours next!!



Author's Response:

Lol @ the ugly sob.  Aww...  Thanks for this and all your wonderful, insightful reviews!  I'm so happy to have had you along on this journey.  Rich's story is next.  Hope to see you there.  Thanks Lapis Love!!!

Reviewer: Lapis Love Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 10:52 pm

Title: Epilogue

PERFECT......Thank you.

Nyeesha



Author's Response:

Thanks Nyeesha!

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 03:40 am

Title: Epilogue

Great story! Great characters! Great Author! Best story ever! I know it has been asked before but I am asking again. When are you publishing? I would buy your books in a heartbeat... Good going JJax!

...Introspection



Author's Response:

I don't have any plans to publish in the foreseeable future, but do plan to keep writing.  Thanks for the wonderful review, Introspection!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2015 06:17 pm

Title: Epilogue

I would love to read a sequel! Where Ant and Nat get married.  I would love to read more about Rich and his lady love as wel.l. Please? 



Author's Response:

You will get all that and more : )  Stay tuned...

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2015 04:33 pm

Title: Epilogue

This was my fav chap!!! Really touching, I had no choice but to celebrate with some (oh well, a river..) tears ! It could have been wonderful to read about David and his grandchildren's encounter. But this chap was a masterpiece on its own. Wonderful job girl !!!! (And Rich and his nephew/niece, just hilarious!!).



Author's Response:

What a wonderful compliment!  Thanks Peanut!  I'll be sure to include some Grandpa David and grandbaby time in Rich's story just for you.  

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 07:06 pm

Title: Epilogue

Tear Jerker!!! You hear me? Tear jerker!!! A great ending for a phenomenal story! I can't wait for Rich's story and a revisit of Natalia and Anthony! Loved it. Loved it. Loved it! 



Author's Response:

Thanks Brown Mocha!!!  So happy you enjoyed it!  More Rich, Nat, and Ant is in the works : )

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 04:11 pm

Title: Epilogue

Oh, my...the epilogue brought me to tears...what a fitting end to a marvelous tale.  So glad Ant got to be reunited with his real father who had been made to give up all hope of his existence by his spiteful, evil "mother".  Some people really do not deserve to be parents, and Mercede definitely falls into that category.  Glad she is no longer allowed to be a part of Anthony's life or the lives of his immediate family.

Rich really deserves someone special to love and care for him; he has shown himself to be loyal, dependable and the real deal time and time again.  Can't wait to read his story; I know you will fill us in on little tidbits from Ant and Natalia's lives during the telling of Rich's tale.

It would be awesome to have this story on my kindle, as it is far superior to any of the stories I currently have, but I do understand if you decide not to go the publishing route.  I must say that I would buy your book in a instant if you did decide to publish; it's really that good.

Thank you for another thoroughly absorbing tale and I look forward to reading whatever your amazing mind conjures up next!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the amazing review, Amiefuzzy!  Publishing isn't a "definite never," just a "not in the near future."  But thanks so much for the support.  It is very much appreciated : )

I agree with you on both Mercede and Rich.  She's a horror and he really is a gem.  He will get his chance at the love and happiness he deserves.  Questions is, is he ready for it?  

Unc is all about his brother, Sis, and those babies, so you will definitely get a peek into their lives in his story.  

Thanks again, Amiefuzzy! 

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 03:22 pm

Title: Epilogue

Oh my god. No words. Brilliant. absolutely brilliant.



Author's Response:

Thanks GreenRoots!!!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 10:22 am

Title: Epilogue

superb. magnificent. amazing - i have run out of words. this chapter had everything. loved how you wrote that David's love survived life and death -  this reunion was everything and it sucks that it's the end, lool! i want more. yup. i'm greedy like that =P

thank you again and again, times 1000 - this has been an excellent read!!

h

 



Author's Response:

You are very welcome, Yuukiyanagi!  Thank you for the wonderful reivew!  So happy to have had you along for the ride.

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 07:22 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

Simply brilliant. I'm little sad that it's the end. Barbara and Mercedes...I can't!!!



Author's Response:

I know; they're still awful.  Thanks lleendaah!

Reviewer: lleendaah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 05:48 am

Title: Epilogue

OMG!!!  i usually don't review..But damn! this was such a good story! i'm so sad that it's ending!!! But it was a wonderful ending and i legit cried!! You should do like a 5 years later or something just like one chapter in their lives 5 years after everything! and I want to see who the girl that Rich like is!.



Author's Response:

A five year flash forward isn't off the table, but you'll definitely get a glimpse of Nat and Ant pre- and post-babies and have a chance to get to know Rich's lady love in his story.  Thanks so much for taking the time to review, chocojojo16!  It is much appreciated : )

Reviewer: chocojojo16 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 03:28 am



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