Reviews For Consequence
Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

Brilliant!! I loved this story from beginning to end! As I was reading the Epi and realized that his father was in the airport, i sat straight up in the bed and the tears could not be stopped--GREAT WRITING!!! Take a bow--and thank you for sharing this beautiful story.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Mya1967!  So happy you enjoyed it.



Author's Response:

Thanks Mya1967!  So happy you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: mya1967 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 02:40 am

Title: Epilogue

I'm so happy Anthony got to meet his father. Now for his mother,I dislike this women more and more. Don't she know whats done in the night always comes to light, saying that Anthony drowned, that is someone with a dark heart. I'm glad she's not allowed around the twins. J.J. Thank you for your vision, your talent and your time.



Author's Response:

You are so very welcome, Jacqua43.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 11:28 pm

Title: Epilogue

You have amazing writing skills and when you get published I will be there to purchase, thankyou for this awesomes story, I laughed and cried along with Natalia and Anthony, now I see you have another story up, I'm heading over there now :))



Author's Response:

Thanks Dounome!!!  So glad you enjoyed my little tale!

Reviewer: dounome Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 09:17 pm

Title: Epilogue

This chapter was amazing and beautiful. This whole story was an emotional rollercoaster. I wouldn't have had it any other way. Thank You for sharing this story with us.



Author's Response:

YW : )  Thank you!



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YW : )  Thank you!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 06:28 pm

Title: Epilogue

You are a very talented author; it felt like I, personnally, knew the characters, that they were friends of mine telling their story to their new best friend, me! Thank you! Please continue with Rich's story!

Consequence deserves to be published, so that others can read their story! 



Author's Response:

What a wonderful review!  Thanks Katt!  I don't have any plans to publish at the moment, but I will definitely be working on Rich's story.  Hope to have you along for the ride.

Reviewer: Katt Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 06:24 pm

Title: Epilogue

What an ending. Wow! Best Epilogue I've EVAH read! Simply, Brilliant!

As I was reading and Abraham was talking, I was, wait a sec, he never said that David was dead. And he continued, and I stopped breathing. And then when he kept saying we, I was like, could it BE?!? And then when he looked over Ant's shoulders, I was like, DAMN! It's DAVID! And the reunion was soooo worth the wait. It was kinda sad, I realized that Ant had never had a man claim him as his son in any meaningful way. Crushes the soul or would have a lesser man. It says a lot about Ant that he perserved in the face of being raised by that viper and being subjected to the emotional abuse heaped upon him by that viper's husband.

Speaking of the viper, she's worst than I thought. Just when you think it couldn't get any worse, you learn more of the truly evil things she's done. Who does that? Did she really love Ant? I can only see him being a possession, one that she didn't want his real father to have. And Asshole, Sr only wanted to use Ant as a surrogate for his rage against the viper's infidelity.

Barb, no words. That lizard will never change and now she's been banned. Hopefully, for life. She's probably somewhere spreading her venom polluting someone else's world. Someone needs to beat that azz.

Rich, see he can change. I just love how much he loves his brother. Just because he's not his bio-brother means nothing when it comes to having love for someone that you grew up as siblings and always having each other's back. Unc has two little ones to corrupt. It's going to be a hoot. So, interesting that Rich seems to be enamored with someone of the female persuasion. At least we know that Nat knows her. Wonder if it's her BFF? I can't wait for his story.

This story has been a rollercoaster. I can so remember in the beginning being stabby with how Nat was acting. Then Ant pissed me off. Then they both started slowly acting like adults and all was forgiven. I think I grew along with them. A story in the hands of a lesser writer could've been a nightmare. JJ, in your hands, it was a tale well crafted that brought the reader right along with the characters and made for a really enjoyable story. A job well done, Chica.



Author's Response:

To be honest, I think Mercede may love Anthony, but not as selflessly as a mother should.  Her and Richard's happiness is and has always been more important than Anthony's.  Thankfully, Anthony had Pop-Pop and an innate sense of integrity that survived Richard's and Mercede's foolishness.

Lol.  Yeah, Bitter Bear Barb is ruined for life.  Poor Kline.

Unc does have a serious crush, and it is for someone Nat knows.  But like Nat, I'm not at liberty to say whether or not it's Takara.  (I'm awful. I know).  I will say that Takara will play a part in Rich's story.  A big one.

