Thanks for updating.

This story kind of confused me in this chapter. Amora has been beaten with a whip like a slave, with a bruised back, searing in pain, so sore she can't hardly move and he gives her an asprin.😁

This chapter kind of lessen her character to me. She seems to suddenly forget pain and soreness and starts wanting him.

Noah does not tend to the wounds. He states he gives punishment to those who disobey him and talks about missing her. This is a little crazy.

Please update

And now, I wonder, who would dare entering without knocking? Noah will have a fit! I wouldn't be surprise if someone gets hurt and this time it won't be Amora!

God I wish I could remember the name of the book I read that reminds me of this story. It looks as if this is the making a of true Dom/Sub story. I am anxious to see where this goes. If this is going to fluff out at some point then a change in POV maybe would necessary. Because Noah is seen in such a harsh light. But if you are developing Amora into a sub then I think her POV is the one that would matter most. You would have to make her feelings for Noah come alive and grab us. That would be a challenge but it would also make this an awesome story.

I was a bit put off at how easy he got her worked up, I thought that her character would have more fight in her, the way she was thinking, I thought she would struggle against all the pain to throw herself off the bed to get as far away from him as possible, not allowing him the privillage of her body, even if it meant that she would have to endure more pain, giving her the knowledge and power that though this horrible person may beat on her now broken body, he will not get what is so precious to her.

Thanks for updating. But why do you have to stop right there at that moment ha ha ha 😏I'm still curious what is he thinking. Please update soon very very soon.

This story infuriates the shit outta me but I love it! I feel that Amora needs to be stronger against Noah's advances n stop saying she hates him because if she really meant it she'd stop rooting him ffs it's like she's constantly got her leg cocked up waiting for her master to root her but says no don't which translates to please do me! Noah's just a sizzling hot asshole I hate to love him! I disagree with the others about doing a POV for Noah, I hate it most times when authors do that I feel it takes away the hotness n mystery of the guy. I like to read n let my imagination interpret the when's, how's  and why's of the character. Unless the story switches POV between characters from the beginning of the story I lose interest real quick when authors switch during the story. Above all I love this sory n love the updates :)))

NOOOOOOOOO!!How are you really going to end the chapter like that?

Why do I think some chick burst thru.  Only a woman who thinks her va jay jay is gold is bold enough for that with Noah.  Damn, he was about to get him some action.  

Why can't Noah let her go?  Not liking Noah or her sperm donor for that matter.  Noah is a asshole!

Mmmm. I'd love that treatment minus the beatings. 

Seriously, at some point he is going to have to acknowledge that he has deeper feelings for her, but she might be to broken to appreciate or even care.

She really must think about her actions. Why would you run without a real plan in place? Her pathetic excuse for a father would turn her over in a heartbeat and ask for a reward as if he did a good deed.

Interesting update but not unexpected that he would do something like that. Hmm, wonder who came into the room?

What are Noah thoughts? Why does he what to ensure she stays with him? This is not about a debt!

Oh, I can't wait for an update.