Reviews For Lonely
Title: Chapter 1

im so happy your coming back!! happy to hear all is better...this life is none stop i tell ya lol



Author's Response:

Thanks. It's great to be back.

Reviewer: mrs.mathis Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 07:14 pm

Title: Chapter 1

i fear your not coming back.... i check back almost 4 times a week too see if youve updated yet...well i cant say im not sad..but if you dont finish this story..much respect for sharing what you did post...i was ..still am a fan of your work..be blessed boo!!♥♥



Author's Response:

Thanks for your inquiry mrs. mathis,

I am working on my chapters now...sorry that it is taking so long-I have had some serious personal issues going on, but all is better now! :)

Reviewer: mrs.mathis Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2014 09:56 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Ok, where you at....I check 10 x a day for this story dancing with anticipation!!!!!!



Author's Response:

thanks, kyky2019,

It's coming...working on chapters! Thanks for your support! :)

Reviewer: Kyky2019 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 02:58 am

Title: Chapter 1

this is bombastic i've never had read such good bwwm story before. Gosh this is the shit i can't, it so enriching. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, omg!

More is coming soon... :)

Reviewer: omg Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2014 07:50 am

Title: Chapter 1

its funny how some people dog this story..yet continue to read it on the downlow??? this story kicks ass...and if some of us had the guts to be honest...our real life stories or messy too... jodie isnt perfect.. but hell the dick this chicks gets most of yall could only wish!!! yes she has issues..yes shes far from perfect but hell who is??? this story is real... not some fairy tale..grow the hell up..i want to say thank you to the author for having the balls to post this story and i hope she can ignore all the bullshit reviews dogging her out and update soon!!!! girl you have a gift..dont let the few on here who dont vibe with your style of writing stop you now!!! YOU GO GIRL!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the encouragement, mrs. mathis!

Reviewer: mrs.mathis Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 11:32 pm

Title: Chapter 52

Please tell me Kirk will get his karma. I am so happy for Jodi at this point it's seems maybe  this will start to bring her to seeking help.



Author's Response:

Yes, Karma = Kirk! Stay tuned...

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2014 03:53 am

Title: Chapter 52

Sorry but this story is just horrible, and all over the place.



Author's Response:

????

Reviewer: cullensjonas Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2014 01:44 am

Title: Chapter 52

ohhhh boy



Author's Response:

:)!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2014 10:05 pm

Title: Chapter 45

I'm enjoying your story and Jodi's journey. I don't think that you should compromise. I think a story like this takes time. I also like that you update frequently. I'm interested in what happens next in Jodi's journey as you've written it, not how others are trying to dictate that you write it.



Author's Response:

Thanks, dgreen1980! I appreciate your review regarding Jodi's journey and my writing style.

Stay tuned....

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 09:05 pm

Title: Chapter 52

Paranoid with guilt. You know what Eddie will eventually put two and two together and confront Jodi about why she had not kept in contact with Eddie, Josefina, and her friends for twenty years and as to why Kirk did not give a rat's ass about Jodi being gone at all. Eddie knows that something happened terribly between them two and he thinks that Kirk was the cause of Jodi's going MIA.

Jodi need to realize that she has to bring up what Kirk did to her to Eddie, so that Eddie can have a peace of mind to know that was the reason why Jodi left and maybe to convice her to seek help and also have a peace of mind to knock the F**K out of Kirk. Well...I want Eddie, Steve, Mitch, Matt, and Craig to be the crap out of Kirk.

If Eddie cannot connect the dots and if Jodi is not going to tell him what Kirk did, I believe that Kirk will do something to Jodi and either Eddie or Steve or both will barge in and beat Kirk too death.



Author's Response:

Hello, Luvrayne!

Thanks for the comments!

Reviewer: luvrayne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 05:31 am

Title: Chapter 52

So Eddie is finally catching a clue. The truth need to surface before that bastard try to kill Jodi. Supreb chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments, Bain! :)

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 12:58 am

Title: Chapter 52

Paraniod much Kirk?! Wow is he sick and very mental. I am glad that Eddie did not mention Jodi and he is beginning to think about Kirk, which is good now lets see if he can put two & two together.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments, d3stin2l0v3! :)

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 12:50 am

Title: Chapter 52

Eddie needs to kick Kirk's ass!  Because of Jodi's stupidity she allowed Kirk  separate her from her family.  Eddie is making connections in his  mind, I hope that confronts Jodi. So good!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments, pmgayles! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2014 10:53 pm

Title: Chapter 51

So he was himself abused and is perpetuating the cycle of abuse.....



Author's Response:

Yes, but this is still no excuse for him. He abused Jodi on his own free will.

Reviewer: bambi4real Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2014 02:14 pm

Title: Chapter 51

Okay, but that does not explain his warped mind and why he thought it was okay to continously rape Jodi at every given opportunity. Dawn asked for him to have sex with her Jodi did not. Kirk is still sick puppy and I hope Steve and Eddie find out and kick his assets!



Author's Response:

Yes, Eddie is very sick...no excuses! Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2014 01:07 am

Title: Chapter 51

I think you're confused on these time frames. Example after Jodi's dance she was looking through her phone to call someone.. No I'm 33 and Jodi is dwr than me. Nobody had cell phones just the really rich and even then you better remember the phone number in most cases. Unless it was 1999 or 2000 you would be better suited with a payphone reference. As for kirk... Jacking off using the internet..  Ha no. More like vhs or magazine. The dial up connection mid to late 90s we available to all but finding porn would have been a feat.... You really need to think that over.