I'm so glad you were willing to bear with Anthony and Natalia through their growing pains, and that you stuck with the story.  Thanks so much for sharing your insight and for this amazing review, BellaChica!  

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 05:38 pm

Title: Epilogue

I can honestly say this story is one best that I had the pleasure to reading in a long time. Thank you for sharing  this amazing story 



Author's Response:

Thank you, GoldenFro!  So happy you enjoyed it.



Author's Response:

Thank you, GoldenFro!  So happy you enjoyed it.



Author's Response:

Thank you, GoldenFro!  So happy you enjoyed it.



Author's Response:

Thank you, GoldenFro!  So happy you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: GoldenFro Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 03:53 pm

Title: Epilogue

I loved this chapter.

Mercedes is a cruel woman. I could maybe forgive (but never forget) her doing that if Richard had been a good father.

I loved this story.

There was a consistent spelling error. Banned.

Have you published any of your stories?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the heads-up, JFJD.  I have not published any of my stories.  But I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this one : )  Thanks!

Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 01:55 pm

Title: Epilogue

So, it took me a while to get through this epilogue, since the tears would not stop flowing and the eyes kept stinging.  This epilogue, as a matter of fact, this whole story, had me all in my emotions; from the his to the lows.

 

Mercede, I have no words for this low-down, despicable, wretched piece of trash of a human being that could rip a man that wholeheartedly loved his son the way she did, and allow the son that she claimed she loved so much to be mistreated in such a horrible manner by an equally wretched piece of filth known as Richard Talerico Sr.  May the knowledge that she will never be in her grandbabies lives rip her soul apart for the rest of her days.

 

Richard - I wish he would go play in New York City traffic at 5pm on a Friday evening.  Oh and take Barbara with him.  Bitch asses.

 

I am SOOO happy Anthony was reunited with his father and a family who never knew him, but loved him all the same.  I really hope that he can travel to see the rest of his family and finally gain the fatherly and familial love that he never had but craved.  I also am happy that Natalia is still by his side.  She went through so much, grew so much, and I am truly happy that love conquered all with those two, they got it together and now have a beautiful family and love to show for it!  Cheers to them!!

 

 

JJ you have an amazing talent that not many writers posess.  You have the ability to draw people in and make them feel like they are physically there, just with your words.  Reading this epilogue, I felt like I was standing right there with Anthony, Natalia, David and Abraham, watching, live and in living color.  The descriptiveness was extraordinarily amazing, and that is such a powerful tool in writing.  You really should publish, though I know you stated you did not have plans to.  Should you change your mind, my book savings account is ready to purchase.

 

Thank you for sharing your talent and this amazing story with us.

 

**PS.  Are you going to finish the other story that you wrote with Kaleesa, when she went to Russia with her boo and his adorable daughter?  I forgot the name of it, but I was hooked on that one too!!



Author's Response:

Lol @ calling Richard and Mercedes "bitch asses"!  The title definitely fits. 

There will be lots of catching up happening between Antthony and his family, and momentus occasions for Anthony, Natalia, and the twins, some you'll get to see if you tune in for Rich's story.  

Thanks so much for the wonder compliment and vote of confidence.  It is much appreciated and does my writing-obsessed heart so good : )

And yes, I will complete and post Regret (and Resignation) as soon as possible.  

Thanks for your continued interest, babygirl2cute4u, and for the awesome review!

Reviewer: babygirl2cute4u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 01:24 pm

Title: Epilogue

Oh dear Lord this was fantastic!!  Can we have a small wedding?  

I am sure everyone reading this wish we could bend Richard and Mercedes over and give each a good, hard kick. 



Author's Response:

Lol.  You will get to see the wedding (and all the drama that comes with it) in Rich's story.  Thanks Penelope!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 06:53 am

Title: Epilogue

Wow what an ending. So they had healthy twins a girl & a boy brought life back to his Nana.how he reconnected to his father was just beautiful. The betrayal of his mom & Rich was so shocking for them to be so cruel & calculatingly devious keeping him from his real father & treating him like trash. Glad he cut them out of his life indefinitely

Author's Response:

Yes, the parental terrors, along with Barb, have been vanquished.  Let's hope it stays that way.  Thanks Kvgurl!

