Hmmm... Very interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter :D
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2014 03:04 am
Loved the update! Interesting...Wonder why is he treating her so different?...Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2014 02:53 am
This is getting very interesting..................great update..................
Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 24 2014 01:01 am
What the 'f', this story is too good to just stop there. You need to post like two or three chapters at a time, lol! Why is it that most guys want to break women? Especially when they see that the woman may have a little fight in them. I cannot stand men like that. Some succeed, but thank goodness some fail. I hope mr. cocky noah (he makes me sick, his name does not get capitalized)fails. It would be shocking what Amora's dad did if so many men were not exactly like her father. Him bringing her with him was the stupidest thing he could have ever done and for him to be shocked (which I think he genuinely was) that noah would suggest such a thing is beyond me. Anyway I hope noah fails miserably at breaking Amora. I hope she stays strong and knows that it will not be like this always. I know she is hoping Kent is right when he said she will be gone faster than she got there. But for some reason I think/know noah will want Amora for longer than what Kent thinks and what Amora is hoping for. Ugh, I cannot wait for another update!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 23 2014 11:23 pm
Nice start. Is Noah a vampire?
Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2014 06:35 pm
This is a good start. Looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2014 05:08 pm
OKAY....I am HOOKED, already. LOL. Please give us more. What are Stryker's intentions toward Amora? Does he want her for himself OR for his business. What kind of gangster is he? What kind of business is he in? How is Amora going to fare? Please Update SOOOOOOONNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2014 07:31 am
I Like!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 23 2014 06:28 am
Wow, Interesting start! More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2014 06:24 am
I'd like to see how you spin this classic and commonly used premise of paying a debt. Let the rollercoaster begin
Reviewer: Philly girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 23 2014 05:48 am
This has my interest... looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 23 2014 04:49 am
Man this seems good!
Reviewer: RedMoon Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2014 04:04 am
Good start.Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 23 2014 03:52 am
This is very good start, but it kinda of reminds me of a story I read called Seven Days by Soular. But anyway I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Treale Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 23 2014 02:13 am
Ummmm & the plot thickens more please
Reviewer: KVgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 23 2014 02:12 am
Nice start! Welcone to the Chamber :)
Reviewer: bhvana Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2014 02:00 am
Knew that Noah would say that as soon as he laid eyes on Amora. Her father is going sell her to Noah to get out of debt. What an asshole!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2014 01:30 am
Yep...Imma need some more of this!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 01:22 am
Very good start! Hope to read more soon ;)
Reviewer: Kampuchea Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 23 2014 01:20 am
Where's the rest?!
Reviewer: Penelope52 Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 23 2014 01:11 am