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Title: Chapter 43

I'll have what she's having.

Reviewer: Alle Xandra Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 10:22 am

Title: Chapter 43

Okay. Jodi is not well. Craig did set her up a bit but at the same time he was never overly friendly. Whatever the case, Jodi's reaction was ridiculous. They were friends and she literally just screwed it up. She could've left the situation with a bit more dignity. Jodi behaved as if she had borderline personality disorder. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!

Jodi and Craig's friendship will definitely be different.

Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 07:06 am

Title: Chapter 42

I am glad that Jodi resisted Steve's disgusting and disrespectful advances. He's a louse. Seriously. His behavior is not cute or funny. It's actually bewildering. He's acting as if he's shown genuine interest in her. He's not her boyfriend. He's certainly not endearing himself to her with his lewd demands. I'm happy Jodi did not play into his hands. 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 06:55 am

Title: Chapter 43

This chapter is sad within itself because maybe it is just me but Jodi was acting like Kirk with all of the manipulation and wanting to corrupt Craig because he was being too nice. She has MAJOR mood swings that makes me WTF? I like Craig, but I am disappointed that he gave into Jodi's manipulations KNOWING that she is not right in the head. However, I do have to applaud Craig for being the ONLY male to know that something is very wrong with Jodi, but how it turns out in the end...not so good. I am hoping that if these type of encounters between Craig and Jodi happens again, that Craig would put a stop to it and really get down to business on Jodi's problems because she really really needs help and I was THIS close to tears because I am actually seeing her going down a path that will destroy her. 

Before the sexual encounter, I find Jodi being a hypocrite because she is mad that Craig was getting "involved" with his ex-wife but did she just not get involved with Steve in the last chapter? Remember Steve was asking Jodi if she had sex with Craig and she said that it was none of his business and she could do anything she want because they are not in a relationship together, but that goes the same with Craig and SHE wants to get mad? Hell no, you can't have your cake and it too honey.

Even though it is a sad chapter, I really love it because it very real and raw. You are addressing the big elephant in the room that no one wants to touch base on. I am not the one who is going to call Jodi a whore at all and chicks like Jodi, who are victims of sexual abuse, take a long long time to get help. I know someone who is a little like Jodi and it was the most roughest time in my life because it wasn't easy to tell the person you love to get some help. I know what it is like to witness someone in Jodi's position going down in a spiral. Most of the times I want to reach out, shake her, hug her, and yell at her so I could tell her that she needs help and that I am saying this because I love her. It is just plain sad.

I know this long, and I am sorry about that. Maybe Jodi may tell Steve about what has happened to her, but I am having the feeling that Jodi will reveal it to Craig because he knows that something is not right with her.

Great Update!



Author's Response:

I am delighted that you reviewed this chapter. Please do not worry about the length. I enjoyed reading your perspective on this story. Yes, there are many persons out there like Jodi who  never  get the help needed in order to live a healthy full life.

Luvrayne, thanks again. I'm happy that you get the characters' psyche. I am very happy that you and others understand what I'm trying to say.

Reviewer: luvrayne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 04:53 am

Title: Chapter 43

Jodi's what the kids call a THOT and I don't understand what Steve see's in her anybody in their right mind would have quit her especially sense she's so vocal about spreading her legs for any man who looks at her.On second thought maybe Steve knows and that's why he treats her like street boot. Craig what an idiot you screw up your chance with your ex for someone you know is fucked up. 



Author's Response:

What is a THOT? LOL! Just curious!

Thanks so mcuh for the review, Kiavicmp!.

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 04:43 am

Title: Chapter 1

I have tried to read this story but I am done now. It appears that you are sacrificing the character of Jodi for in order to place her in sexual situations. This story jumped the shark a long time ago.



Author's Response:

You called my story s--- a while ago. Your point was taken then.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 04:22 am

Title: Chapter 43

Hello Daughter,

I was finally able to come back and read this story, wonderful writing. The reason I enjoy your writing because nothing is safe in regards with "Jodie" some of the readers have taken to calling this character a whore. The defintion of a whore is someone who trade sexual favors for money. As this character unfold we are watching a person mental and emotional well being shatter before our eyes. What you are writing is real life, with all the uglyness and horror that a victim of exteme sexual abuse is enduring. Some of the reviews of the story are written by holy rollers who lack compassion which I find disturbing. As the character of "Jodie" developed you have shown a level of writing that beg the indivdual to experience, so when the finally chapter is written by you the author. We can be left with sadness or triumph for Jodie. As for the male characters I has disdain for them, if they truly care about this woman they would step forward and question her behavior. Your writing has stir emotions and that speak to the talent of the author. Thank you.

