Reviews For Bruised Heart
Title: Fourteen

Aww man, I thought it ..... Lol he trapped her 😩. Such a good chapter , the anxiousness to know & all. 

Reviewer: Jesslove3205 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 02:31 am

Title: Fourteen

That's the spirit Amora, lol! Give Noah an ass whoopin! Okay, that being said. She is right, Noah is not not stupid, he wanted her preggers and now that she is, she is staying with him until the end. Noah is probably doing backflips, handstands, and having a regular party in his mind, the jerk. If she thought her life wasn't her own before, it really isn't now. How this works going forward is all up to Noah. Amora is in desperate state of mind right now. How Noah responds will make or break her, the creep.

This situation would not be a bad one, had Amora not been delivered to Noah like a piece of meat, but Noah probably took one look at her and formulated this plan (maybe not from day one) early on. Ugh, this is a mess, but Amora has to be strong, which she has been up to this point. She gets a pass on not ever mentioning condomns to Noah or that he put her on birth control. I kind of thought that was stupid on her part, BUT she was a niave virgin and knowing Noah he probably would have said no to both if she had brought it up, the jackass. Noah gets no sympathy in his actions to date; he may have had a hellish childhood, adulthood, whatever, that still does not change his actions now. His suffering may have shaped the man he is, but he does know RIGHT from WRONG. More please!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 02:24 am

Title: Fourteen

Good chapter. Excited to see what happens next



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your reviews! :) and please stay tuned for more!

Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 02:21 am

Title: Fourteen

OMG I looove this story. I can't believe she's pregnant. I wonder if she's gonna attempt to run away again and I wonder what Noah and his brother are going to do...

Reviewer: allimetayer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 02:15 am

Title: Fourteen

I def think he knew her before she was even offered as a ransom. I also think he had a plan for her all along. She is very naive and clueless. I think he can mentally dominate him if she had any idea what was going on. 

Reviewer: Hatty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 01:36 am

Title: Fourteen

Well....she's kinda clueless.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 01:30 am

Title: Fourteen

Damn. I knew that would happen though

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 01:03 am

Title: Thirteen

Oh NO!! Yep, she is pregnant. Mrs. Ramona does not want Amora to hurt Noah; I can understand her thought process and the reasoning, BUT Amora is basically his prisoner, she cannot leave. Yes, she can do virtually anything she wants as long as it's in the house or someone is with her, but she does not have her freedom. As good as the sex it between her and Noah, I am still sure that she wants to leave. Noah may have been hurt, but that does not excuse him keeping Amora. I am almost positive that Noah is feeling Amora a whole alot more than she thinks. It's not just about payment from her father. Noah really likes her, hell he may even love her. I know Amora is no where near that realization yet and that's good. I do not want her to give up her fight. That being said I hope she isn't pregnant. I would HATE to bring a baby into this situation. Noah probably planned it, the bastard, lol! The thing that is so sucky about this is that I think Amora would genuinely want something with Noah if the circumstances were different. Oh well, we will see. Lovely update!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2015 09:15 pm

Title: Thirteen

Nooooo!!!! That was too short!!!!!! I'm left hanging on every word! 

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2015 08:53 pm

Title: Thirteen

I knew it! All that sex without protection was bound to make her preggars. I'm really scared, she'll try to run away again, and he'll keep her locked in the basement. Maybe it's time for Noah to open up so Amora can begin to feel something for him besides lust. I really love this story and can't wait to see what happens next. 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2015 05:53 pm

Title: Thirteen

OMG OMG OMG ! Is she pregnant !! I knew it had to happen bc the no condom thing was the first thin I noticed about their sex lol 😩.

Reviewer: Jesslove3205 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2015 05:01 pm

Title: Thirteen

Longer chapters please. Update soon!!!

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2015 04:50 pm

Title: Thirteen

Seems Noah got Amora pregnant intentionally. It also seems that she is developing some feeling for him. Can't wait to see how this continues to develop. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2015 04:35 pm

Title: Thirteen

oh man She's definatelty preggers but what will Noah do. My oppinion is over the moon because he already sees her as his & this is a way to tie her to him. Plus I think he did it intentional trying to get her pregger but what now. Cant wait to read your spin on it.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 21 2015 03:36 pm

Title: Thirteen

Most people hurt others, intentionally or unintentionally, because they have been hurt. People who have not received love, do not know how to give love or receive love. You learn what you live and you live what you learn. That's Noah's life. He does not know how to love Amora, although he loves her. He wants her to love him. 

He wants an heir/son. Every woman he has had was not what he wanted as a mother to his children. They were there as a convenance for his pleasure, so he wore condoms. But Amora, he sees her as someone permanent. Anyone willing to SACRIFICE their life for someone else (Amora for her dad) spoke volumes to him.  He saw the demonstration of what love would do for someone else. No one ever sacrificed anything for him. After seeing this quality in her, he knew she was the one he wanted to love and give him childre. He knew she would love their children and not abuse them.

So my thought is, he is going to be exstactic. That was his mission!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 21 2015 03:09 pm

Title: Thirteen

Noah is the one doing all the hurting! !  He allowed a father to sale is daughter  to clear a debt, hello Ramona Noah is not a boy scout by any stretch of the imagination. Noah will be happy about this pregnancy as it binds Amora to him for a lifetime. It will make him crazier than he already is and now he will never let her out of his sight. Is her father dead yet? If not he should be!! What exactly  did his family do to him that created the monster that is today?  Awesome sauce!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2015 02:44 pm

Title: Thirteen

He wants an heir!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 21 2015 02:43 pm

Title: Seven

I know I shouldn't laugh at her situation but she should've known she was going to get caught. I don't blame her for trying.

Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2015 05:34 am

Title: Twelve

This chapter was JUST what I needed this evening!!! Thank you for your update. This story keeps me on the edge of my seat  everytime!!! 

Reviewer: Tina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20 2015 04:20 am

Title: Twelve

Her behind is going to be pregnant with all of this sexing they doing without protection.  Is that Noah's plan?

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2015 01:49 am

Title: Twelve

Noah is not letting Amora go, she might as well let that pipe dream go.  Noah is catching feelings.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2015 01:48 am

Title: Twelve

I'm going to sound totally depraved, but I really hope she's pregnant. That way she can never leave him. I love the the hell out of this story!!!!!! Keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 11:46 pm

Title: Twelve

Wow!  That was hot! 🔥

I can see how she is confused with regard to her current position of wanting a man who would enslave her. This man is giving her the attention that no one ( not even her own father) never has. Great update!  I want to see where you're going to take this, so please update soon. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 11:05 pm

Title: Twelve

I get the feeling that Noah knew Amora before she knew who he was and he had become obessessed with her. I think he's in love and doesn't know how to express himself to tell her how he feels besides sexing her up. I think Amora is scared to fall in love with him because then she's afraid to love because of her irresponsible father. I have a feeling Amora is going to do soething crazy before she gives in to Noah. Love this story. 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 06:37 pm

Title: One

there are some folks who are dominant and seek a submissive to train. There are even some who don't know they are submissive, and then it isn't rape... That's why the writing, hella hot as it gets confuses me.



Author's Response:

This story is not for everyone. It's also not a story that fits into a certain category and has to be played out in a certain way, so I wish people would stop judging it as such. It's not real. It's simply a far fetched fantasy of mine. So if you don't like the way it's written, pls don't read it and most certainly please don't comment negatively.

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 05:21 pm



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