Wow that was stupid.  How are you going to escape from someone and not think ahead as to where you will go.  She was on her home, duh for real.  I guess she thought he was a nice criminal.  I am looking forward to seeing how hard she's going to become if he keeps abusng her. I also saw how he had claimed her as his and from the comments of the guest its sometihing about her that his attention.  

Hopefully she will not have scars to remind her oft his horrible experience. I don't think running is her way out of this. She has to get her thinking together in order to get her freedom back!!

I believe love is what he/she needs. Maybe they can find it with each other. It will take some time and thinking for both.

I feel Noah has never been loved, does not know how to love and has been a victim of hurt and pain. He only knows in order to get what he wants is through money, causing hurt and pain.

LOVE CONGUERS ALL!!!!

So if she tries to leave again, he'll what? Kill her? Sadly, this happens all the time in real life. If he wants her to stay and not hate him, he is doing a poor job. Noah is feeling things he has never felt before and sadly he is handling the situation as bad as it is even worse. Really, he had to whip her? Well, if Amora has any strength left in her she will fight back, maybe not how Noah thinks, but she will, she has to and when she does I hope Noah feels the pain he caused her not just with the whip but with the whole situation of being trapped with him because of her father. Someone can be hurt without a finger ever being laid on them and Noah's time is drawing near.

I don't know if Noah has ever been in love, but I don't think he could take rejection or the absence of the person he loves very well. We will see. Most stories will not hit on the raw truth of life and just end with a happily ever after, but sometimes before the happy ending comes (if there is a happy ending at all) there are not so great things that will happen and it's up to the individual if they want to deal or not. Is it worth it?  Great update!!!

Wow, if she ever forgives that she's a MUCH better woman than I am.

I usually don't make comments but I felt like I should say something ........I liked the story up until you came to the whipping part. It reminded me of slavery. And I get it that you are doing bdsm thing but I think those play have safe word and you can stop ........I didn't think amora had a choice here. It disturbed me alot .........

I rather Amora try to leave and die trying to get freedom than for her to stay and become even less of who she already is . Overall it make me wonder what's going to happen next, i can't wait.

Thank you so much for the quick update!!!!! 

She should have known better than try to run away. Noah seems to mean what he says!! He put people in pain.

Why would Noah beat her and put marks on a body he admired!!! But again, he said she would be PUNISH her.

Hopefully she will not try it again.

This is a good story. Keep the updates coming. Could you make the chapters a little longer. I'm enjoying this story.

That's so sad

Great chapter please update soon

I hope he turns around and leaves her right there.

Interesting chapter. Ready to see what happens next.

whoooooo girl this was  a hot chapter cant wait for more!!!!

WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a cliff hanger from HELL, lol!!! I'm sorry I am greedy for another update but please post again soon.