 

 



Author's Response:

Wow...I am truly blown away by your review. Thank you so much for your compliment regarding my writing. It is so very much appreciated. Also thanks for your  insight regarding these characters.

I feel that it is very important for us to know why those around us behave the way that they do. There are valid reasons and my character, Jodi, is a prime example of it. Nothing should be taken at face value. That is my main reason for writing this story. Although some of the reviews hurt (someone referred to my story as s---), I want to unveil that awareness and emotions in the readers. I wish that I received more reviews. That way I know that my story is touching someone somehow.

Lastly, We have to learn to be more tolerant. Again, thanks, Bain!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 04:16 am

Title: Chapter 43

First thank you for the time and effort you put in updating. Jodi is a complex.  So is Jodi s behavior unacceptable to some readers because she is a woman? By the way is single and struggling with her demons. There are men who are super sexual and have demons sleep around but some see it as ok because they are men. Just a thought and I ll keep reading. Stay encouraged writing your story.



Author's Response:

Your words are very true, Pokerdiva! Jodi is a complex character and is very real. I have really had to dig deep in order to develop her. And yes, I feel that one reason that many readers have been hard on her is because society doesnt accept this type of behavior in women.

What we should ask ourselves is why? I feel that society needs more tolerance when it comes to these issues. This type of behavior isnt normal and should be questioned not condemned- just my opionion, though. :)

Thanks for your encouragement and your review.

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 04:09 am

Title: Chapter 43

Jodi is a easy slut and Craig is a disgusting pig!! 

Reviewer: anony Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 03:10 am

Title: Chapter 43

I don't care if some people are going to get angry with my comment, but seriously Jodi is acting like a whore. There is just no other way to put it. The only thing on her mind is sex. Craig is disgusting. He has a girlfriend and a son and yet he throws it all away for a quick fuck with a fucked up woman like Jodi? I don't care about Jodi's past. That is still not an excuse for her to want to sleep with every hot guy who talks to her. 

 

I also noticed that as the story go on, the more I dislike Jodi. I also wonder if this story will ever have a change. Or rather if Jodi will start to finally grow up a little and realize that she needs to keep her legs close for a while and seek help to help her face her past so she can move on. As of now its still the same thing. Jodi and her always being horny and wanting to have sex. Or guys who are all attracted to her. Nothing new, or exciting is happening. Like seriously its chapter 43 and still nothing.

Reviewer: grazylisa Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 03:08 am

Title: Chapter 43

Yet he still had sex with Jodi.  Jodi hss truly made me dislike even more in this chapter,  her behavior  was atrocious. Craig didn't deserve her misplaced anger and aggression.  Jodi disgust me, no empathy for Jodi what-so-ever!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, PMGayles!

You're right. There was no excuse for Jodi's behavior.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 02:58 am

Title: Chapter 43

Yes, I'm done with Jodi, and I'm done with this story.This is chapter 43,and there is absolutely no progress, no changes. Jody is still the same horny slut, who wants to fuck every guy who as much as give her a little attention. Steve should stop wasting his time with her, and Craig should leave her ass and put a stop at their "friendship". Craig is a weak ass who fell in her trap. His girlfriend should leave him.Ruining his chance of having a stable relationship and forming a family for a quick fuck with a easy and loose woman like Jodi?? Its not worth it. She is not worth it. It clearly showed that Jodi has no moral or respect.The being a "rape victim" is not an excuse to such a behavior anymore. Jodi is the way she is because she wants to. But it's what ever. I'm done with this story. I wish you the best in continuing your story. But I'm getting tired of Jodi and her whorish ways. From the start till  now, its same the same thing.  

 

Good Luck.

Reviewer: Daisy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 02:57 am

Title: Chapter 43

I get that Jodi is messed up. I am starting to wonder why Steve keeps wasting his time. I am also disappointed that Craig fell for her schemes. I still love this story and am looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, SweetCoco, and for sticking with this story.

Reviewer: SweetCoCo76 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 02:19 am

Title: Chapter 43

43 chapters and she still the same. Well at least Craig knows she's fucked up.



