Reviews For Lonely
Title: Chapter 66

Dan? Hero to kick Kirk's ass?



Author's Response:

 

LOL! Thanks for your review!

 

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2014 08:42 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Where are u? Are you going to update anytime soon?



Author's Response:

LOL! give me a day or two!

Reviewer: mochagirl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 30 2014 08:15 pm

Title: Chapter 65

wow...it makes you wonder how many women have gone through this and told nobody at all...its sad..thats why I tell my daughter to never be afraid to tell if anybody did somrthing to you..because when you dont...you just gave that person another chance to hurt somebody else...thank you for the awesome update! so happy your keeping the story on the chamber 

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Author's Response:

Yes...you are so right. These types of secrets weaken the "victim" (I'm only using this word for lack of a better term at the moment) and strengthen the perpetrator.

Thanks for sticking with me , Anonymous

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2014 04:24 pm

Title: Chapter 65

wow...it makes you wonder how many women have gone through this and told nobody at all...its sad..thats why I tell my daughter to never be afraid to tell if anybody did somrthing to you..because when you dont...you just gave that person another chance to hurt somebody else...thank you for the awesome update! so happy your keeping the story on the chamber 

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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2014 04:23 pm

Title: Chapter 65

Interesting more please! 



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LOL!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 19 2014 12:53 am

Title: Chapter 65

Interesting more please! 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 19 2014 12:53 am

Title: Chapter 65

this while sorry has really stressed me out. I mean I think you've portrayed the main topic of abuser correctly, however I do think it's been drawn out for too long, and that causes people to discontinue readying because it feels like there's no en in sight or any hope.



Author's Response:

I won't rush the ending. It will make it unrealistic. I don't want to cheapen the story and most of all the characters

Reviewer: chatty504 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 19 2014 12:30 am

Title: More Characters...Younger Years

Yeah Baby!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2014 12:01 am

Title: Chapter 27

I don't get what is up with this Dan guy!!! He needs to back up!!



Author's Response:

LOL!

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2014 03:01 pm

Title: Chapter 65

Why doesn't Jodi see that she still needs therapy?   Kevin was an asshole and should be beaten to death!!



Author's Response:

Yep!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2014 12:57 am

Title: Chapter 65

Poor Jodi!! No wonder she has so many issues. I hope she goes back to therapy so she can heal. And I hope Steve is the one who is there for her and the one who kicks Kirk's ass!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2014 10:15 pm

Title: Chapter 64

I really Kirk dead sooner rather than later!!  Jodi is about to fall apart soon but at least she is with het family. Hopefully their love willkeep her steady.



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Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2014 02:59 am

Title: Chapter 64

Are you going into Jodi's sessions w Dr. Townsend? I am curious about what happened ther. I so love this story. 



Author's Response:

Refer to Chapter 41...there is a paragraph near the end regarding Dr. Townsend.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2014 01:58 am

Title: Chapter 64

Stupid Beth and Sicko Kirk! What a couple! She will be so crushed to find out that he is only using her to get to Jodi or will she? I see the cancer is not slowing him down one bit.

The Dr., what's is story really, from what I have read of him in the past, he is not a very good Dr. at least not a what he does.



Author's Response:

Refer to chapter 41 regarding Dr. Townsend...it isnt his fault that Jodi's therapy didnt work.

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2014 12:30 am

Title: Chapter 64

I hope the next chapter is of Kirk's death. Slow and painful death. He makes my skin crawl, I can't remember the last time a character made me so ill.



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Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2014 10:44 pm

Title: Chapter 63

Finally I'm caught up!!! What a wonderful well written story!! I mean the abusive parts are harsh but that's what makes the story more real? Anywho I'm excited to see where this leads! Fantastic job!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, PetitteBelle, for following Jodi's lonely saga.

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2014 08:23 am

Title: Chapter 1

You and these cliff hangers!!!!You have left me shocked, mad as hell, happy and hungry for more!! You are amazing and crazy talented. I'm soooo ready to see what happens with everyone and see Kirk once and for all get his because I know your going to make it good :)  Thank you for sharing your gift with us.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your comment!

Reviewer: Chocolate Goddess Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 03 2014 12:20 am

Title: Chapter 63

I changed my mind. I want Eddie and Steve and maybe Matt too to stomp him until he's grease spot!!



Author's Response:

LOL! But wouldnt that mess up their shoes?

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2014 01:35 pm

Title: Chapter 63

Kirk gets more depraved, evil, and vile as this story progresses. Kirk needs to be stomped to death! ! Is it wrong go want Kirk dead? Thank you!!



Author's Response:

Kirk is sick and beyond help - his existence unfortunately only makes others miserable...

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2014 05:29 am

Title: Chapter 63

OH NOOOOOO! BEEEEETH! As I was reading this, I cannot help but cover my mouth to know that he was looking and talking to Beth...OMG! I just...he needs to go away like forever.



Author's Response:

 Beth is a close link to Jodi - he only sees her as a means to an end!

Reviewer: luvrayne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2014 04:57 am

Title: Chapter 63

Krik is disgusting.  I hope he doesn't get to Jodi.



Author's Response:

:) - yes, he's beyond saving!

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2014 03:54 am

Title: Chapter 62

Daughter, I don't know you personally but from reading this story and specifically this chapter I can tell you are truly and genuinely a kind person. Thank you for this update. I was hurt when I heard about what happened to Michael Brown.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment, Heartless808!

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 10:43 pm

Title: Chapter 62

thank you for sharing!



Author's Response:

You're welcome, mrs. mathis :)

Reviewer: mrs.mathis Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 07:29 pm

Title: Chapter 62

While I enjoyed this chapter, I beg you to please get back to the story. I want Kirk to die a slow agonizing death! I also want Jodi to pick Steve.  I like their chemistry. 



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 04:37 pm

Title: Chapter 62

I give this chapter the two thumbs up the PMG rating!!  Ferguson and the family of Michael Brown are not from my thoughts either.   I am glad that Jodi feels more psychologically cohesive since she has been home. I want her to realize the she needs help and the seek therapy again. Where is that evil asshole Kirk? I want Eddie to beat him for stealing his sister's life!!  Good stuff!!



Author's Response:

thanks, pmgayles!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 02:51 pm



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