Where was the Roxie who plotted a blackmail revenge in the past? When she lost weight she lost her gumption. Griffin, where is the balls man?
Love must conquer all, Roxie in her convoluted thinking due to food deprivation is not thinking clearly, she needs a kick to wake her up from this stupor.Reviewer: Agape Realms Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 02:33 pm
Not trying to be rude but i'm just correcting a grammatical error. It's "reins" as in those used for guiding horses during riding not "reigns" as in rule over. Griffin is letting Roxie take the "reins" not "reigns". I don't know many black women like me who are into horses so I understand the mistake. Well written chapter. I like Roxie and Griffin and look forward to reading more of your work in this book.Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2015 08:18 pm
Okay, so I don't review often especially with so much going, but I had to. Lol. I feel for Roxie, but it's so darn frustrating if you can't talk to your fiancée about your feelings and what you're going through then how in the world are they ready to get married? Communication and trust are the foundations of a good marriage and it seems like they don't have that in each other right now. 😥Reviewer: PharmD Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2015 06:58 pm
Sidenote: Will Blake get his own story? I'm assuming that since Brody has his going; that Colt will. I'm hoping that Papa Bear gets his as well! That man needs some loving!
Lol! I love how much you guys love Griff's dad! I love him too. He's like a big 'ol teddy :D I do have plans for Colton. You're right! That won't be for a little while though. As far as papa bear... We all need love don't we? ;) That's all I can say for now :DReviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2015 06:24 pm
So upset that you left us on cliffhanger like this. Now I maybe the only one but I feel bad for Roxie. Looking from the outside of a situation sometimes, it's easy to say what should be done. There are things she needd to workout on her own that Grif cant help with. Can't wait to see what happens next, hopefully very soon!
I agree she's got some soul searching to do. A little time will help that for sure! Thanks for sticking with me! :DReviewer: liltay550 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2015 02:58 pm
Loved this chapter! They need to communicate more and not just be so passive in this relationship.
Where can I get a hold of the prequel to this story?
Once again, great job. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Hey! Do you mean FOUND BY YOU? I have it listed on Amazon :) If you're talking about the prequel to that, I'm currently offering it to my newsletter subscribers. I have links on FB for more info. Just type in my name: Victoria Smith. I'm not sure if it will be posting on Chamber just because I'm getting it ready to go to Amazon. But right now it is being posted in the newsletter. :-)Reviewer: Pam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 09 2015 07:53 am
Yeah ... I don't like how the characters are turning out either . Both Roxie and Griffin are becoming passive .. Too passive . Roxie could be putting in apps. Looking for a job teaching . Trying to find herself and make a life outside of Griffin. The communication between them is non existent nobody seems to be getting what they want but Rich. Roxie has turned into a woman whose entire life , health ,sanity is based on Griffin. He should do what his pops said and take care of home first and foremost . But they should be talking and they're not. I'm a military spouse so I understand the strain distance could put on a relationship, but this is just ridiculous ...... Thank Goodness Griffins dad spoke up or we'd be going through this for idk how long oh and thanks Troy!Reviewer: RedMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2015 10:32 am
This is my 3rd comment bc I realized after I logged off that for that gown to hang off of Roxie she has lost more than enough weight to fit into a size 10.
I think her BBW friends are ok, but they mean no harm in not recognizing the amount of weight she has lost in such a short time is dangerous, bc it is the norm for them. They don't know Roxie like Griff does but one did impart some wisdom--basically, make time to do you.
I don't know how Griff will get and keep Roxie on track without worrying about her, while he is away playing. Roxie needs to dig deep, visit her dad and maybe he can come through for her this time.
Roxie wants Griff to concentrate on the game that he loves and not bother him with the stuff that concerns her, she has forgotten that Griff loves her more than basketball and her not talking to him will throw him off his game anyway.Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2015 05:29 pm
I'm so glad that Brody & Griff father are there with Roxie. How the heck did the paps get tipped off that they were gonna be where they were. Those paps & reporters are so rude Griff's dad saved her & her cover up. I think he was kinda offended thst she didnt think better of herself that he was more concerned about her & her well being than his hat which he lost rescuing her. Shes got to gain her self worth back & quit letting what the public say get to her.Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 11:19 am
I'm legitimately interested if Griffin is going to screw up with another woman while he's away on whatever work event. And I need Roxie to get a backbone, it blows my mind to know people that insecure really do exist in the world. She's obviously not comfortable with herself, and that's a shame. And everyone Griffin works with is shady as hell. I trust no one so far in this story.
Things are defintiely about to get crazy! Both Griff and Roxie have some rough waters ahead. I agree that Griffin should have those feelers out for shadiness, lol. Thanks for commenting!Reviewer: Soledad Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2015 06:21 am
No need for tears from Rox. Talk it out, work it out. Get clarity from Griffin when he gets home. I believe Griffin when he says he doesn't need all that, but he needs to explain what's on his mind about it. And he shouldn't blindly trust these strangers just because a friend does. Just keep communicating.
I agree Griff definitely needs to keep his eyes and ears open! Thanks for commenting :DReviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2015 06:58 am
That alone time was hot. Griff is the man & he got himself full on some Roxie. I just hope he follows through & don't let this sleaze RICH come along & disrespect the people in his life. Like he has.Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 19 2014 05:10 am
I hope the couple get quietly married, on the farm. These two are tight and learned to tell one another everything--Mickey does not realize what he is up against when he tried to come between them.
He wants Griff to remain single and then he will have more time to be promoted, which leads to more money...and if it takes breaking them up, Tricky Mickey will do this (probably has done it to other couples). Maybe Griff's ex friend has heard stuff about Mick...?Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 10:16 pm
Oh laaawd i hope this isnt gonna be the typical guy cheats on girl type thing but i have faith youll make this as unique as Roxie and Griffin ! Awesome chapter! :)Reviewer: Heleana220 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 09:31 pm
Omg please don't make him a cheate. I love groxie they are to adorable. Update soon!Reviewer: andrea91 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 12:00 am
I love Roxie and Griffin and with him in the NBA there is a ton of juicy story lines can some one say on a break baby but I really don't want them to turn into an episode of Maury. All that being said if you write it I'll read it and if you publish it I'll buy it. Just keep us posted.Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 08:37 pm
I like your stories and your characters. On the one side I'm like, Yippee more Roxie and Griffin, on the other side, I'm thinking 'what more do these two sweethearts have to go through?' All the same, if you write it, I'll read it. You have a talent of writing real characters and real situations. So good for you that you are publishing.
Now, as long as I can get me some more Brody, I'm all good.Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 02:16 pm
Glad to see you are publishing. It is a wonderful story. This site offers such awesome stories with talented writers and it is an honor to be a part of their process. Don't let a negative bump veer you off the road to success!Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 05:22 am