Ok, you've got me. I'm fascinated.
Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]Date: March 02 2014 05:48 am
I need more of this story. Noah is intense! Glad Amora has a backbone.
On another note, really wish people would stop comparing this story to other stories. So what if they're similar. There are tons of similiar stories out there with the same theme but what makes them good is reading the author's unique interpretation of them. Don't be discouraged Kelubloo. Keep writing!!!
Reviewer: AvidReader Anonymous
[Report This]Date: March 02 2014 01:54 am
...So...this story is a combination of Beast and Seven Days?
Reviewer: ? Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 01 2014 04:41 am
Whoa this is gonna be soo good!lol
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: February 27 2014 05:05 pm
More. This chapter was very good. Noah is in for a surprise. The only suprise Amora is in for is potential feelings that she should not be having for him, lol! But Noah, is in unchartered territory, I think. He seems to feel too strongly when it comes to Amora. Amoria is still trying to figure it out, but he knows. He wants her like no one before her, it seems. This is dangerous for her because no matter how hard she fights, he will fight that much harder and Amora may give in. Gosh, I hope she doesn't. Especially if he plays dirty and starts sleeping with her.
Can Amora resist him and pretend she is not affected and lay there like she is doing her nails. If she can, she is a beast, but I think it would be pretty hard considering she half likes the punk. OMG, if Amora could pretend that Noah does not affect her in any way whatsoever that would be a huge blow to that oversized ego of his, not to mention hilarious. Noah has a back story, they all do, but I really could careless. Amora wants to leave and I hope she continues to want to leave. Attraction can only go so far when the person you are attracted to is an a*hole/kidnapper. So that should help Amora keep her fight up. Great update.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 27 2014 02:19 am
Wow, interesting turn of events! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: February 27 2014 12:05 am
Question, why would Amora think that Noah would be disgusted with her body? Is she full figured girl or does she have some kind of skindisease? You never really described how Amora looks like only that she doesn't turn down a free meal with I am assuming she is heavy set.
Reviewer: maident Signed [Report This]Date: February 26 2014 10:30 pm
Oh, alrighty then. So intense! I'm guessing there's some backstory as to why he's so brutal in this particular case?
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 26 2014 08:39 pm
Aww. It was just getting good
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: February 26 2014 02:37 pm
Interesting so far. Why is she being kept in the basement? She seems to be a smart woman. Thinking about and coming up with a plan for her escape. I'm interested to see if she'll want to escape. I hope so. What is his motivation in kidnapping her, 'cause that essentially what it is.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 26 2014 10:23 am
I love that she's a spitfire. I hope she gives him a run for his money and fights him all the way! Even though he thinks he's in control, I have a feeling that he's going to lose it more than she will. Great update!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: February 26 2014 10:17 am
I was beginning to think that Amora did not have any fire in her that she was a meek and mild one. Scared I can understand but she seemed to have no fire at first. Glad to see a bit of it in this chapter when she finally told him the business. He response to was right on target. I wonder who will come out on top I suppose it would be Noah for now.
Great update and story thank youf or sharing I am enjoying this story.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: February 26 2014 09:56 am
Keep it coming keeps getting better. She triggered something now she has to pay let's see
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: February 26 2014 08:10 am
I would've stabbed Noah in the neck with a steak knife. She should've stabbed her daddy too.
Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]Date: February 26 2014 07:04 am
I'm really excited to see where you plan on taking this story. Please don't wait too long to update. You have me on the edge of my seat.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: February 25 2014 05:44 pm
Noah is an asshole!! Why did he pick her like a sack of potatoes only to chain her to a post in his basement? Her father is a punk bitch and I hope that when she's freed she him in the dust.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 25 2014 01:08 pm
she avoids confrontationally looking into his eyes, he demands she look into his eyes. When she does, without flinching, he decides he needs to break her?! WTF! Sometimes a girl just cannot catch a break!
I have a sneaking feeling Kent unwittingly gave her some false hope... still, if it keeps her going... Totally agree with luvrayne: Survival mode.
And agree with Treale: reminds me a bit more of a story called 'Mine' on that other site. Or that Beastly Things series by Onimosity... not in the various details but in this obsessive urge to control, own and dominate... Are more fantasies like this becoming more mainstream because we women long for someone to take control?
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 24 2014 11:17 am
You know what amazes me about this story so far is how Noah treats Amora. It amazes me how Kent told Amora that Noah NEVERRRR treats or woos women like Noah is doing to Amora and that somehow the treatment is different. Now, I have read most stories of how men would treat other women like dogs by chaining them into a dark room, but when it comes to a woman that he really wants, he would put her in a fancy room and lock her in there with a great bed to sleep in, great clothes, and bathroom. What Noah is doing is a totally reversal to me. I just hope that Amora doesn’t get her hopes to high thinking that Noah will kick her out once he is tired of her. She has to have that mentally of 50/50 percent chance that Noah may keep her or throw her out like a sock as Kent put it. What she needs to do right now is to be in total survivor mode and find a way to get out and fight. Yea…BUT WHAT A DOUCHE FOR A FATHER THOUGH!
Reviewer: luvrayne Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 24 2014 06:43 am
I like the story so far. It doesn't have to be realistic, it's fiction. Write this story your way, your characterization is fine, I like the heroine and I want to know more about the hero.
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[Report This]Date: February 24 2014 06:40 am
Yeah, I pretty much agree with Penelope52 on this.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2014 06:20 am
Ok this is super cheesy and unrealistic. She's speechless, and pretty a bit dense. Most women would at least threaten to call the cops.
Reviewer: Sleek Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2014 06:19 am
Her dad knew she was his bargaining chip and that is why he insisted she be at the meeting. I hope her lack of struggle was from shock, bc being weak in this situation will get you chained in some rich guy's basement...oops!
Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2014 05:30 am
Dang ! Another good update. Can't wait for more, :)
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 24 2014 04:50 am