Two thumbs up & Congratulations!

You made my day with this update. Praise him that Roxie & Griffin are back together. Patiently waiting for the next update! 

Where was the Roxie who plotted a blackmail revenge in the past?  When she lost weight she lost her gumption.  Griffin, where is the balls man?  

Love must conquer all, Roxie in her convoluted thinking due to food deprivation is not thinking clearly, she needs a kick to wake her up from this stupor.

Not trying to be rude but i'm just correcting a grammatical error. It's "reins" as in those used for guiding horses during riding not "reigns" as in rule over. Griffin is letting Roxie take the "reins" not "reigns".  I don't know many black women like me who are into horses so I understand the mistake.  Well written chapter. I like Roxie and Griffin and look forward to reading more of your work in this book.

Sidenote: Will Blake get his own story? I'm assuming that since Brody has his going; that Colt will. I'm hoping that Papa Bear gets his as well! That man needs some loving!

Loved this chapter! They need to communicate more and not just be so passive in this relationship.

Where can I get a hold of the prequel to this story?

Once again, great job. Looking forward to the next chapter.

This is my 3rd comment bc I realized after I logged off that for that gown to hang off of Roxie she has lost more than enough weight to fit into a size 10.

I think her BBW friends are ok, but they mean no harm in not recognizing the amount of weight she has lost in such a short time is dangerous, bc it is the norm for them.  They don't know Roxie like Griff does but one did impart some wisdom--basically, make time to do you.  

I don't know how Griff will get and keep Roxie on track without worrying about her, while he is away playing.  Roxie needs to dig deep, visit her dad and maybe he can come through for her this time.  

Roxie wants Griff to concentrate on the game that he loves and not bother him with the stuff that concerns her, she has forgotten that Griff loves her more than basketball and her not talking to him will throw him off his game anyway. 

I'm legitimately interested if Griffin is going to screw up with another woman while he's away on whatever work event. And I need Roxie to get a backbone, it blows my mind to know people that insecure really do exist in the world. She's obviously not comfortable with herself, and that's a shame. And everyone Griffin works with is shady as hell. I trust no one so far in this story. 

No need for tears from Rox. Talk it out, work it out. Get clarity from Griffin when he gets home. I believe Griffin when he says he doesn't need all that, but he needs to explain what's on his mind about it. And he shouldn't blindly trust these strangers just because a friend does. Just keep communicating.

I hope the couple get quietly married, on the farm.  These two are tight and learned to tell one another everything--Mickey does not realize what he is up against when he tried to come between them. 

He wants Griff to remain single and then he will have more time to be promoted, which leads to more money...and if it takes breaking them up, Tricky Mickey will do this (probably has done it to other couples).  Maybe Griff's ex friend has heard stuff about Mick...?

Omg please don't make him a cheate. I love groxie they are to adorable. Update soon!

I love Roxie and Griff. Thanks for the sequel!

Glad to see you are publishing. It is a wonderful story. This site offers such awesome stories with talented writers and it is an honor to be a part of their process.  Don't let a negative bump veer you off the road to success!