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Title: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

Woohooo, she is past the first trimester, she is having twins and Anthony is going to look for his Dad.  Yayyyy!!!!!!  So happy with this chapter.  Those two bundles of joy are going to be soooo loved it will be ridiculous.  I am soooooo happy for them.  They deserve this sunshine admist the storms they have weathered.  It better be a rainbow outside of the hospital room when these two are born.



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Thanks Lajack1

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 04:45 am

Title: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

What a BLESSING, I'm happy for them they deserve it. Don't make me reminisce about when my babies were born, we have 15 year old triplets 2 boys and 1 girl and they are a handfull now and then i wouldn't trade it for the world. I hope anthony finds his father for the sake of his children and his self. I'm glad that nat is truly happy. GOOD JOB!!!!



Author's Response:

Triplets?  And teenagers?  OMG, you're a soldier.  Then again, they're a blessing at any age.  Thanks Jacqua!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 04:14 am

Title: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

Yaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!

 

*FIST PUMP*

 

We got the twins!  We got the twins!

 

I cried right along with Natalia!  I am so happy for them and am hoping that she has a healthy, happy and safe pregnancy with her precious babies...

 

Geez, sometimes you forget the characters are not real; they just get you all up in your emotions.

 

Bravo!!



Author's Response:

Lol!  So glad you could connect with the characters and enjoyed their story.  Thanks Babygirl2cute4u!

Reviewer: babygirl2cute4u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 03:50 am

Title: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

Yay!!! Twins...I'm so happy.  I just love this story so much. I hate it's ending, but that gives you a chance to write your next story (May be about Rich ??!)  Anyway, this story is perfect...one of my all time favorites! Thanks.



Author's Response:

Thanks Michmom!  So glad you enjoyed my little tale.  A story for Rich is a definite possibility.  I'll just have to see which way the creative wind blows. 

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 03:49 am

Title: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

YAY!! My campaign worked!!! Whoot! Twins! Oh yeah!!! That's so great. And the best part is, Mercede will never see them. Or maybe she will and Nat and Ant will tell her to fuck off. I'm still rooting for Richard to get hit by a car. At least get herpes or something. But I'm satisfied. So sad this story has come to an end. Looking forward to the epilogue. Looking forward to Richard's story! YAY!



Author's Response:

Thanks Happy2bNappy!  Glad you enjoyed it.  Epilogue in the works.

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Date: April 13 2015 03:41 am

Title: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

Another brilliant chapter!  Love it!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 03:35 am

Title: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

Another brilliant chapter!  Love it!



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Thanks Jahchannah!

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Date: April 13 2015 03:35 am

Title: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

YAYYY!! Twins...with Rich for an uncle and Barb for an aunt.

Thank you for sharing such a beautiful drama-filled story.  You had our emotions all over the place and that is exactly what a well writen story is suppose to do.  



Author's Response:

Lol. Rich will definitely have a place in the twins' life, but Barb might be an aunt in name only.  More on that in the epilogue.  Glad you liked the story.  Thanks Penelope!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 02:54 am

Title: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

AWWW! I am so happy for them! Hopefully we will find out about his father in epilogue.



Author's Response:

Details on David's fate and lots of other familial updates will appear in the epilogue.  Thanks Drea!

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 02:41 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

I certainly hope that you're getting this story published. You deserve it. It's outstanding. Good job!



Author's Response:

No plans to publish.  But I'm certainly glad you enjoyed the story.  Thanks Shea!

Reviewer: Shea Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 02:16 am

Title: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

Is it weird that applauded at the end of this?  I think it's weird, but I don't care.  Amazing as always, Ms. Jax.



Author's Response:

I don't think it's weird.  I think it's marvelous.  Thanks Jaye Sims!

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 02:14 am

Title: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

Their having twins!!  I hope that his father is alive and that the P.I. finds him. Natalia finally has it all, true love and babies on the way. So awesome !   Ant has forgiven Rich which is a good thing. Looking forward to the epi!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Pmgayles.  Epilogue in the works.

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Date: April 13 2015 02:05 am

Title: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

Fuckin'A!!!!!



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Lol.  Thanks Khamalani!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 02:02 am

Title: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

I am elated and you have me crying as if I were the one who got the news that she's expecting twins! Thank you so much for that beautiful story. 



Author's Response:

YW.  I'm so very happy you enjoyed it.  Thanks Katt!

