Reviews For Chloe Piers
Title: Chloe Piers: Characters

Can you write us a long update?! I miss reading your stories! 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 20 2014 12:11 pm

Title: Weird Conversations Over Lunch...

Ok, I'm seeing RED already.. WTH is Eric telling a teenage anything about Tess and Jay and why os Khalia believing his BS, Eric must be real LONLEY if he is still trying to cause trouble after 13yrs, he is nothing but a MITCH.

Glad that Jay and Chole talled, but Chole needs to understand that when it comes to their daughters and boys, fathers can be STUCK on STUPID sometimes.

I have a feeling that Khalia is going to be trouble.

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 06:54 am

Title: Weird Conversations Over Lunch...

Eric is still up to no good, why is still alive again?  I don't like the Khalia she needs a ass whooping!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 03:27 am

Title: Weird Conversations Over Lunch...

He's baccckkkk...13 yrs and Eric's life must be in a funk.  So what if he and Tess had a thing years ago, but then apparently Jay is still feeling the past, too. 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 01:49 am

Title: Chloe Piers: Characters

Hey I'm liking this story.  I think it could be a good combo of pre-teen love and problems but also the adult problems/love life with the parents. It's the best of both worlds.  Now Eric is back being an assassin obviously, so I see some issues coming because of him.  Jay and Tess are still great, normal parents trying to figure it out.  I'm glad he as apologized to Chloe.  Ok, keep up the great work as usual!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 12:49 am

Title: Chloe Piers: Characters

This is a good story. Please continue to write it. I would like to see what you have in store for all of the girls. Great job!

Reviewer: Chaynetv Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2014 12:20 am

Title: A Little Too Close For Comfort...

And simple Jay is back...

Jay is the last person that Chloe needs to hear the word slut uttered in reference to her. He really needs to apologize to Chloe and have a heart-to-heart, explaining what his concerns are.

I think he was right in that Chloe is a product of him and Tess, although, him putting most of it on Tess is chickenshit and he needs to fix that and real quick. As usual, Jay has engaged mouth before engaging his brain.

If Jay doesn't talk more openly with Chloe, especially about how teenage boys are, they will not have a close relationship at all. It will only go down hill from here.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 11:09 pm

Title: A Little Too Close For Comfort...

Well that was very well written. I agree with Tess Jay was waaaaayyyyy out of line the word slut shouldn't have come out his mouth especially talking to his daughter. He needs to learn how to handle his anger better when it comes to Chloe & realize she's growing up but she's also smart & she needs both her parents to talk to because it's a very difficult, confusing time for her. He needs to apologize to his daughter for his behavior take her out to lunch or something & talk to her ask questions then tell her how he feels & to be patient with him b/c don't want her being afraid of her dad nor hate him

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 09:50 pm

Title: A Little Too Close For Comfort...

Jay was wrong for equating his daughters behavior to a slut. Chl8e got caught up in the feelings and she's embarrassed.   Jay's not handling her growing up well.  Tess is still too damn sensitive!! Tess you needed to have a conversation about what happened with Coutney before she went to bed. Jay seems to too harsh and Tess is far too lenient they need to find a happy medium.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 06:45 pm

Title: Meeting Chloe

I like it so please don't scrap it. But as we go along would like some flashes of Cloe when she was younger. Hopefully in this story she becomes to know both her parents in better ways. Jay needs to trust her but she also needs to talk to him so theycan have a better understanding of each other. Plus she's Tess daughter both her parents need to talk to her. It's about time especially the kinda guy Jay is very protective & have to work on not killing someone over his wife & daughter. While Tess needs a little mother daughter time it's past time to talk about boys should have done that at 10 but now she's 13 she needs to know plus how to protect herself to. Anyways like where this is going just rambled off some others pointers update soon

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 04:54 pm

Title: Meeting Chloe

in my opinion i think Chloe she be a bit older than 13 but this your story

 

 

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 09:22 pm

Title: Meeting Chloe

wonderful beginning

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 08:34 pm

Title: Meeting Chloe

It's sad that Tess and Jay or Tay couldn't have any more children.   Jay is a good father but has been overindulgent with Chloe.  Now Chloe is 13, a freshman in high school with her first crush. Don't let her be dumb and get pregnant Jay would go postal. I hope that Tess has alwady that discussion with Chloe about sex. Chloe and Courtney shouldn't be anywhere alone and unsupervised!  I kind of hate that you skipped so far ahead in their lives, but have written them as young adults. We are for some teenage angst!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 01:37 pm



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