Reviews For Bruised Heart
Title: Two

Hmmm... Very interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2014 03:04 am

Title: Two

Loved the update! Interesting...Wonder why is he treating her so different?...Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2014 02:53 am

Title: Two

This is getting very interesting..................great update..................

Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 24 2014 01:01 am

Title: Two

What the 'f', this story is too good to just stop there. You need to post like two or three chapters at a time, lol! Why is it that most guys want to break women? Especially when they see that the woman may have a little fight in them. I cannot stand men like that. Some succeed, but thank goodness some fail. I hope mr. cocky noah (he makes me sick, his name does not get capitalized)fails. It would be shocking what Amora's dad did if so many men were not exactly like her father. Him bringing her with him was the stupidest thing he could have ever done and for him to be shocked (which I think he genuinely was) that noah would suggest such a thing is beyond me. Anyway I hope noah fails miserably at breaking Amora. I hope she stays strong and knows that it will not be like this always. I know she is hoping Kent is right when he said she will be gone faster than she got there. But for some reason I think/know noah will want Amora for longer than what Kent thinks and what Amora is hoping for. Ugh, I cannot wait for another update!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 11:23 pm

Title: One

Nice start. Is Noah a vampire? 

Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 06:35 pm

Title: One

This is a good start. Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: JFJD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 05:08 pm

Title: One

I love it

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 09:42 am

Title: One

OKAY....I am HOOKED, already. LOL.  Please give us more.  What are Stryker's intentions toward Amora?  Does he want her for himself OR for his business.  What kind of gangster is he?  What kind of business is he in?  How is Amora going to fare?  Please Update SOOOOOOONNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 07:31 am

Title: One

I Like!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 06:28 am

Title: One

Wow, Interesting start! More please.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 06:24 am

Title: One

I'd like to see how you spin this classic and commonly used premise of paying a debt. Let the rollercoaster begin

Reviewer: Philly girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 05:48 am

Title: One

This has my interest... looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 04:49 am

Title: One

Man this seems good!

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 04:04 am

Title: One

Good start.Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 03:52 am

Title: One

This is very good start, but it kinda of reminds me of a story I read called Seven Days by Soular. But anyway I can't wait to see what happens next! 

Reviewer: Treale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 02:13 am

Title: One

Ummmm & the plot thickens more please

Reviewer: KVgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 02:12 am

Title: One

Nice start! Welcone to the Chamber :)

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 02:00 am

Title: One

Knew that Noah would say that as soon as he laid eyes on Amora. Her father is going sell her to Noah to get out of debt. What an asshole!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 01:30 am

Title: One

Yep...Imma need some more of this!

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 01:22 am

Title: One

Very good start! Hope to read more soon ;)

Reviewer: Kampuchea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 01:20 am

Title: One

Where's the rest?! 

Reviewer: Penelope52 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 01:11 am



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