Author's Response:

Hello, SunnySideDown,

Thanks for your reviews but I believe that you may not be up to date. When you brought the discrepancies to my attention regarding the pay phone, it took a week or 2 but I re-wrote the chapter to more befitting details - along with the one that described their clothing, etc.

 

As far as Kirk masturbating to the internet, that is present in other words now 2014! He was reading about the company to gather info for Eddie.

Read those chapters again when you have a moment. Please dont take offense but I  would like your feedback regarding the story it self rather than my bloopers LOL!

Thanks again :)

Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 10:56 pm

Title: Chapter 51

Kirk has been skank nasty since he waa a teenager. So was Dawn is sister or stepsister?  Dawn was sex offender herself! Just nasty!!



Author's Response:

stepsister

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 10:51 pm

Title: Chapter 51

Supreb chapter but, I still do not have pity for "Kirk"



Author's Response:

Thanks, Bain! Yes, don't have pity....

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 10:28 pm

Title: Chapter 50

Prostate cancer...can't say I saw that coming. Then again at his age that was a very real possibility. I would have thought he would have some sexually transmitted disease first though considering how prolific he was at a time when safe sex wasn't really the norm.

I hope Ed gets his protection duties right this time and doesn't allow his sister to push him out the door for her abuser to have free reign.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment, bambi4real! Yes, Kirk has a lot in store!

Reviewer: bambi4real Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 03:57 am

Title: Chapter 1

Oh yeah that dirty SOB is gonna die.... Either the cancer will take him slow and painful or Eddie is gonna beat the BRAKES off that dude. Hey and who knows maybe some of her new found FRIENDS will help dispose of the worthless corpse, oh the possibilities, yeah I know that's terrible I should feel bad about his cancer, but I do not. The end!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment, Kyky2019!

Yes, Kirk is a dirty SOB...more to come! :)

Reviewer: Kyky2019 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 02:19 am

Title: Chapter 50

Hello Daugther,

Loving this chapter because "Kirk" has prostate cancer. What a painful end for this person. Glad "Jodi and Eddie" are bonding, finally the truth will be known. As for the reviewer/reader with micro agressive tendency. If you cannot be pleasant walk away from the story.The author and readers can read between the lines and concern trolling is evident with your review. Keep on rocking "Daugther" enjoying your writing.



Author's Response:

Hi, Bain! Thanks for your review! Thanks to you and others I'm not letting the not so agreeable comments get to me anymore. Jodi's story has to be told and it's up to me to do it! :)

Thanks again for your encouragement!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 02:10 am

Title: Chapter 50

Krik is one sick puppy. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, d3stin2l0v3! He is sick!

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 02:00 am

Title: Chapter 50

How karmaific, Kirk who is cancer on sociefy has cancer. Please let his death be swift painful! Craig needs to meet her brothet ans explain some things. Eddie really loves Jodi and I hope that she lets him all the way in and tells him what Kirk did her.  I would love to see Eddie beat him dead! !



Author's Response:

I couldn't have said it any better, pmgayles! Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 01:45 am

Title: Chapter 49

I read this in one go and have to say that I had the dubious pleasure of reading all your author's notes in succession. I wanted to read this earlier but due to my schedule and the length of the story I felt I was too far behind to ever start. Having read it I have to say I really like the story. I think it has enough story line and sex scenes to statisfy erotica as I believe you are going for. The endless whining and supplication for reviews at the end of chapters though could be reduced. I find that people tend ot review when they have time and the mood takes them or something particularly powerful engages them in a chapter or storyline. You can not force it out of them otherwise you will get crap feedback.

The characterizations are great and I think that you ahve take the necesary time to develop each in their own right. I wouldn't speed up the story any because I think the flashbacks and self doubt scenes offer necessary insights. I don't like Kirk as I believe his character was intended to be skeazy and Steve I am still on the fence about. I didn't realize Jodi was 42 which puts all the characters in my opinion in midlife crisis range explaining their nigh schizophrenic behaviour. At times they appear like hormonal teenagers and others mature business people. Jodi has to be the most frustrating character for me though. I want to empathize with her but I feel she does bring a lot of her life's woe on herself. At so many points in her life people want to help her and she rejects that help to suffer in not quite silence. If she came from a broken or underprivileged home where she didn't understand her self worth or people did not care about her welbeing I could understand her reaction to Kirk's abuse and her continued silence even to the detriment of her relationship with her fiance and her family. I have a ningling feeling that Dan is the next one to take advantage of her because she will let him and wonder if it is her fate to be abused. She accepts her victimization she readily it is a bit disgusting. You almost want to slap her and tell her to man up!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments...You will often people in their 30s, 40s and 50s that behave like these characters. Midlife crisis? Probably, but it occurs nevertheless.

Their behavior, especially if they are single, may mirror what I have written in these chapters. A person who comes from money can have the same problems as someone without money.

I hope that I am not misinterpreting one of your comments, but emotional issues aren't based upon one's socioeconomic background.

Thanks again for taking time to...I want the readers to know that I like the interaction - if it's whining, then oh well! LOL!

 

Reviewer: bambi4real Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2014 12:47 pm

Title: Chapter 49

Loving it!



Author's Response:

Thanks, msmarymac!

Reviewer: msmarymac Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2014 04:28 pm



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