Love this and Ellis meta human self too. Now, I think about it, Nick isn't the kind of man you'd date or have sex with, if the world wasn't ending. Cussing like a sailor and quick to anger, don't scream husband material. Yet, give a girl a post apocalyptic world and he'd be the first choice. Lol. Those gangster qualities goes well with break zombie knee caps.
I laughed so hard when I read this! You are right about Nick though. I don't know much about Francis, but he is kind of a rough neck too! Thanks CoraReviewer: Cora Jay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 16 2014 03:09 pm
Rochelle actually chained herself in the room! Ok that was a little reckless! Nick was an asshole but so was Ellis. It probably didn't help that Ro seemed to automatically choose the injured man's side. In this chapter everyone had a stupid moment. Sadly if there is only one chapter left I see a not so happy ending coming.
Hahaha! Yeah she did, but it's one of those chain locks that apartments have, not the heavy duty ones for gates. And yeah, these people are not thinking too clearly. Too much animosity... *shakes head* But do not fret, as mentioned, I think that this story is going to be a smidge bit longer than expected.Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2014 03:32 pm
Rochelle there is obviously something wrong with Ellis so it isn't smart to lock yourself in a room with him. I give this two thumbs up!!
Ha ha, thanks! Yeah, she needs to dial it back some. Now is not the time to try and make a point by throwing her weight around. Get it together Ro!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2014 03:11 pm
I can't remember if I already commented but the chemistry between these charactes.... makes me look forward to a zombie apocalypseReviewer: Cora Jay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 08 2014 05:00 pm
Steering away from romance is like Picasso trying not to draw. Impossible! Now allow Nick to stop at the nearest drug store so he can pick up some fire &ice. Lol
Ha ha! You are too right about this!Reviewer: Cora Jay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 08 2014 04:50 pm
I feel sorry for Nick. He gets not relief? LOL! What happene to Ellis? Will he turn into one of the Zombies? Only one or two more chapters? There's got to be more, right?
LOL! I know. I think Nick is contempt making her feel all warm and tingly all over (better to give than to receive). But yeah, I am shooting for one or two chapters; but if ideas keep popping in my head, it may be longer :)
Thanks for reading!
Date: February 08 2014 04:43 pm
if your mind was a printing press, I'd only work there to get more of this story AND anything else you'd cook up. Lmao! I'd be one lazy ass worker (Being that I'd steal newspapers to read on a lot of lunch breaks) but I'd always leave a review for ages.
For example the one I just wrote.Reviewer: Cora Jay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 08 2014 04:34 pm
I lov3 long chapters especially when they involve hot sex!! Nick put it on her and he bumped ugkies with Rochelle yet, Hound d8g this was good!
Ha ha ha! Glad you liked! Nick killed it! He put the pussy on the chainwax :)Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2014 03:19 pm
NO!!!!!!! Update soon pleaseReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 05:40 am
Rochelle and Nick have caught feelings but Nick is going to fight it. Ellis who I am so glad is alive will be laughing the whole way.
Ha ha! I know. Both of them need to quit running and denying that connection they know they have. I love that Ellis is pushing them in the right direction. I hope they just get there real soon. Thanks so much pmgayles!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2014 04:42 pm
YES! YES! YES! Have you ever thought of writing a gaming script?
As a matter of fact, I have! I have thought of making my own games, too. I just need to find a starting point. Right now, I am into my comics but I hope to one day have my stories go from one visual media to the next which includes animations and video games (rpg most likely). Thanks so much for reading!Reviewer: Cora Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 11:42 pm
I have to say that this is really good. Every time I play this as Rochelle though...Nick is always the one who follows me. :) I'll always play this game with this story in mind, thank you lol.
I am very happy and humbled by your compliment :)
It always seemed to me that Nick had a crush on Rochelle. Coach was the big brother, Ellis was the little brother, and Nick was the admirer who tried to hide his feelings with snarky remarks. LOL. Thanks for reading.
Date: January 28 2014 07:16 am
I love Ellis, he is such a sweetheart!! That almost kiss was hot so I am looking forward to the heat of Rochelle and Nick doing the do. NIck allow some happiness in your life and Rochelle is that happiness.
Ellis really is. He is so optimistic, kind, and fun. I hope to turn up the heat between Nick and Rochelle real soon. Thanks for reading. I always look forward to your comments, pmgayles!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2014 01:35 am
I'm really like this.
How can Rochelle not know Nick Like likes her.
i can't wait to see how that develops
LOL. I know. Some people are just blind to things like that...
Thanks for reading and commenting :)
Date: January 06 2014 12:52 am
I am glad that Rochelle admitted that she froze and it cost the two team members. Now maybe she can get her sugar honey ice tea together! So Nick was criminal before the disaster struck? What did Rochelle snd Ellis do? I give the short chapter two thumbs up!! More please!
Thanks so much!
Here are their occupations:
Coach- ...well he was a Coach for a highschool football team. No one knows his real name (and sadly, in this story, I think it's going to remain like that.)
Date: January 05 2014 10:28 pm
That was just you! Rochelle us bad luck if I were Nick I would leave her ass!! Who is Zoe? Ellis' s girlfriend? Nick, say something to Ro about her choking in life and death situations. I would love for a miracle to happen and Ellis survives but I know it won't. More please!
lol. I had a feeling it was.
Zoey is apart of the first L4D crew. I think they are from up north. I don't know where they're going (didn't play the first game), but in L4D2, she and her team crosses pathes with Ellis and his group. They help eachother out by getting power to the bridge (one of Zoey's teammates die in the process) and yeah. That's where they came in.
I hope Ellis survives this story too. He is too loveable, in my opinon.
Thanks so much for reading.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2014 01:03 am
I do love this..please continue. This game was brutal, I enjoyed playing it. I never knew people did fanfic for it.
Thanks so much! I love this game. I like that the story is a bit open-ended, which makes it great for writing fanfiction and adding onto the story! Thanks again for reading :)Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2013 11:15 pm