yes, I can see these guys as these characters.

I just wanna say holy sh*t the characters are perfect! And is that Henry cavil as Matt omg he is too fine! And omg Steve is really handsome I know that celebrity but I forgot his name lol I knew the men in the story were good looking but they are extremely attractive lmao  and I think Jodi  is gorgeous daughter you really put thought into who you chose as your characters and you got taste girl. I wasn't expecting for you to post cast pics since it's been so many chapters but Im glad you did. As for Kirk honestly I thought he was gonna be ugly but you surprised me again hahaha I still don't like him even if he is decent looking though. But yea keep up the good work

I love the character pics!!  Good job!! More story please!!! 

Forget Them, Girl! This story is 7x better than 50 Shades of Gray! This story is the FIYA!!!! So forget all that I am going to follow you to whatever site you post on!!! 

Forget Them, Girl! This story is 7x better than 50 Shades of Gray! This story is the FIYA!!!! So forget all that I am going to follow you to whatever site you post on!!! 

Delicious!

This story is sooo WOW!!!

Ok so I have passed this story so many times. I even read the first chapter but no further because I found Jodi and Steven's first encounter unbelievable. I got past all of that and I want to say having read all you've written.... INCREDIBLE!!!! I love it. Please continue and side note- Kirk needs to die today!! Not six months from now!!! And Jodi needs to fess up to Eddie and Josefina. Ok I'm done. Please continue. This is a good story very in depth. 

that fool is crazy..... omg.... his theme song should be these hoes aint loyal lol..... but when jodi sees him she is going to freak out! but since shes older..will she fight back? cant wait to find out!

I knew it! He does not care about Jodi at all because he is one sick individual. As I was reading Kirk's past and his involvement with Lisa, I was asking myself "Is he picturing Jodi as Lisa the whole time and that's why he did all that horrible things to Jodi?" Kirk, I am here to tell you this...LISA GONE! SHE GONE! And just because you can do all that choking, butt plugging, covering the mouth, and all that crazy crap does not mean that it works for poor Jodi and she is NOT Lisa. I am wondering what would happen if Lisa showed up? Hmm.

I mean it all makes sense now because he has come from a broken home, and he doesn't even care that he broke the home of not just Jodi but Eddie as well. It is terrible of what he has gone through because he should not have to go throught that. His father should know better because he KNEW that his wife's daughter is messed up and did not save his son and the fact that he does not want to spend time with Kirk just blows my mind. However, it does not excuse his behavior whatsoever.

With Kirk and Lisa, nothing but a rebound to Lisa. She wanted to get laid and there was Kirk; and he got his feeling caught up and fell in love with her. However, he was disappointed that Lisa was married to Lawerence and has his hatred for women until Jodi showed and Jodi reminded him of Lisa and that was why he want to keep Jodi all to himself because her goodies is the same exact goodies that Lisa had but the difference was that he raped Jodi, not Lisa. He needs to get a grip. JODI DOES NOT WANT YOU KIRK! FACE REALITY!

Either he needs to be killed or in jail because he is just so...YUCK! Good job on this update.

It's getting more and more interesting !! Lisa is indeed trouble, but I can't help but want to know more with the Lawrence mystery. Kirk is better off without his sorry excuse of a father. I hope he keeps this in mind and never beat himself later for being abandonned. The Restons are really good people, they were meant to be parents. All these events really make me regret that Kirk will be a pedo later, to the point that (if I can confess) I think Kirk needs help. Maybe (I said MAYBE!) if Jodi had revealed everything to her family in her youth, Kirk could have been arrested, imprisoned but with appropriate help and saved him in doing so. But I keep in mind that Jodi is the victim here and when something so dramatic happens, everybody reacts differently....Ah, Daughter, Daughter... smh. You really did a job here. I can't wait for the next chap to be surprised again!!

definitely didn't see the lawrence twist coming. and you asked a few chs back about how we felt about the steven turn around.....it was pretty weak in my opinion. the only reason his and her dynamic is interesting to me is because he is such an alpha non self doubting loving douche. once he goes all sincere and caring he looses a little something for me and the romance just becomes vanilla not as exciting or taboo as it started out. Perphaps that was your intention to mature it and move it on from lust so then you are doing a good job but I was reading because of the rawness of their passion not for tame romantic love scenes.