Reviews For Bruised Heart
Title: Fifteen

excellent read, get sex

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2015 03:12 am

Title: Fifteen

I wonder what is Noah feeling towards Amora? How is he feeling about being a father, even a husband? What is Noah's POV?

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 02 2015 12:40 pm

Title: Fifteen

Thanks for updating

Reviewer: Karen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2015 07:21 am

Title: Fifteen

I like this story a lot, I can't wait for the next update.  But I want to know what Noah thinks of the situation and Amora from his point of view.  It would be interesting to know what he thinks.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2015 07:20 am

Title: Fifteen

Oh, more more more!! This story is so good. I think this is about as close as Noah is going to get to admitting his feeling for Amora. I'd love to know what his thoughts were when he saw his baby's heartbeat. Maybe the child will soften him some. Hope his brother doesn't start trouble. Question, Keluboo, what actors did you envision when you were writing these characters? I keep thinking of Jason Mamoa and Camille Winbush.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2015 02:44 am

Title: Fifteen

Thank you for the update. It was good, just too short.

Hopefully Noah is getting better about communicating with Amora. She needs him desperately at this time. She is scared, which can be stressful. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 31 2015 08:42 pm

Title: Fifteen

Noah does not know how to love, he knows how to get himself things or people he wants but he has no notion on human affection because he never had someone who loved him for him and with whom he could reciprocate that emotion. This might be the closest he has ever get to loving someone now that Amora is in his life, even if she is forced to be there. He knew that not using a condom would end up with her being pregnant and he wanted her to become pregnant with his child to mark them both as his. I love the way this human being is trying to create a new life although he does not seem to have ever received any affection throughout his life.

Reviewer: katt Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 31 2015 05:38 pm

Title: One

Well she's preggers & evidently he made her that way on purpose from him telling her he never wanted kids until her. I think he'd make a great father. He's already showing signs he care & is going to take care of both of them by taking her to the Dr.
Now with pregnancy some women become nymphos wonder how she'll be especially since he was giving it to her on the daily. Wonder how this is gonna work out. & will she beg him. Just a thought
Great update can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 31 2015 03:18 pm

Title: Fifteen

I was hoping that Natalia would not make the mistake of going back to Richard and the end of this chapter convinced me that she is her own woman and will not live a life of lies once again. Powerful. 

Reviewer: katt Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2015 02:42 pm

Title: Fourteen

When will her debt be paid? Why does she not ask, instead of screaming at him? And when he debt is paid, will he let her go? And will he provide for the child? Perhaps she needs to write her questions down when calm.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 31 2015 01:24 pm

Title: Fifteen

She has a serious case of Stockholm syndrome 

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Date: January 31 2015 01:16 pm

Title: Fifteen

Short, but really good. Feining for the next update.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 31 2015 12:09 pm

Title: Fifteen

Chapter too short!!!!!'

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 31 2015 08:18 am

Title: Fifteen

Did Noah actually share a small tidbit of information about himself  with Amora?  Who would've thunk?!   I think Noah will be an overprotective daddy but very much hands on.  That man is in love with Amora but he hasn't accepted that emotion yet. They will get closer during the course of her pregnacy, but he will need to woo Amora. Show her that she is important to him as she has never had anyone put her first.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2015 07:12 am

Title: Fourteen

Okay Noah are you going to be supportive of Amora as a lover and an expecting farther or remain a brutal selfish brute? I say lover because I don't believe he wants to marry her, at least not now. He has a lot of issues that has transcended from years back.

Amora is going to need some support. Hopefully Ramona will be there, but it would be even more important for Noah to be her main support.

Her whole life has been guided by other people's selfishness. It is time someone put their wants and desires aside and care for her well being. And can it be without brutality and abuse?

Reviewer: Where is tenderness and gentleness? Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 27 2015 01:46 pm

Title: Fourteen

This was really amazing, I read all 14 chapters in one hour. It was really good, I hope there's another update coming soon. It's so intense and alluring :)

Reviewer: honeytheflowerchild Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2015 12:56 am

Title: Fourteen

It time Noah talks to Amora. I believe he owes her that much. Update soon.

 

by the way, when are you going to update the story "CRAZY IN LOVE?"

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 24 2015 07:16 pm

Title: Fourteen

Wow, seems he intentionally got her pregnant to try to keep her with him. Wonder what his back story is that Ramona alluded to... Hope Amora settles down and try to make it work with Noah.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2015 06:01 am

Title: Fourteen

Great story. Very intense and hot.

Reviewer: karen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 12:14 am

Title: Fourteen

Oh Amora, you had to see this coming as many times he took you without protection. But I do feel for her. She's trapped with an uncertain future and Noah hasn't exactly been upfront with what he wants from her. I think it's time for Noah to open up to at least put her mind at rest. Thanks so much for the frequent updates. Really enjoying them. 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 10:00 pm

Title: Fourteen

Noah needs to be more vocal with Amora, especially now. He needs to let her know he will be there for her and cares for her. Time out for the abuse! This may not be an easy pregnancy for Amora.

Hopefully by Amora being pregnant his tender side will start to show up. Maybe if he is around her during morning sickness that will stir up some emotions from him. Some women have a hard time with morning sickness.

Noah is not prepared for this pregnancy. He does not understand what is about to happen to Amora mentally and physically. Amora is afraid and not prepared for all the changes that her body and her life aim about to under go during and after the pregnancy; mental and physical changes. She needs someone that will understand her, not just Ramona.

Since Ramona knows Noah better than anyone, she needs to talk to Noah about Amora mental and physical state and how the development of the baby is dependent on her being calm and healthy. 

Update soon.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 08:08 pm

Title: Fourteen

Well that went well. Like really Noah. But I thinks she needs to be patient with him because clearly he did it on purpose & is secretly thrilled. By his statement aline she should have vot hes in it with her. I think she needs to learn about his pas & understand why over everyone he chose her. Plus she needs to let go trying to get away she has nothing to go back to but has everything she needs or want with him. When he sees he can trust her I think he'll give her more freedom. I cant wait for the next update. This story just keeps getting better & better.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 06:33 am

Title: Fourteen

I sometimes forget just how young she is compared to Noah.  Despite her fathers abhorrent parental care, she is still very much naive to men and life in general.  The reason she is so volatile in her emotions despite pregnancy hormones is her age.  Definitely Noah doesn't help by not speaking much but I am curious to learn more about his childhood and how that has shaped him.  I really think that is what she needs to hear to start to see him as human and not her captor.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 04:36 am

Title: Fourteen

Sneaky of you to use Ms. Ramona to pull on my heartstrings, cuz you and I both know that there ain't no way I should be rooting for Amora to give Noah a chance...

Reviewer: kurious kale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 04:26 am

Title: Fourteen

Amora is really upset, you being pregnant isn't all Noah's fault. You willingly gave him your body repeatedly because you are attracted to him. Ramona sees something in him that no one else can.  Maybe she sees that he loves you. Time will tell!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 02:40 am



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