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 05:44 am

Title: Epilogue

Thank you for sharing this story. It was perfect from start to finish and evoked so many emotions that I can not begin to express. 



Author's Response:

Thanks AnnieNathanson!  So happy you enjoyed Natalia and Anthony's story.

Reviewer: Annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 05:28 am

Title: Epilogue

Bravo! Fabulous! Awesome work.  Hope to read Rich's story soon! 



Author's Response:

Rich's story is in the works.  Thanks kuriouskale!

Reviewer: kuriouskale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 04:30 am

Title: Epilogue

Dammit, why you gotta go and make a sista cry. That epilogue was amazing, this entire story was outstanding and ended the way it should have. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I'm so so glad Father and Son was reunited. I'm all up in my feels now. 



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks Happy2bNappy!  So glad to have had you along for the ride.  Thanks so much for reviewing and sharing your insight.  It is much appreciated.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 03:33 am

Title: Epilogue

I know that I haven't left many reviews on this story but as cliche as it sounds I am just lost for words. I can't explain how amazing and realistic this story was. You did such a terrific job on this. You are truly talented. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Melani!!!  

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 03:10 am

Title: Epilogue

I'm not gonna cry.....where's my kleenex....I know I have a box around here somewhere



Author's Response:

Lol.  Thanks VeMo!

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 02:51 am

Title: Epilogue

Brilliant!



Author's Response:

Thanks Jahchannah!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 02:00 am

Title: Epilogue

I'm crying like a baby!  Perfect.  I hate to see it end, but it was so good!  Thanks!



Author's Response:

YW.  Thanks Michmom!!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 01:53 am

Title: Epilogue

omg! That was amazing! Im so happy everyone found happiness and that Ant finally got to meet his father and uncle. I look forward to your next story.



Author's Response:

Thanks hellowWORLD!  So glad you enjoyed the story.  Imagination willing, next on deck is Rich's story.  Stay tuned...

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 01:33 am

Title: Epilogue

This is just too beautiful. From a deep, dark place of black hatred loneliness to a place of joy, love and family that is the true consequence. It's a fitting end for both of these characters. I had to cry at the end. I love it.



Author's Response:

Wonderfully put.  Thanks Dallas5star!

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 01:25 am

Title: Epilogue

Got me over here snotting and crying.  How dare you, Joelle Jax.

 

Perfect ending to this story.

 

I still want to roundhouse kick Barbara and Karate chop Mercedes in the throat.



Author's Response:

Understandable.  They certainly deserve it.  Thanks Jaye Sims!

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 01:12 am

Title: Epilogue

This last chapter was truly amazing on so many levels. The fact that Anthony and Natalia both got their dreams was so utterly amazing that I am at a loss for words. All I can say is I am glad that Anthony's father wasn't dead. And that he got to meet the man that has wanted him from the beginning. I am also glad that both he and Natalia got rid of the hate that was clogging up their lives. Barbara and Mercedes both deserved much worse than they got. How dare Barbara try to make herself part of a family that she only wants to be apart of because they won't allow her to be. And how dare Mercedes take Anthony away from David by claiming he was dead. I mean that only would have me putting Mercedes in the ground. But I am glad that Anthony stayed close to those that truly loved him no matter what. This truly was an amazing story, thanks for sharing it with us.



Author's Response:

Thanks JovanBleu!  I so appreciate you taking the time to review and share your insight here and throughtout this tale.  And I hope to see your input on the next.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 01:09 am

Title: Epilogue

I wish more to your book...I would like to know the reaction of David's mom.   Great job



Author's Response:

If you tune in for Rich's story, you'll get a peak into the progression of Anthony's relationship with his father and family, including Grandma Nazari.  Thanks Bredreaway!

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 12:56 am

Title: Epilogue

Such a lovely epilogue.  Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

YW.  Thank you, Meg.

Reviewer: Meg Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 12:29 am

Title: Epilogue

I have so much to say. I am speechless. Anthony's mother is a low class bitch!! I am so happy his father lives!!! This was a wonderful story. I still can't believe I am allowed to read it for free!! Good job!! I look forward to Rich's story.

Author's Response:

Thanks Khamalani!!!  Rich's story is in the works.  Stay tuned...

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 12:00 am



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