Title: Chapter 8

Great update.  The fire between them is beginning to simmer....

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2014 10:18 am

Title: Chapter 8

Loving how she's getting this litte girl under control. She needs to talk to Ben about sugaring Charity up...

Reviewer: Bookutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 23 2014 10:13 am

Title: Chapter 8

I love this little family, including Jas, already. Charity is rotten and sweet. Although there may be tantrums thrown and many tears when she doesn't get her way, she's going to flourish under Jas' care. I think daddy will too.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 23 2014 04:56 am

Title: Chapter 8

I am loving the chemisty between Ben and Jas even the chemistry that Charity has with Jas but lil bit is spoiled by daddy and if he doesn't get a reign on that soon he is going to have a monster on his hands but I also feel that Jas is going to be able to help him with that as well.

Though Stacey was not in this chapter she was slightly mentioned and that heifa is strongly getting on my nerves I have a feeling that if Jas has to interact with her too much she is going to have to put her in check sista style, head rolling and finger pointing and all....lol

Great update want more more more please.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2014 03:34 am

Title: Chapter 8

Love the update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2014 02:52 am

Title: Chapter 7

Great story - can't wait for more!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 06:30 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Ooh she done got on Stacy's bad side and didn't even do anything!

Reviewer: chocachocacandyland Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 07:39 am

Title: Chapter 7

Stacy definitely crazy. Its partly Ben's fault, he should've listened to Edward. Now that Jasmine is in the pic, Stacy is going to turn up the fatal attraction behavior.

Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 05:37 am

Title: Chapter 7

Loving this story so far, and I like Jasmine and her take charge attitude.. and I think that Ben is SMITTEN with her, and I know that they will both fight it HARD.

Ed is a RIOT, he is the kinda friend that Ben needs, he will tell him the TRUTH, no matter what... maybe you can find someone for him.

As for Stacy, she is nothing but a Gold Digging HO, and after that display in Ben's office, he not only needs a new chair, but he needs to FUMIGATE is office to get that FUNKY smell out the air, not telling what kinda disese that SKANK has, I mean wearing NO PANTIES at work is just TRIFFING... oh and get Ben new PENS as well.

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 04:57 am

Title: Chapter 7

I like all the characters in this story.  I even like to hate on Stacy.

Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 03:30 am

Title: Chapter 7

I want Jasmine with Edward or they become best friends/partners in crime. Good for her going in with what she wanted and setting clear boundaries. It is easy to get walked on being a babysitter or nanny. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 10:22 pm

Title: Chapter 7

And just like that Ed became my favorite character.

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 04:36 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Loving this! Cannot wait for the come to Jesus meeting between Stacy and Jasmine, that is going to be great!

Reviewer: diggity35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 03:12 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Oh oh...pop quiz!!! I got this! 

What do you think? I love the witty banter and relationship between Ben and Edward.

That Stacy is a nasty ho right? Nasty ho doesn't even cover it. Major understatement. 

Ben is_____________________.... A RECOVERING SEXAHOLIC BUT IF HE IS THAT FINE DO I REAL WANT HIM TO RECOVER?  Lol well maybe if he is a one woman sex fiend. Lol

 

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 01:00 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Great update.  I can see Stacy is going to be trouble.  Ill be glad when Ben gets rid of her butt!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 12:45 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Ben is a dick and he let's his lead him around. Stacy can only do what he lets her do and from where I'm sitting, he's all for getting up in that nasty ho. And she is nasty. I was glad she wouldn't shake hands with Jas. Who knows whether she had washed her hands after that nasty display in Ben's office.

I'm liking Edward. A LOT. I kinda wish he and Jas would explore something. I like Jas, she really knows her job. I hope Jas is no shrinking violet and if that nasty woman steps to her, Jas hands her ass to her on a platter. Damn, she's more mature than Ben.  And what about Ben, seems like he's been a dick for quite a while. At least, he loves his baby girl.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 11:39 am

Title: Chapter 7

Great job.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 07:05 am

Title: Chapter 7

Yes, that Stacy is way past a nasty ho.  All during that scene since I am a bit of a germafob I kept thinking about all the germs that could be on that pen after people have been touching it or it being on the floor anyway don't laugh at me (LOL).  I will be glad when Ed find some dirt on him.

I just love and I did say love Edward we need to find him some chocolate too. *smile*.

Ben is a cutie but Ed is right he needs to leave the convient bootie alone because it seems to come with issues and I dare say that Stacy could be a liability I really can't say dangerous because she seems to stupid and simple.

Thank you for the update more please. This chapter seemed to have gone by so quickly or maybe I was just so into it it was over before I knew it.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 07:00 am

Title: Chapter 7

If Jazz sees Ben dallying with Stacy, I think she will nix any idea of him hitting on her--she won't put up with it and that is what he needs.

 Can't wait to see Jazz put Stacy in her place and Ben become jealous of Edward hanging around. 

I love your updates--thank you.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 06:39 am

Title: Chapter 7

Ben is interesting lol. I am really getting into this story and cannot wait for your next update! Stacy is dangerous but I think Edward is more dangerous than she is!

Reviewer: Daddyprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 06:17 am

Title: Chapter 6

Love this story!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2014 12:54 pm

Title: Chapter 6

If Stacy knew about the connection between Ben and Jazz, she would have given her the wrong address.  This could get messy, bc if Jazz finds out Ben sleeps with his employees, she is going to stay away from him (Title or no Title), and just do her job. 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2014 06:37 am

Title: Chapter 6

AWWWW! So precious. Loving the story!!

Reviewer: Daddyprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2014 06:14 am

Title: Chapter 6

Loving this so far, just wish chapters were longer, which is a testament to your writing...Can"t wait to see how this romance blossoms..

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 13 2014 05:11 am

Title: Chapter 5

wait you can't leave it hanging like that

Reviewer: simplydijah Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2014 02:24 am



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