I’m thrilled to come back to the site and have this wonderful treasure waiting for me to read!! This story is completely enthralling! I wait in anticipation for more.
Thanks so much. It has been a really long time so I am grateful you took the time to read it.Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2019 11:38 pm
Wow that was intense. I wasn't expecting that twist! That was an awesome update. Man so poor Jordan had to go through all of that. My heart kinda hurt for her. No wonder she's messed up with her feeling with Brody. I hope she gets the therapy and loving support she needs. But with how utterly in love he is with her, I don't doubt he'll be that strong person she needs. The sad part is that stuff like that really happened.
This is a REALLY unique story and I feel it's so great your putting it down on paper. It seems like a tale of 2nd chances and healing past hurts and true love. Go on girl! Do yo thang! Lol :)
I am so happy your enjoying this story. I was worried though because I don't want to inadvertently belittle something truly horrific. I really love these characters though.Reviewer: partial2passion Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2014 11:42 pm
My brother in law is a physician like my husband and has told us worse stories of what his adult patients went through as teens. Keep writing, bring abuse like this to light. Family members who sanction rape as a "cure" (don't mean to offend) needs to be raped themselves.
Thanks so much for the encouragement. I cant imagine the burden or pride your family must feel when help someone who has gone through something like this. Please is you have any insight let me know. Thanks for reading.Reviewer: Stories Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2014 06:28 pm
Im loving these two. A few things I like:
1. Im a 70's baby meaning I grew up in the 80's and I LOVE Rainbow Brite, Transformers, The Smurfs, Care Bears, My little Pony, etc....the 80's ROCK!
2. He sounds yummy and she beautiful
3. Theyre best friends and they come off as being genuine (your writing)
4. I feel for these two. I want things work out for them.
5. Some errors and they are usually distracting, but in your case, Im soo into your storyline and these two characters that Im not letting it throw me off....I want to read more. Thats good.
Cant wait for the next installment!
I hope to have pics up. Ibe tried 3 x but it wont load. Please keep reading and commenting.Reviewer: amlaamar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 06 2014 01:35 am
I can't believe I almost passed this story up! Sooo powerful. Pooor Jordan. I ache for her and Brody.
I wasnt thinking clearly when I warned of homosexuality and named both characters boys names. Yah Im pretty sure most people think this is a gay male romance. But aw well. Thanks for reading.Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2014 11:51 pm
I'm not sure where you are going with this but so far it is interesting. I haven't seen anything like it on here before. I certainly didn't think it was a lesbian story much less that the homosexuality was ongoing in the story with names like Jordan and Brody otherwise my own prejudices and bias would probably have kept me from even reading the first chapter.Reviewer: bambi4real Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2014 11:19 pm
WOW. That was horrible for Jordan. She has been thru a lot. Wow. Poor Brody, he is in love with a woman who loves him, but cannot express it in an intimate way, I think Jordan wants to, but her emotional and mental state will not let her. I believe she is bi, but she is mostly scarred and scared. I think she wants Brody just as bad as he wants her, but she has to work thru her pain and let Brody help her. I am glad she told Brody everything; now he can see what adds to her choice of women instead of men. More please!!!
Thank for reading and reviewingReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 05 2014 07:28 pm
Why is she scared of this? At least he made a move so now they can have a real conversation about it. All this circling around is making me crazy!
On the surface it seems like an easy answer but ere is more going on. There are a lot of factors involved as to why she is hesitant. Thanks for reading.Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 07:03 pm
Jordan need to get with her man. Brody is just as scared as her. She would be all pissy if Brody backs off. The first thing she would think is "I guess he doesn't care for me after all."
She is certain that he loves her but she is terrified of changing the dynamics of ther relationship and we will find out why later on.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 02:31 am
Brody put it on her, Jordan needs some good loving!! Help see how perfect you cor each confession other. Jordan don't allow fear to keep you from love!!
There is a healthy dose of fear but she isn't without reason.
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Date: January 19 2014 02:07 am
I gotta admit I was a little nervous with the warnings because I thought it might not be interested. But thought I'd give it a change and I'm so glad I did! This story is super good. I really really like it. I wonder how they will finally tell each other how they feel. Update soon!Reviewer: partial2passion Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 13 2014 07:02 pm
How they each not know how the other feels? These two are slow but so damn cute!! Brody has dated skinny blondes in the past which is why Jordan believes that she doesn't stand a chance. Brody Jordan needs to hear the words as she is slow on the uptake. What happened that caused them to argue on her last trip? I love it Acdcromance! More please!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2014 01:01 pm