Reviewer: katt Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 01:46 am

Title: Chapter 38 - The Bridges We Burn

Richard, Sr is a sack of shit and will always be a sack of shit. He still wants to protray himself as the f'in victim. That fucker has some big ass balls. GAH

I must admit that when I saw him at Rich's, I felt betrayed. Like WTF, Rich, why do you have that SOS in your apartment? Yeah, if Ant can't forgive Rich, I can see why. But they need to talk. Of all the Talericos, Rich and Ant need to get to a place where they can be brothers again. Rich loves Ant and no matter what Ant feels right now, Ant loves Rich.

As for that viper "family" of his, I wouldn't trust any of the fuckers as far as I can throw them. They're the ones who let the SOS throw Nat around like she was some f'in rag doll.

What the SOS and the ho did to Ant was child abuse. YEARS of it. They really don't need to be in his life. Sure, eventually, he'll need to forgive, for himself, but that doesn't mean that he'll EVAH need to associate with these fuckers again. As for Mercede, just because she birthed him, doesn't mean a damn thing. Animals give birth, and they treat their young better than she ever treated Ant, no matter how much snot she produces. f*ck her.

When Nat made that slip, I was screaming, SOMEONE'S GOING TO JAIL, TO-DAY! But alas, Rich didn't tumble to what Nat was about to say. 'cause, it would've been nothing left but for CSI to inspect the crime scene, scrape up that SOS and cart poor Rich off to the hoosegow.

The brief interlude where Nat allowed herself to hope was touching. When the baby (or babies) start to move more, she will start to enjoy. She'll love having a boy and a girl. I claim it and know that it is true. hee

Wonderful update Chica. Hope to see the talk that Rich and Ant need so desperately.

 

 



Author's Response:

Rich not turning his father away was sort of understandable (at least in my mind) in light of the fact that Richard is foul but still his father.  And it doesn't help that Rich is suffering in Anthony's absence.  It was a definite mistake on Rich's part, but not a fatal one.  You're right, Rich and Ant love each other and will eventually find a way to work it out.

Quite a few of the Talericos aren't worth the skin they're printed on--namely the ones who watched Richard attack Nat then took their turn doing the same.  But not all of them are bad.  There were those who stood by Anthony that night and continue to.  Whether he'll accept their support remains to be seen.

LOL @ the fourth, fifth. and sixth paragraph.  Priceless.

Thanks for this exceedingly entertaining review, BellaChica!!!

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2015 09:33 am

Title: Chapter 38 - The Bridges We Burn

I'm proud of Anthony.  He is not letting Richard get to him.  Richard is such a jerk He's trying to insinuate Anthony disrespected him by being with his ex to get at him. He knew Nat was done with  him and he didn't have a chance in hell of getting her back.  I'm glad Ant and Nat are  focusing on the pregnancy now and hopefully they won't entertain Richard anymore, because he has proven he only cares about himself. They really need this baby because they have to build a family from scratch.They only have about one or two family members on each side worth knowing.



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, you're pretty spot-on on the family front.  The important thing is that Ant and Nat realize that and are no longer entertaining the toxic bullsh*t, most notably Richard's.  They're focusing on them.  Thanks for commenting, VeMo!

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 11 2015 12:19 am

Title: Chapter 38 - The Bridges We Burn

Really Richard? he's got a lot of damn nerve. All he wants is an apology from Anthony like he's the injured party. I know that Nat doesn't like the family to fight but I'm about tired of her trying to be the diplomat. Richard deserves that ass whoopin he has coming and she has no business standing in the way of it. All she needs to do right now is love and support Anthony and take care of dem babies she's carrying. They say in church don't block the blessing well Nat a lot of people would be blessed if Richard got jacked up. I now I certainly would.  As for Mercede what the heck does she think she'll accomplish by trying to talk to Anthony? Does she think she can still manipulate him? That boat has saled. And what's up with the Talerico's trying to get in contact with Ant? Please let Ant find out what they did to Nat because they're all still owed a cuss out. Why hasn't anyone gotten their comeuppance yet? Mercede and Richard seem unscathed. In fact those two are trying to figure out how they can turn this around to make themselves look like the victims. These people frustrate me so much. Can we have a little karmic justice in the next chapter? Pretty please? Ant needs to know that Richard assualted Nat and the Talericos reveled in it. Richard needs to be finished Mortal Kombat style. FINISH HIM!! Mecede deserves a permanent yeast infection. I hope she dies alone with cats and when she dies the cats eat her face. 

I hope Ant can find out what happened to David and maybe he has some family he can connect with. It would be great for the twins or triplets to meet their palestinian family. I hope Ant can forgive Rich soon, he's suffering too. 

