i love this story so far. i cant wait to see when they run into each other. but can you make the font bigger, and shorter paragraphs its hard to read the way you wrote it thanks.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 21 2014 03:20 am
Good start update soon
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: January 20 2014 11:12 pm
Very good start. Please give us mor
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: January 20 2014 07:56 pm
Good start, can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed [Report This]Date: January 20 2014 04:00 pm
Good start. Can you make the font a bit larger and the paragraphs shorter? It's a bit hard to read because the sentences seem to run together with the large paragraphs.
Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed [Report This]Date: January 20 2014 03:57 am
Good start, can we get some dialogue soon? What is his perspective of things?
Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed [Report This]Date: January 20 2014 03:20 am