I just found this story and binge read it. I have to say...it's addictive. I love dark romance so this is right up my alley. Keep up the awesome work!Reviewer: Lizzy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 12 2015 12:46 am
My biggest problem with this story is Noah's crueltyl to Amora is deemed acceptable because he's sexy, white and good in bed. When Amora first arrived, he locked her in the basement with a chain around her ankle like a slave as well as beating her like a slave after her escape attempt. Yet he says later that he wanted her because he saw an abused girl that didn't know love, and then proceeeds to abuse her too. Good sex and new clothes are not love, especially in the face of being chained and beaten so at what point has he really shown her love? Amora doesn't leave the premises. He hasn't even taken her out. Showing someone off to your friends like a trophy isn't love. He got her pregnant because he wanted her to have his child not because he cared about what she thought. She has no education and he has given no thought to what she wanted out of life. Yet he's a good guy because he's white, sexy and wealthy and said he was sorry for beating her? I think the story is well written, I just wished that Amora was shown as having more value for who she has shown herself to be as a person to Noah. She still brought light to his life in spite of the cruelty he brought to hers. At some point, especially since they are bringing a child into the world together, he should really atone for his sins against Amora.Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 11:05 pm
Great update.Reviewer: Tiffany Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 08 2015 02:48 pm
Let me just say that I'm in love with this!
I knew from the beginning that there was something about Noah that I loved; he needed to be loved, and though Amora hasn't admitted it quite yet, she's going to love him as well!
Ugh...I can't even properly comment. Just know that this is amazing, your skills are impeccable and I will continue to faithfully read!Reviewer: Just_Ni Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2015 03:51 am
Their relation seems to be based on his need to satisfy his lust for her, his power over both her and her father and his right to precreate.Reviewer: katt Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 23 2015 04:33 am
Okay what is up with NOAH? What is his POV? What is his thinking in this relationship?Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 14 2015 04:59 pm
Great update!!! Noah beating Amora still burns me up every time I think about it. I know, Amora forgiving Noah for his behavior is what she will ultimately do, but pregnant or not, I would not be able to stand the sight of him. I mean is Noah a walking dick wrapped in gold? I know that this was Amora's first time being with a man, (and probably her last, if Noah as any say), but if Amora wants to leave in the future will he beat her again, have someone else do it? Noah is an ass and Amora has been bent beyond belief by Noah. Oh, does he want a star because he makes Amora's toes curl? I hope Noah does not think he is irreplaceable. And at this point if I was Amora I would not care about being replaced. She knows he will always give his full support to their child. They do not have to be together to do that.
But I do understand that Amora wants a good pregnancy. She should not be stressed or angry. WOW, Noah really played this one right. He thought of a way to calm Amora down and keep her tied to him. I swear I would hate him. I hope Amora is using his ass. As for love, that happening right away would be a joke. How can someone go from getting their ass beat to having feelings? Noah has not groveled nearly enough. Anyway, I do love this story, even if all I feel like doing is beating up or denying Noah at every turn, lol!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 14 2015 12:25 am