ya boy steve is wide open lol.... but does he even know what he wants? and can jodie even be a normal girlfriend? hell can steve? they both has problems they need to work on

and she killed herself!!! wow... i guess tammy had not a clue her daughter was giving her goodies away...but kirk's father was wrong for kicking him out..smh...he helped kirt become the monster he is..hell so did tammy and dawn dead butt

im sooooooo happy your back!!!!

This chapter is amazing we finally realized that Kirk was at one time a some what decent human being and his father is the main reason why he became the person that he is. Kirk father allow an unstable predator and offspring into their lives without vetting/background checking these people. But i still cannot feel sorry for Kirk, he had a choice not to become an asshole. Wonderful update Daugther and thank you.

I wasn't expecting that... At all. See i told you, you are always full of surprises Daughter And I love ya for that lol you ended it with a cliffhanger I need to know what happens it's getting really good. So please update pretty please. And even though Kirk is like probably the most hated character in the story his chapters are dark and interesting and I want to learn more about his twisted past. 

wow, she's something. 

It's been while since I commented but I enjoy this story it's very different and bizarre in a good way. Honestly I don't really know what to thnk of Kirk at this point. I mean I'm disgusted by him but then idk it's not sympathy that's for sure. I understand why he is the way that he is now do to his past but it still doesn't justify what he did to Jodi or any other innocent girl he violated. He was touched by someone older and who knew better and the fact that his dad didn't have his back was pretty awful but he still makes me sick.As for Lisa i hope nothing happens between them but reading your chapters you are full of surprises and twists. In the future I know you said your working on kirks past but are you going to do chapters from Steve's point of view?I'm little curious about him since he's been showing a different side in the last couple of chapters. Maybe I'm over analyzing lol but anyway good update. Oh wait one more question um are you majoring or did you major in psychology? because i don't know how you do it with these characters they seem very realistic and flawed as if they are based off real people. It's pretty cool how you developed all these characters. What's your technique? Ok I'm done babbling now and please update 

I misses this chapter. That ho ruined his life and then killed herself.  Dawn was older than Kirk so it was Dawn thay wrong all day everyday! ! Dawn wasn't his sister so it was nkt incest but it waa illefal since Kirk was underage when Dawn first molested him.  His father's abandoment is probably what turned Kirk evil.  His father chose his wife over his son and had tje nerve to say that he loved him.

Kirk is sexusl deviate and I hope that he didn't rape Lisa.  Were he and  Dawn caught sexing up and that is why he's in foster care?  I am so disgusted by Kirk and I can't wait for karma to catch up with him. He deserves the cancer diagnosis!  Was that wrong or harsh of me to say? More please!

I am interested to see where things go with her and Steve. I know you had said in the beginning that this is not a love story, but I think if she gets help to deal with what happened to her that she could begin to have normal, healthy relationships. I think that her and Steve could be cute together. I like that he's thinking about what a future could be like with her. I think they'd be good for each other.

Story seems very scattered. It doesn't seem to flow. 

Supreb chapter, As for Steve I do not know if he is capable of having a sincere long term relationship with Jodi. Jodi needs to deal with her abuse and I just not feeling warm cuddle feeling from that punk Steve.

SMH at Kirk, what a very sick individual.

Supreb, I wish Kirk would just die.