Author's Response:

Kvm, thanks for the review!

Yes, Craig, seems to be the only one that realizes Jodi is unstable!

Reviewer: kvm Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 01:36 am

Title: Chapter 43

Inconsistencies are becoming glaring, she has taken out her panty and gave it to Craig upon entering threshold yet she is rubbing her panty clad clit???  Crouch should have been crotch.  But alas finally somebody verbalized "there is something wrong" with Jodi.



Author's Response:

Thanks for help with the errors. I don't know if they are glaring, but thanks all the same - to have  3 or 4 errors within 43 chapters is good in my opinion...

Anyway I do appreciate your help.

Reviewer: Agape Realms Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 01:16 am

Title: Chapter 42

Why does Steve have to be so Hot!!! He's so damn exciting and I can't help but love a dominant man. I hope she does meet up with him, and hopefully he's telling the truth about Craig. Ok so Jodi's boss is out of his mind; It is completely unprofessional to accuse Jodi of sleeping with his son, I know somehow that's sexual harassment. And if I were Jodi I would be looking for a knew job pronto after that asshole basically said he would be watching her like a hawk. No one should ever be that uncomfortable in their career, what a dick. Nice chap UD soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Raptusmind!

Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 31 2014 07:05 am

Title: Chapter 13

I knew some way he would end up at her office.  I'm hooked and I can't stop reading...thank God tomorrow is Saturday!!



Author's Response:

Continue to enjoy and dont forget to review!

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 31 2014 05:28 am

Title: Chapter 42

Jodi is still in denial about her feelings for Steve,  team Steve!!  Jodi needs help why can't she sww that can't heal herself?  Craig deserves better!!  Steve needs to come correct Jodi believes that you only want her for sex. Your treatment of her sends that message.   Jodi is stupid so you will uavw talk slow and enunciate each syllable for her Steve.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2014 04:19 am

Title: Chapter 41

Jodi needs a new therapist. All that talk about the past is not helping Jodi. Jodi needs a therapist who is going to focus on CBT (cognitive behavioral therapy). Therapists have different outlooks and philosophies about therapy. Some focus on the past and some focus on the future. Jodi must find one to help her with her current situation and future. Jodi probably needs to see a psychiatrist also. It sounds as if she has PTSD or something. The way she falls into a stupor of memories and feelings is not normal. She definitely needs to switch therapists and a psychiatrist.

Too bad that creep Dan isn't moving out too.

 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2014 12:30 pm

Title: Chapter 41

creepy ass Dan haha

Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2014 04:08 am

Title: Chapter 41

Jodi is stuck in stupid and glued to dumb! Does not realize that she will never have the life she wants until she deals with her past?  Jodi makes it hard to sympathize with her.  Thank you for the update!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2014 03:34 am

Title: Chapter 1

It's amazing how you can give so much of yourself sexually and stil be lonely so deep down.

Jodi has had the kind of sex I dream about but don't quite have the nerve to pursue.

Author's Response:

thanks for your comment.

Reviewer: readwonderfully Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2014 03:45 am

Title: Chapter 1

Those headaches are not going to leave Jodi anytime soon and that has me concerned. She seriously needs to go to ANOTHER therapist who will help her see through all of this. Disagreeing with the comment below, I feel the flashbacks are a major part in the story right now. Jodi is a 40+ year old woman and the reader needs to know details from childhood to now. Thats a lot of years hence a lot of flashbacks. ;;; I like Kevin as of now because he had true intentions for my Girl even though he thinks with his little head. Can't wait for the next chapter.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your insight.

Reviewer: Alle Xandra Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2014 06:35 am

Title: Chapter 40

First of all that quack she called a therapists needs to loose their license to practice. She needs to deal with what Kirk had done to her. Kevin is like any guy who wants a girl and will do anything to keep her. Jodi needs to grow up. She needs to talk to someone about her issues, stop have sex with Steve and leave Craig alone until she can get her stuff together.  I thought she was 45?



Author's Response:

Jodi is 42, Craig is 45.

 Unfortunately the old adage that states "age is just a number" can be true in many cases. Sometimes we learn wisdom from the mistakes that we make along the way.

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2014 04:08 am

Title: Chapter 26

Ooooo, I wish I where there to kick Kirk in the balls and rip off his dick. I really hate guys like that. He is a rapist and a child molestor. 

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2014 05:01 pm



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