Again another great chapter. You like playing with my emotions don't you JJ? Yay! I started a movement!! We wants twins! We want twins! We want tiwins! LOL 

 



Author's Response:

Natalia has chosen to keep quiet about Richard manhandling her, not strictly for the sake of keeping the peace, but to avoid seeing Anthony go to prison for Richard's murder.  As I warned, Richard, Mercede, and the terrible Talerico are not going to be maimed or wake up bald and penniless in the gutter with fleas and some incurable disease.  Granted, that would be very satisfying, but not realistic or necessary.

Mercede has, for all intents and purposes, lost her son.  And Richard has lost the woman he loves to the son he mistreated, and they're both happy and completely committed to one another with a significant number of supporters in Richard's very own family--the same family he ruined his relationship with her for.  For a mother and man as in love with Nat and himself as Richard is, there is no worse fate. 

Rich and Ant will find a way to work it out.  At the end of the day, Richard is Rich's father, and even if Ant can't respect the man, he can respect the relationship.

After all your campaigning and chanting, I might have twins.

Thanks for the thoroughly entertaining review, Happy2bNappy!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 11:54 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

Glad she's coming along with her pregnancy although she's kinda sorta scared to admit it to herself that this is reel unlike the first time. Rich is still a douche he can't even tell him why he didn't let his real father have him & he treated him like crap. Glad Anthony & Nat. Have each other & his brother.




Author's Response:

Richard will fake innocence 'til the end.  But that's his to carry.  Nat and Ant are moving on and moving up.  Thanks Kvgurl!

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 08:25 pm

Title: Chapter 38 - The Bridges We Burn

Brilliant...



Author's Response:

Thanks Jahchannah!

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Date: April 10 2015 12:50 pm

Title: Chapter 38 - The Bridges We Burn

The suspense is killing me! I want to know about the baby, not stupid ass Richard. Every time I see there'sa New chapter I think this is it but every time I'm disappointed



Author's Response:

I don't like to leave reviews unanswered, but after all the time and effort I've put into this story (time and effort I've taken away from other areas of my life) trying to make it cohesive and complete, I don't really know how to respond.  

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 08:28 am

Title: Chapter 38 - The Bridges We Burn

Dag, Richard just needs to take a hint ( more like several ) and give up!



Author's Response:

I think he finally got it.  Thanks Musicluva!



Author's Response:

I think he finally got it.  Thanks Musicluva!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 04:50 am

Title: Chapter 38 - The Bridges We Burn

I keep reading them last few lines hoping that there's more, but alas there isn't.  I have told you how much I love this story?  Natalia's indecision, Anthony's.... Anthony? Rich's everything? This is so good,  I wish it was a movie!! Or at least a mini series!!!



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks Khamalani!!! Your review gave me the grins : D

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 03:27 am

Title: Chapter 38 - The Bridges We Burn

What can one say about this amazing chapter. I mean I wish Anthony would let this that love him and understand that it wasn't his families fault I hat his mother and the man he thought was his father were and are F***in cowards. It's not Richs fault that Richard doesn't care who he hurts as long as he gets what he wants, it's not Natalia's fault that she stumbled upon the truth and had to keep it a secret. Hopefully soon Ant will be able to get out of his own head and just be. I understand the need for answers but maybe he is asking the wrong questions. Maybe he needs to start asking himself who he is outside of all those people and the answer he gets will bring him to the realization that those people don't define him. He is a man that left his family to take care of his responsibilities. He is a man that lost a grieved a child that didn't exist. He is a man that manned up and took a job that would support himself while trying to support his passion for writing. He is a man that loved a woman so much that he finally dealt with the truth of those feelings and stopped living by the rules of his family. And hopefully he soon will be a father. That is who he is and hopefully he understands that those qualities are what make him him. Not Richard, Mercedes, or the father he never knew. Now if only we could get Natalia over the hump of failing and not being pregnant to, enjoying her pregnancy without fear. But the time we sees her doctor she will be out of her first trimester and hopefully truly pregnant. Looking forward to the next chapter. 

PS. Joelle you had me think Rich was with Barbara and that we why Natalia was stunned. Lol



Author's Response:

Great insight, JovanBleu!  I have nothing to add, except lol @ Rich and Barbara.  I think he'd rather be celibate...for life.  Thanks for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 03:10 am

Title: Chapter 38 - The Bridges We Burn

Oh Lawd...the stress!

Richard is truly a demon and ya'll know Mercedes is going to pop up at Uncle Sal's.



Author's Response:

She might, but Ant and Nat won't be there to find out.  Thanks Penelope!



Author's Response:

She might, but Ant and Nat won't be there to find out.  Thanks Penelope!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 02:31 am

Title: Chapter 38 - The Bridges We Burn

Perfect as usual. Please let them be pregnant!! Twins :)



Author's Response:

Thanks Michmom!

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Date: April 10 2015 01:39 am



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